Bullied या great फ्रेंड्स at school?

So I'm between two story ideas...

Number 1: This sixteen साल old kid gets bullied for being "emo". Like severely bullied. Insults about suicide and cutting. Beaten up. Stuff like that. And my character saves him from suicide when he finally decides to commit it. We're both bullied from suicide insults, cutting, hanging insults. But we're there for each other.

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Number 2: I'm at my regular school for behavioral issues and all. Max comes to my school because of his behavioral issues to the bullies. (He wasn't THAT bullied, but it still got to him.) We meet as I'm still with my boyfriend. (My boyfriend's perfect, okay? He has flaws, but still. I'm just लेखन about the boy with no flaws. I'm bored, kay?) And he treats me with और attention. And all.

So which idea?

Oh, and I know this picture is from "Knives and Pens" द्वारा Black Veil Brides. I'm not stupid.

I'd use that for the first idea, obviously...
 Bullied या great फ्रेंड्स at school?
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Amaliex said:
Since there are alot of "emo" stories out there, i think #2
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True. Now thinking about it, #2 will be easier to write. Thank you.(:
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Np! Remember, आप can always merge the two together somehow :)
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LaDispute said:
First one is cliche/boring af. I'd go with 2.
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Thanks.(:
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saba1234 said:
The सेकंड story line sounds good, a good story needs to be based on a subject your familiar with, and good research. I find that carrying a pen and small लेखन pad around in my bag या pocket helps,you never know when आप may have an inspirational moment, आप could be travelling या in the park या at school या even on the bus and आप could over hear an interesting conversation(don't make it obvious your eaves dropping) and आप could jot it down, या आप may see an interesting looking person who's विवरण आप could write down, and all this information could come in use for a future story.
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 The सेकंड story line sounds good, a good story needs to be based on a subject your familiar with, and good research. I find that carrying a pen and small लेखन pad around in my bag या pocket helps,you never know when आप may have an inspirational moment, आप could be travelling या in the park या at school या even on the bus and आप could over hear an interesting conversation(don't make it obvious your eaves dropping) and आप could jot it down, या आप may see an interesting looking person who's विवरण आप could write down, and all this information could come in use for a future story.
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OMGZoey said:
I like number two :)
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