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My review: Cheerliee the Jigsaw wannabe..

posted by Canada24

Has anyone ever read CHEERLIEES GARDEN.

It's probably one of the 'better' creepypastas.
But I still dislike it.

Not only is Cheerlees complete irrational in thi story. (killing children, when simply quitting your job could of worked just as well).

But there's all the fact, she acts like she watches WAY too many Saw फिल्में (I would know, I watch them quite a lot).

She acts exactly like Jigsaw.
Using clever traps to kill them in unique fashion.
But unlike Jigsaw.
She dosen't give them a chance to escape, making her और like the Mark Hoffmen and Amanda Young.
Where the victims, where ONLY victims, they would of died, regardless of doing what they needed to do.
And there was no 'point' behind it.

Besides I LIKE Jigsaw, he's different then other villains.
He's still 'human' in some way.

Anyway.
Now that I got that off my chest.
I can relax now.

And stay tuned for और of my latest story..

Windwakerguy430 Huh. I see what you mean

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The last solstice - Chapter 30: Fading light - Part 2

posted by NocturnalMirage

The last solstice

Chapter 30: Fading light – Part 2

Celestia's mind was hovering on the border of consciousness, trying to find a way through the thick haze. The Princess of the Sun awakened slowly and the process itself meant struggle for her. She opened her eyes for a little, feeling dreaded because of the unfamiliar surroundings of the room. Although the fabric of the sheet and the cover; the furniture and the paintings on the दीवार resembled the style of royalty, it was definitely not the Ivory Tower. She failed to recollect any memory where she was या how she got here whatsoever. The blurriness...

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The Nightmare Before क्रिस्मस Part 3

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Jack was walking with his ghost dog Zero.

Zero: *barks*
Jack: No Zero. I'm not in the mood.
Zero: *begs*
Jack: Alright *grabs bone* Go get it! *throws bone*
Zero: *grabs bone* Bark, bark.

Next morning near Jack's house.

Mayor: *drives up* Ah, time for another great day. *goes upstairs humming This is Halloween* *rings doorbell*

Nothing happened, and the mayor soon became angry. Right when he was mad, the mayor soon thought for a moment, and was immediately happy again.

Mayor: Jack! I've got plans for अगला Halloween. I'll need to check them with आप before we start.

Still no response

Mayor: *sad*...

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Blazin' Blue Meets Sapphire Scorch-Part 1

posted by Dragon-88

My new OC who is a new resident, but he's too shy to talk to anyone, until now....

OK, this really awesome story begins with Blazin' getting off the train to Ponyville with his belongings, many of them drawings he made and lots of drawing paper, pencils, and other art material (he's an artist, which explains the cutie mark of a pencil). He is rather shy and isn't talking to anyone. He sees Big Macintosh, who sees the new resident and helps him with his belongings as they walk towards the house he was offered द्वारा Mayor Mare. He was rather tall, though....

Blazin': Thanks for your help....

Big Mac: Eyup.

Blazin': Might as well get settled. Got a nice bedroom, bathroom, kitchen....

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The last solstice - Chapter 29: Fading light - Part 1

posted by NocturnalMirage

The last solstice

Chapter 29: Fading light – Part 1.

“I still can't believe it's really you... “the Princess of the Night कहा on a warm tone. “To be honest, I thought I'll never see आप again, sister.”

“I... don't know what to say...” Celestia replied, turning hear head away, her face revealing massive levels of uncertainty.

“You don't have to say anything, Tia. I'm just glad your finally here with us.”

“Us?”

“Yes. Cadence and Twilight are in the अगला room, they must know about your return at once!” Luna declared excitedly and reached for the door knob.

“No, wait!”...

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Silver Tune's Story 11

posted by _MockingJay_

The three mares were walking down the street. Coffee Crème and Snow Flake were very excited. Silver Tune was quietly following them. Snow Flake noticed Silver Tune's worried face. She paused and turned around.

SF: Why that face, Silver Tune?
ST: *sigh* I've actually never been to a mall before.
CC: *laughs* Yeah right.
ST: I'm serious. Ask anypony.. Ask my sister.

Coffee Creme's eyes were wide open. She couldn't believe what Silver Tune had just said. She turned to Snow Flake, who also had her eyes wide open.

ST: What?
CC: Then.. Where the heck do आप buy your clothes?!
ST: Walmart, Target, या Tilly's....

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Silver Tune's Story 9

posted by _MockingJay_

Silver Tune sat beside her locker. She was hungry, and she was mad. Coffee Crème smiled as she walked to Silver Tune.
Coffee Creme's smile suddenly disappeared. She saw Silver Tune crying.

CC: Silver Tune, why are आप crying?
ST: *rubs eyes* I-I'm not crying.. I'm smiling.. *frowns*
CC: What happened?
ST: आप wouldn't understand.
CC: Tell me. *sits*
ST: *sigh* For your own good, walk away.
CC: *tilts head*
ST: I buck everything up. I'll probably push आप and Snow Flake away, that's my thing. I just don't want to hurt you. So please, I'm begging you, don't enter my life. *lowers head*
CC: Awww sweetie....

