लेखन Article: दिल of the soilder

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posted by delta117

i awoke pain everywhere it felt like my skin was melting but yet i did not scream traing kicked in and i found my black armoar to any normal sentient bieng it would be like an anchor but i am not normal am i after that i grabbed my weapons the first was a set of 2 curved assian knifes curved and made for my hands सेकंड standard ar राइफल it had no scope only sights all i needed to kill at 100 yards third a shotgun normal used in swat teams tactical 12 guage shot gun पंप action forth 44mm glock i holousterd it and my knifes my knifes at arm length pistol on my hip then an explosion rocked my cell and soilders poured in i dispathed them with my a.r 5 dead hundreds to go i stepped outr my cell through the hole my enemy s made my radio head set in my हेलमेट crackled to life " mac come in mack this is alpha team we are in poisition" i paused looked for any और targets and replied " copy that alpha team this is mac i am on my way any word frombeta या omega?" " beta's in poistion no word from alpha but stats says they're alive alpha team out" good know i could get my three teams out of this base and get back to the HQ. down a carfully polished corridor i searched for the enemy no sighn it was eerily quiet the only noises were the sound of my boots hitting thewaxed floor and my silent controled breathing that was bad.after three floors up i found some action i had switched to my shotgun for close combat. two teams of well trained soilders 2 sets of बंदूकों aimed at my head 2 easy. each team consitsted of five soilders so there wetre tenguns pointed at me i had a small windo w of 3 मिनटों to kill them या they would have help so i targetetd the first team i shot two of them dead an injured one there i shot the injurd one and got knocked on my back द्वारा a smg i lifted my pistol up as i fell and shot my shooter in his face he crumpled to the ground then the other was stuned a how i had killed his theam in four सेकंड्स i keep time on this stuff then i knocked him in the neck with the handel of my gun and he fell to the groungd he had a broken thacea and larenix instant death i reholstered my pistol and and picked up an anti-personal fragmentatin grenade from a dead soilderpulled the pin and threw it at team 2 it landed in the center and blosumed into a firey फूल of shrapnel i pulled my pisol back out and checked the bodies one injure d1 shot in the head changed that all others dead in 7 सेकंड्स i was good

Bibelot and Cullen-fan like this

Cullen-fan That was really good do you write alot?

harold This was a little hard to read at first, since there was hardly any punctuation at all, but by the end I was getting into it more. You might play with verb tense a bit more if you are going for the stream-of-consciousness writing; present tense and 1st person perspective work well together, particularly if you intend to spell words phonetically because the character wouldn't know any better. A good example of this (in my opinion) is the novel [u]Feersum Endjin[/u] - large parts are written in first person, present tense, from the perspective of a warrior who spells everything phonetically. I think moving into present tense would make the other stuff seem more intentional. I'm interested to see more, and particularly curious about the cause of the pain he feels in the beginning. I also like the humorous bits, like the aside "i keep time on this stuff" in the middle of the fight. Some suggestions: proofread after taking a break from writing the piece, so that you can view it with fresh eyes. The spelling may be intentional, and it works, but the words blending together "soilderpulled", "tenguns", "thewaxed" don't work as well for me. Also, you should check which team is talking to which team: "no word from alpha but stats says they're alive alpha team out" Whether or not you decide to switch it to present tense, it's got a lot of energy and it flows quickly. I'm interested to see where you go with it.

100 Candles

posted by teamphantom

I’ll never forget the दिन I had encountered a ghosts with my best friends. And I will be happy to share that story with you.
It was August 20th exactly one week before the start of middle school. My best friend Alex and I sat outside on the curb and ate our half melted स्ट्रॉबेरी, स्ट्राबेरी ice cream on a cone. It must’ve been 95 degrees outside because we could feel our sweet dripping off our faces. We didn’t say much because the calefaction made us not want to be social. We sat there in silence and licked our ice cream.
“What do आप think middle school will be like, Collin?” Alex broke the...

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Peaceful composition

added by harold

Source: Brigham Young विश्वविद्यालय

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Into The Ocean

posted by RainSoul

What do आप do when the gray waves roll over your head, and your body is too weak to swim ashore. Do आप panic and scream and try anyway to break the surface of the water? Do आप silently cry and pray and tell your loved ones आप प्यार them one और time. या because आप know it's futile to fight प्रस्तुत करे to the lulling cold darkness चुंबन at your eyelids? Do आप let the salty seawater drain into your lungs and choke to death's waiting arms?

Or do आप float to the surface and wait for the storm to pass and sunlight to pierce your shivering mass of a body?.. आप choose wisely.. आप wake up in a...

Monologue

posted by xoxpoisonxox

This is a Monolouge I wrote a little while पूर्व for drama class. We had to write a dramatic one. So this monologue is about a girl who is talking to her therapist about a हाल का event with her friend.

Tell me what आप think!

My mother says आप can help me - Help me make sense of it. I don't beilive in therapists - But I guess ill .....0give it a try..

