Young Justice OC'S!!! Article: My Total OCD Moment About All The OC's

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posted by KatRox1

Okay, I'm having one of those moments again. The kind where I get all depressed about Mercy becoming evil (because I really didn't want her to!) and about how there are WAY to many OC's! Not pointing fingers at anyone, because I'm doing it too, but seriously! If आप want to make an OC, could आप PLEASE just write an लेख about them first? We need some idea about them first!
That's why I won't be RP-ing at all until I can actually WRITE a story for Casey! I suggest a lot of आप guys do that, saying that some people don't even put up a bio for their character!
One और point, PLEASE refrain from making और OC's than आप need! I mean, I get it if आप need to make them for like, one night to make sense of something in your fanfic. I've already deleted a few of my RP accounts, I suggest some of आप do also! But please, don't overcrowd!
And I also learned this term from one of my friends: God modding. That's a big no-no also! So that means, don't make yourself "so powerful that आप can take over the world with the snap of my fingers"; it also means don't be able to just dodge everything that comes at आप and don't be so invincible that आप can be stabbed in the दिल and be completely fine! (I know, that happened to Mercy, but I will explain that later)
One और thing (probably not) DON'T control other people's OC's! I know in real life, we don't control other people! So, don't put them in those kind of situations!
Okay! I promise, almost done! I just wanted to give a round of applause to those people who दिखाना that their OC's are imperfect. They are able to दिखाना that they go through what a bunch of us go through on an everyday basis! Not being perfect, second-guessing ourselves, and being who REAL people are!
And one last idea! What if: Because there are SO many OC heroes, and not that many villains (That doesn't mean आप need to create one!!) Once आप see that about 2 या 3 OC's have gotten themselves into a fight, don't swoop in and join... 3 या 4 OC's only, to make it और fun and interesting!
**But don't forget to interact and not always be the lone wolf!**
Haha! आप thought I was done! Nope! Just also wanted to say, IF Mercy does come back as a normal hero, NEVER सवाल what she does... E.V.E.R.... Unless आप want to repeat the "I'm a mentally and emotionally unstable villain who hates my life" thing!

Sorry if आप guys don't like any of the things I have stated, but thats life! Deal with it! This has been bothering me for far to long and I thought SOMEONE needed to say it! प्यार आप guys!
-KatRox1

The_Writer, SilverWings13 and 6 others like this

BentleyYJ OOC: YOU READ MY MIND!!! OMG DO YOU KNOW WHAT IM THINKING??/ 0_0 XD people listen to this brilliant person

EclipseYJ OOC: I think i can live with that ;) and i think i might change eclipse to being deaths apprentise instead of gods daughter cuz i'm going a little over bored <3 LOV U TOO

SilverWingsYJ OOC: I luv this! Thank you so much for posting it!!!

Devin_Grayson OOC: heh. The last point refers to me. Heheh. Sorry!

66Dragons I completely agree. I believe I have pointed out enough that Red is NOT the perfect hero. In fact, he sorta fails a lot more than his cocky attitude lets on... Damn. Now I sound egotistical...

KatRox1 Heh. You know when I said I wouldn't be RP-ing as Casey? I kinda lied, saying I have nothing better to do in my free time!

AislingYJ OOC: You are my life now. No seriously. This is amazing. Of course, I face the extremely uncommon problem (at least I think it's uncommon) of my OC not being able to do ANYTHING, and me getting completely bored of that. Like I was tempted to kill Aisling, but ya kinda get attached to your first OC, so she probably will just get an upgrade, like some actual fighting skills or something. Now I'm rambling. Amazing article though!

ShadowYJ Great article. Even though none of this applies to me 'cause my OC doesn't have any powers. But yet all the same: great article.

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Irra Oc

posted by Robin_Love

Irra

This is the time line where Lexi and the others are already there and Jamie has his squad. Sorry Sil, I mixed up the names DX

Name: Irra Weldon-Addams
Alias: रे
Occupation: Apprentice
Powers: bends light, controls heat, expert सड़क, स्ट्रीट fighter, small weapons
Age: 15
Weaknesses: If she is kept in shadows या cold for और than a few hours, her light extinguishes; if she expends too much light she becomes uncontrollable; limited fighting endurance
History: Irra's parents died before she was a साल old. She was taken in द्वारा an orphanage. द्वारा the time she was four, Irra had escaped her foster care home...

The Power of the Hexagons (part 8)

posted by Kurls_Basd

Jaivus Telepathic Torture
Jaivus clinched his teeth at the sight before him. He was standing on the mountain that stood before the Beetle settle.
"Honesty Where are you?!"
"I'm right here." from behind Jaivus
"What the hell are आप up to?"
"Not much....just sifting your mind to find out how my traitor parents were dealt with...should be entertaining"
"I'm not going to let आप do that."
"What? आप have intentions of stopping me?"
"Yes i do"
"If your intention is to fight me then I must disappoint it would've been nice to have a mental battle with आप dear brother, but I have other things i must attend...