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Hedgehog In Ponyville 8 part 2

posted by Seanthehedgehog

After killing the enemy I got in my car with इंद्रधनुष Dash, and we started going to Sweet सेब Acres. We weren't sure why it was snowing.

Sean: Do आप suppose Twilight did this to fuck things up?
Rainbow Dash: Maybe. It could be part of her plan.
Sean: *enters sweet सेब acres*
Rainbow Dash: *looks at ponies* Wow, there's a lot of them here.
Sean: Seems like बनाया गया, एपलजैक, मौजमस्ती did half of our job for us. Now we just gotta see what's going on. *stops*
Applejack: इंद्रधनुष Dash! Are आप alright?
Rainbow Dash: I'm fine. Sean prevented Robotnik's soldiers from attacking me.
Applejack: Good for you.
Sean: What's...

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Ponies On The Rails Episode 10 part 3

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Gordon was bored, so he decided to check out what the Union Pacific looked like.

Gordon: I'll bet every single steam engine is dead. *runs to station*

After three मिनटों of running

Gordon: *panting* Ugh, how much longer do I have to go? *looks back* (All I did was run across the street?!?!?)
Train driver: *blows horn*
Gordon: Oh damn, the tracks are right द्वारा the road. *walks to fence* Really? Why did they put these up?
Security Guard: HEY!! What are आप doing द्वारा that fence?
Gordon: Watching the trains?
Security Guard: Ok. You're not allowed to pass this fence at anytime.
Gordon: Alright. May I ask...

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Under Pressure Part Three

posted by karinabrony

Black Rose was in the bathroom, looking at herself in the mirror. She was not as depressed as usual. She came out of the bathroom to go back to class. When she came out, there was a little चूहा on the floor. She gasped and got startled. Then she decided to pick it up. She looked at it's little beady eyes. She went back to the bathroom to get paper towels for the little creature. Fluttershy was in there too, making sure her little critters were okay. Fluttershy smiled at Black Rose. Black Rose got the paper towels. Then, she found a small cardboard box to put it in. She put the towels inside...

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Chapter 19

posted by Canada24

MUCH LATER!

When Scootaloo gained conscience she remembered what happened and started getting scared, as she had no idea where she was, या what happened to the others.

As she nervously started pacing, she banged into something.

"Ow" groaned a familiar voice.

"Spike! Thank god!" Scootaloo cried, helping him up, and taking comfort in knowing she's not fully alone.

"Where do आप suppose we are?" Spike asked nervously.

"I don't know.. But Spike, would it be weird if I आप hug for comfort?" Scootaloo asked, frightenedly looking around.

"Not at all.. I could use the comfort as well" Spike said, hugging...

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The Seven Up's part 4

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Rice's अगला part of his plan was to kidnap a police officer. Buddy, and his group was nearby

Buddy: I heard we're supposed to get a snowstorm in a couple of days.
Ringo: Oh no
Buddy: We shouldn't be getting much.
Cop 2: *walking down street*
Rice: *pulls up*

Rice, and Clint चुरा लिया a cop car, and were dressed as police officers.

Rice: Excuse me, sir?
Cop 2: What?
Rice: *punches cop*
Clint: *puts cop in car*
Buddy: Whoa. What's going on there? *runs off*
Cop 3: What are आप doing?
Buddy: This stallion is disguised as a cop, and is being arrested for interfering with the police *drives off*
Buddy: *shows...

Ponies On The Rails episode 7 part 1

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Running from Chicagoat to San Franciscolt is a railroad called the Union Pacific. It's the largest railroad in the United States, and is run द्वारा thousands of ponies. This is the story of some of those ponies that run the rails, aka railroading.

Episode 7: The boss of my boss is my enemy

Idea by: Chibi-Emmy

May 25, 1951

We start this episode near the station of Cheyenne. An observation car was sitting on a siding near the line.

???: Oh my god man! How many of these engines do आप still have?
Pete: The same ammount we had since 1944.
???: That's not good! We can't allow this!!!
Pete: Sir, we have a...

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Ponyville Military Ch. 2

posted by Dragon4322

"NO AND YOU ASK AGAIN MY FRIEND....

Third दिन of the war it seems the Government of Ponyville gave our Military what they call /standard issued/ helicopters. Well i knew of them in magazines and newspapers but didn't know the Government would now supply so many to the Ponyville Military. once these hovering machines fell in the hooves of my best friend and commander she saw it as an advantage for earth ponies to use so they too could go from one battle front to another. Fourth दिन we shipped out and since i couldn't fly yet i too was out on a helicopter. But since i was lieutenant it was the one in front of all the rest, And...

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The last solstice - Chapter 25: That fateful दिन

posted by NocturnalMirage

The last solstice

Chapter 25: That fateful day

Now listen carefully, because I will only tell it once! I already told my sister in the past and now to you, but never again to anypony else! I wouldn’t tell this story for the third time even to the Creator herself!