You know, Some say suicide is the most selfish act one person can make.. I used to think this too. But now it doesn't make sense to me how the most selfless, kind , person I know - knew- could be labled as selfish..

How long have I known her? Well...

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Let's play What's The Word? game

posted by ZekiYuro

Here are the definitions of the words.Read and guess what they are before पढ़ना the right जवाब I write below.

1.It's a person who works in a restaurant,takes the खाना from the रसोई, रसोईघर to the tables.
2.It's a place where आप go when आप want to buy something.It's a very big खरीडिए where आप can buy anything.
3.It's a thing which आप use to talk.It's a kind of machine,it's very small and nearly everybody has one nowadays.
4.It's an adjective.It's the opposite of fat,but means thin and acttractive.
5.It's an adjective again.It's how आप feel when आप have a lot of things to do but आप don't have...

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Character Names!!!!

posted by breebree446

To think, most of my character names come from a thrift store baby book!

Baby Name Books!

My #1 resource is the baby name book I bought from a thrift store. It's a lifesaver! Not only does it have over 5,000 names but origins, boy and girl names, and alternate spelling. But, if आप can't get a hold of a baby name book there's always...

Name Websites!

Just as good and pretty much the same thing. They have access to millions of names online! One website I find really useful;

link
link - Thanks ellie_bellie135^^

Symbolic Names!

Often, writers give thier characters a name that has a certain meaning. For instance, one of my characters is named Roni. Which is short for Veronica....

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कुत्ता

posted by Spotty_Vision21

I shouldn’t have shot the dog. I definitely shouldn’t have shot the dog. Even if he did chew upon my prized drumsticks, and feast upon my freshly-baked brownies. The little white-and-brown terror, Mickey, belonged to my neighbor. My neighbor, an 87-year-old chain-smoker named Mary, rarely left the confines of her living room. She sat, दिन in and दिन out, as her precious mutts wreaked havoc about the neighborhood.
You can see it! My house, the little beasts have chewed upon everything their gnashing, tiny, sharp little teeth could find. I did my best to keep them out, but the little bastards...

Too Soon For The End (4)

posted by fanfangirlfan

As I try to think of something, anything to say to him now, I recall the first time I saw Sam outside of school.
It was about a साल ago. Tyler was at my house playing with Jen. It was late and they both needed to be put to bed. Their tiredness only resulted in them fighting. I eventually put them on time-outs until Tyler’s uncle showed up. या I thought it would be his uncle. It turned out to be Sam. I opened the door when he knocked and was a little thrown to see him. I recognized him from school, but only as the quiet boy I’d never talked to. His hair was wet as if he’d just showered...

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Teens of Warfare

posted by Hades332

SURGE

Surge, a moderately tall teenager wearing an open red shirt, stood in the middle of what was once New York’s Time Square. At first, second, and possibly even third glance Surge did not look like the kind आप would want to have a conversation with. He had a strange looking tattoo that adorned his chest like a necklace. His muscles were toned, and his hair was an unkempt blonde. None of this was what would have frightened someone though. What frightened people were the claws strapped to his wrists. They came to sharp, slightly curved, points that dripped with blood.
Surge stood now amongst...

Coach

posted by StarsGoBlue

Coach

Chapter 1: From a तालिका, टेबल Away

Kids, आप know your Uncle Barney; Scotch, money and women. Those three words pretty much summed up his life. He couldn't ask for a better life. Little did he know, he was about to get a rude awakening. आप see, he had grown accustomed to this cycle, a carousel, if आप will. It spun round and round until his life was completely changed by..."The Coach".

An unforgiving canopy of charcoal clouds hung above New York. They seemed detrimental; yearning to release their stockhold of transparent liquid. Rain. That's all it had done for the past week, rain. It...

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My Gift

posted by Kachetes

Rain pour hard outside the sound made me want to stay in बिस्तर hmmm I turn to my side and moan
“mom,daaaaaad”my eye start to water my body gave a little shake as if I was cold when I was pretty sweaty with my four blankets on me
“what ?”dad yelled mom turned on the light she rushed to put her hand on my cheek
“whats wrong?"her tone was tired I almost felt bad for waking her up but
“mom I feel sick”my voice sounded just right weak and paimed
“hmmm”after an घंटा of nonstop सवालों and अभिनय on my part mom let me in peace
“we`ll be at work while jr. is going to be at school and...

New story ^^ can आप help me with the title?

posted by Angelcatz11

Unexpectedly Jada Larkson found herself on the floor sprawled out like someone who just got shot. She tiredly looked around and sighed. She moved to the side and got up.
she then walked over to her dresser and took out her messy pigtails, then her hair was worse, It stuck out in all directions. She grabbed a brush and moved it through her
silky black curls. She tiredly grabbed her classes and stuck them on her pale freckled face. Then she opened her draw and grabed something random. once she was dressed she
noticed the time 7:55 AM...She slept through the first hour-AGIAN
She quickly put toghter...

cold blooded part1 in the beginning

posted by emoarrow

I remember the दिन of September “Mommy Daddy” when my mom and dad and I were walking in a pitch-black dark hallway. I heard screams, crying, shouts my Mom told me there are things in this world we wont understand. She was right I had no clue what was going on here only god did.

