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हे guys i was wonderin if u like this poem thing i wrote?


im not sure how to love
im not sure what it is
is it a song is it a poem?
but when im with आप i feel whole
we were perfect but u messed up
आप left me in the cold rain
आप never came back
i used the rest of my tears
now i feel like im wasting away...


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Sounds just like what Bella was feeling in the forrest in New Moon...good job!
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i like it....its very good
Elizabeth1993 posted एक साल  से अधिक पुराना
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thankyou all so much for u lovley टिप्पणियाँ
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twilightyoussi said:
it is soo biautiful just like you
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aw thanx so much
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angoxx127 said:
srry i dont really like it it is so nt good i think i could throw up try to make it better will ya
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thats really mean i liked it i no ur just दिखा रहा है your opinion but u can b a bit kinder about it!
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Elzybells said:
well done :)
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thank u soo much
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Bella_090 said:
I like it. :)
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AliceRoxx said:
Yes I like it too :) Try and build the emotion like आप do and maybe add imagery so we can picture it? x Well Done x
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Yh i agree with you, it is a really good poem and i liked it too :)
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kenya124 said:
Awesome!! That was really good.
Jeez your lucky आप can come up with stuff like
that lol.But good job
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ScottishChic said:
AWWWWWWW. i think tht was kinda sweet. Really great poem Good Job!!!! xD
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Lucy_Lou14 said:
im not a great प्रशंसक of poems, but thats pretty good, very deep,sensitive etc, gud job!
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