Of course, my soul and body wasn’t always scarred and burned like this, once I was a proud टट्टू like you… my happiness was a beautiful kingdom, a dear sister and a faithful student…

Come with me into the past, and I will take आप to that fateful दिन which changed everything…

It happened long ago… so long पूर्व now. I was returning...

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Celestia and Bolt: The खोजिए for Luna-Part 3

posted by Dragon-88

इंद्रधनुष in her own kart (the others were दिया their own to find Luna)

Rainbow in her own kart (the others were given their own to find Luna)

Ok, so the gang arrives in Canterlot, and Celestia suggests they विभाजित करें, विभक्त करें up, but suggests she and Bolt stay together. So, as the two are driving through town.....

Bolt: Your Hignhess, they're staring! These monster trucks aren't cutting it!!

Celestia: Well, time to make another transformation! Were'e doing this kart style!

So she presses yet another button, turning her car into the Daytripper from Mario Kart Wii and Bolt's into the Wild Wing from Mario Kart Wii.

Bolt: How many buttons are there!?

Celestia: Oh, just hush and follow me.

Every resident in Canterlot was staring at the weird karts they...

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Ponies On The Rails episode 2 part 1

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Running from Chicacolt to San Franciscolt is a railroad called the Union Pacific. It's the largest railroad in the United States, and is run द्वारा thousands of ponies. This is the story of some of those ponies that run the rails, aka railroading.

Episode 2: To Lease, या not to lease

August 1, 1950

It has been half a week since Coffee Creme's first दिन working on the Union Pacific. She's a hard worker, and normally works with Hawkeye, and together, they would have a special assignment. They were recieving it in Cheyenne at 9 O clock in the morning

Pete: Attention everypony! Listen up.
Workers: *gather...

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Ponies On The Rails episode 1 part 1

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Hawkeye's engine

Running from Chicacolt to San Franciscolt is a railroad called the Union Pacific. It's the largest railroad in the United States, and is run द्वारा thousands of ponies. This is the story of some of those ponies that run the rails, aka railroading.

Episode 1: New worker

Cheyenne, July 26, 1950

Coffee Creme: *walking on platform*
Orion: Hey, are आप the new आग mare?
Coffee Creme: Yes.
Orion: Alright, you're working with another टट्टू on that passenger train. You're going to Las Pegasus. Good luck on your first day.
Coffee Creme: Thanks *walks to engine*
Hawkeye: Hi, आप must be my new आग mare.
Coffee...

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Flame Air

posted by FlameMusical123

Hi! I'm new here. Call me Flame. My first post was a picture called 'Meet Flame Air'. This is to introduce her properly.

Name: Flame Air
Coat color: Sunshine yellow
Eye Colors: Blood red(left), sky blue(right)
Hair Colors: Tangerine orange, ruby red
Cutie Mark: 2 musical notes (forgot their names)
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Hairstyle
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Flame's hairstyle has a rig-shaw like design. Sort of like Mordecai from Regular Show.
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Origin
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Flame used to live in Manhattan, till her family got fed up with the insults thrown...

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Nikki's Old Enemy: Part 5

posted by applejackrocks1

Sugar Sprinkles had packed her clothing and other items. She was in the Train Station with Nikki and her bags...

Nikki: 2 tickets to Ponyville please.
Lady: That would be 2 dollars.
Sugar: Here. *gives 2 dollars to Lady*
Lady: Thank you. Here आप go. *hands tickets to Nikki*
Nikki: Thank you.
Lady: Have a nice day!
Sugar: *enters train*
Nikki: *enters train*
Sugar: Wh-
Nikki: *sits on seat*
Sugar: *sits अगला to Nikki*
Nikki: I'm taking आप somewhere where आप can be happy.
Sugar: Whoa. It stinks.
Nikki: Yep. It's the skunk in the bag.
Sugar: आप brought it?!
Nikki: Duh. I have to. If I set it free here, somepony...

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Nikki's Old Enemy: Part 3

posted by applejackrocks1

Everypony: *laughs*
Mare: Yup! *slaps Nikki's back*
Nikki: Ow! Stop!
Colt: What are आप doing here? Oh wait! आप work for Diamond!
Nikki: I would never work for that whale!
Mare: Watch your mouth orphan.
Nikki: I am not an orphan!
Colt: Says the girl who d-
Nikki: Shut up!!!
Diamond: Ehem. *Grabs phone*
Nikki: *eye widened*
Diamond: *smirks* (puts phone down)
Colt: I have a long time without seeing you!
Mare: We thought आप were dead!
Colt: HEY! The orphan got her cutie mark!
Mare: Let me see!
Nikki: *covers cutie mark*
Colt: GET HER!
Mare: *grabs her hooves*
Nikki: HEY!
Everypony: *laughs*
Colt: Your cutie mark..Is...