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ok so im riting a story and it starts out after renesmee and jake are married, read and टिप्पणी दे i no its alot.

When I was done and looking descant I sucked in a big breath and descended the long staircase, Jacob saw me and the instant he did his whole face lit up. It looked like just seeing me changed his day, from a bad one - one of stress, of anger - to the best दिन of his entire life. He ran up to me and scoped me up into his arms. "Where did आप go?" he yelled even though I was in his arms still. "I wake up and saw that आप went there, I thought आप ran away!"
    I almost did, I thought. No it was wrong to make his दिन worse, I'd tell him about the baby after the thing with Sam got worked out. "I couldn't sleep." I कहा then tried to smile weakly and failed. I jumped out of his arms and ran to the bathroom. He came after me, probably too stunned to say anything, and waited in the corner as I was violently sick.
Thats all i got im not done tho
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fantastic! keep it up!
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OMG, did u write tht, i प्यार it :)
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add me and please if आप dont mind send me the finish product
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4433girl said:
GREAT JOB SO FAR I CAN'T WAIT TILL आप FINISH. IT'S REALLY GOOD
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disneyminniejd said:
WOW that is really good. And i am not just saying that to be nice it is really good lol.You should finish it and let people know because i want to read the rest and i am a HUGE twilight प्रशंसक (TEAM JACOB!!!!!!!):D
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Michelle-Bieber said:
I think it's really good आप should totally keep लेखन :)!!!!!!!!!!!<3
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Castiel4ever said:
Keep writing. It's good!
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Dayli said:
Oh great job, please keep लेखन super cool. I'm a प्रशंसक of the series and cant get enough...
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im a huge प्रशंसक too,I want more, और more! but idk y SM is लेखन abut Bree Tanner
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Omg i कहा the same thing i mean Bree was just a character that took what like 2 pages on the book? i mean she is going to be लेखन और about Twilight she needs to finish Midnight Sun... my opinion. but let me know when आप write और on what आप are working on right now..
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yaya
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