My Dad took off his locket that my Mom gave to him he placed it around my neck and let go I felt the cold golden chain around my neck I looked down. At the golden and silver locket I gently held the locket in my hand I pressed a button and it opened up. There I saw a picture of my Mom on the left side and a picture...

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Time's Up...

posted by Buddy8fnj

I looked at my watch, two hours left. The whispers in my head gradually getting louder...I had to get there, I had to try. I walked आगे into the shack and was immediatly terrified, written in blood all over the walls was "Time's almost up" over and over again, the whispers in my head starting to get louder, and there was a soft humming sound behind it all. I screamed out in confusion, overwhelmed. Then one whisper in my head was finally distinctable, it whispered "don't even try, fool" I tried to ignore it, and looked around the shack for some way, any way to get to get rid of my burden....

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I have no idea (still lol)

posted by I_DONT-KNOW

So this is part 2 i hope आप enjoy!

Alexis sat on the घास chewing happily on her sandwich, listening to the chatter that was going on around her. Elyon was kneeling not far from her laughing at one of Astrids crude jokes (again), Lily was talking to Rose about some boy in the class above them.Alexis's mind wandered to the time when she was able to talk to the girls and have fun. Like a normall teenager. She closed her eyes, breifly, letting the memories of her past overflow.

A group od girls sat on a large bed, in a large room. Laughing and gossiping. Alexis was there laughing too.The image...

प्यार is a legend

posted by mona_me

what a stupid! love! love! love! "i प्यार love" "everybody needs to be a lover" "true love" all those stupid words! "bla bla bla"
प्यार is a legend, there's nothing u can call it "love" , आप can't even define it. आप know why? because it isn't there! that's why आप can't say i am in प्यार and say the same word after two years या two days.
आप see, if it worked with your lover, आप 'll say आप loved each other, and if it didn't work, you'll say it wasn't love!!!
आप are all stupid, lovers!
आप aren't even "lovers"
because "lovers" is a word from "love" and love's a legend.
when i heard this once when i was young, i didn't believe it.
but know i believe it's the truth, and there's nothing else truth.
आप may not believe me now, but आप will, in few years in your life.
प्यार is a legend.

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An Unforgetable Place-Part 2

posted by rAsberrStrarS

Taylors strong and muscular tonned shape made him an ultimate तारा, स्टार in his football career.So it was'nt a suprise that i was craddled to that chest know,as he examined me.
'Taylor,seriously i really don't know how i fell, i must have caught my foot on a loose root या something.you know what i'm like'I spoke as softly as i could with my injuries.
Taylor did know what i was like,most definetly, thats how we met-with me being accident prone.It had been a close call,the first दिन of school. When Taylor caught me before i tumbled my way down the first hundred steps of our school, outside reception....

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प्यार Kills chapter 11

posted by hannah_vampire

Thanks for all the टिप्पणियाँ plz keep commenting :) this is a long one

I had not been to school for two weeks, had not seen Damon and his family for ages, It was like a prison here and i couldn't get out द्वारा myself it was always Sefo follow her studpie mutt.

The whole दिन I was followed द्वारा 9.00pm ' हे i'm kinda tried so I'm gonna go to ur bed' OMG would Oni ever get his son away from me ' Sefo Im getting changed unless आप wanna stay and get hit the the head i suggest आप leave' He turned and walked out thank goddness, Now Time to go out the window. I got out of the window and started to run Damon...

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Heartbreak

posted by thirteen_times

There he is just standing there, starring at आप with कुत्ते का बच्चा, पिल्ला dog eyes. He smiles briefly at आप breaking your heart. It’s all too much so आप so आप slam the door. Before the door shuts he sticks his foot in the door way stopping it.
“I just want to talk.”
“There’s nothing to talk about.” आप lie. आप don’t want to hear him apologize या even see him. What he did hurt आप like nothing else could, still आप knew that आप loved him and आप दिल ached for him. आप wish आप could turn back time to when आप both were happy but आप know that what’s done is done.
“How about us…”...

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Gods: Chapter 8: Games

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

At lunch I went over and sat अगला to Liz, she looked up at me and smiled. “So, you’re talking to me” I said, I opened my can and took a sip out. “Yeah, I forgive you” she said, and then she turned and looked at Adam. “Is that why?” I कहा nodding at Adam. She smiled at me, and giggled. “He’s happy” The word shocked me as they came out of her mouth; I had forgotten that Adam was as Liz tells me ‘unhappy’. I gave her a light smile, I had made him happy. When the घंटी, बेल went it frightened me I was too लॉस्ट in my thoughts to even care about being late, so for a while I just...