I need some serious help!

Ok so I am going to try and answer this as best i can (its a hard Q.)....

So usually in लेखन levels connect, something that happens seemingly meaningless at the start of the story comes back at the end या middle. If आप try and find the layers that connect आप can cut them (2 या more) out without rupturing the story line.

Planning might also help. If आप plan the layers at the start then आप don't get the end and have to (try) cut something out. If आप plan the layers at the beginning then आप also don't have the chance of adding और in from the original idea.

Hope this helps....

Hm, this is a complicated question, because आप would go about it differently for each story. Since I don't know anything about your story, I can't give आप specific examples.

Sit down and look at what आप have, and I mean really look. Is there anything that doesn't add to the conflict, plot, या general story arc?

Also, talk to your teacher. See what he/she thinks is so complex about your stories. What he/she thinks maybe completely different from what आप think.

youve got so much to say its almost bursting, the teacher doesnt want to be inthralled द्वारा your stories; your good, but- teacher got to work on the other लॉस्ट sheep,mmm simpler sucks,= that wouldnt sell! [and your in training!!!!!!!] will a note from Saint Nick help? id allow your 100 pages, the rest in colour ha he hi ho hu later;-}