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What do आप think of this poem?

Can आप feel it in my heart?
Oh,i'm just a dust...
Can आप help me now?
Oh,i'm alright...
Can आप understand me now?
Oh,i guess that's too much...
Can आप see me now,running from your mind,hiding behind those all good things आप liked...
Can आप feel the disillusion you've been giving to me for a while,so slow,but bright...
Your दिल is so hollow.
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fabfamily99 said:
This is really good. I think if expand it though it could be a good song, या if आप expand the plot, it could be a great story! I प्यार it!
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Thank you. <3
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3nala said:
It...Is...Awesome!!!
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Thanks. <3
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K5-HOWL said:
I loved it
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I loved it
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thanks... ;)
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chickencheese said:
Really great! I like the emotion you've put in it :D
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Thank you. :)
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JohnnyD said:
Wow आप must be really inspired to make this kind of poem! I ♥ प्यार it!
Yeap it sound like a song!
AWESOME!!!!!
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Aw thank आप so much. <3
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Vixie79 said:
Wow the ending was really relate able. I got the idea that it was explaining the endless lies someone has fed आप through a relationship, something else I have received.
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Um i was disappointed so i decided not to expose my feelings. आप can feel it in this poem.
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I'm hiding from him so he could never hurt me again. And his दिल is so empty,therefore he knows i deserve someone who can दिखाना me love,someone who won't disappoint me.
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You're welcome hon. *hugs आप back*
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Pikafan32 said:
Beautiful weave, dear! A dark masterpiece with true दिल in it. Have आप ever considered publishing a book of your poems. If so आप could start द्वारा ranking up the points to professional publication here >> link
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Oh honey,thank आप so much. Um i haven't but i'll consider about that. Hugs and kisses
irena83 posted एक साल  से अधिक पुराना
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Wow, I might check that out myself.
Vixie79 posted एक साल  से अधिक पुराना
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I understand it says teen fiction and you're much older than that but maybe they'll allow you. If not maybe आप should try लेखक House. But आप have to pay to प्रकाशित करे there...
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Um yes... Well,i'll write my blog,no rush. ;) Thanks anyway.
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