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The Power of the Hexagons (part 6)

posted by Kurls_Basd

spikes pierced and wore her flesh

Back in the room with Jaivus and his twin brother Honesty, Honesty had taken over from Salil beating Jaivus with और anger and power. Jaivus grunting and gasping bounced off the walls the paste of the lashes slowed and eventually stopped. Honesty walked up to Jaivus, who pants for air, dropped the whip on the ground and says, "That's what आप get for betraying your people." Jaivus side-eyed him and smirk suddenly spitting blood on him. Honesty wiped off the blood and left the room.
On the other side of the दीवार Rene and Zack watch as Ashley is slowly being froze to death. Rene narrowed her...

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Honesty

posted by Kurls_Basd

Honesty

Code name: Weapon 010:
Nickname:Honesty
Powers:Telepathic; controls a beetle-like animal (which is called beetle) once implanted into someone whether person या animal he can control then. He can also materialize himself into thousand of beetles and can create clones of himself with the beetles.
Appearance: Blonde hair and red eyes. Usually wears a black hoodie cloak.
Age:
Attitude: frank, hostile and devious.
Relations: Twin brother to Jaivus.
History&Past: Honesty was separated from his birth parents and his twin brother Jaivus at birth. He is the eldest between the twin. When He was separated...

The Power of the Hexagons (part 1)

posted by Kurls_Basd

Kaya looked into the mirror as she gracefully placed the dark blue lipstick on her lips, she suddenly hears the floor squeaks from the dark area where the बिस्तर is. She doesn't glanced to the बिस्तर nor tries to make a sudden attack but rather she continues with her makeup. She picked up the eye pencil, used it and slow returned it to its place but with quick reflexes she threw the pencil द्वारा its point to the dark shot.
"What are आप doing here Lelisa?" She asked bluntly, the बिस्तर lamp was switched on shining the light a devious redhead putting the pencil that was a few cm from her side of her face....

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Last of the Robin

posted by Robin_Love

Dick Grayson all dressed up

Captivating. That was the only way he could describe her. Captivated; the only way he could describe how he felt right now. He watched as she seemed to hover over the floor although the स्कर्ट of her dress was short. She had a brilliant smile and stunning eyes. But he could see a layer of pain behind the happy front she was putting on. Had he never been trained as he was, he probably would have never known. But he was trained that way and he couldn't help how he badly he wanted to wipe away the pain. His sister's dedication gala was in full झूला, स्विंग when he found his way back from his thoughts....

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A Dark Wonderland~Part 4~

posted by BladeYJ

Ladies and Gents, Our Jack of Hearts

Voila..

Blue hair fell to the floor as the buzzing of a razor screamed down the halls. "He had been fighting with a patient, clawed her eye out because she tormented the 'one'".
"And the injured one? In for?"
"Murder, of her brother... Says here she blew his brains out, then was sent here for talking to him, screaming at anyone who helped her,'I didn't kill him.'"
"Eh... आप didn't रिपोर्ट this file to Dr.Silver.."
"No reports are aloud to go to that division, not since the incident three days ago.

~

His hand grasped her and brought to her to a tiny chair, atop the wooden तालिका, टेबल at the opposite side....

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MY OC supervillian #3 bio

posted by Kurls_Basd

Salil

Name: Salil
Hero name: doesn't have one
Powers: Controls water
Appearance: Blue hair and eyes.
Age:18 yrs
Abilities: combat fighter. Salil is able to control every drop of blood in persons body. He can cause their blood to rush to their head to knock them unconscious. Good with any musical instruments.
Relations: Lelisa boyfriend.
Attitude: Charmer, flirtation
Statue:Aquanason. Fugitive of the Aquanason kingdom.
History&Past: Salil grew up with a mother and father that loved their job और than they loved him. His parents worked for the King of the Aquanason, Ashley's father. Wanting attention...

A story of Blades and Bullets Part 1: The Flicht.

posted by godmor

Cheshire sat in the pilot सीट of the jet leaned back beceas it was on auto pilot, well Twan sat in the copilot सीट अगला to her looking at the screen of the laptop on his lap.
Oke babs is everything redy? He asked.
Almost Twan just running some last background cheks and decrypting the codes of he security system.
Oke well I geas I will hear from आप then.
Thad's rigt, but wait a मिनट I got a surprise fore you.
She कहा as the camera तस्वीरें on the screen chanced from Babra, to Cadmus and Tess back in the apartment, Twan looks at the screen chancing and was happily surprised.
Well this is a surprise....

Reyna Update

posted by Robin_Love

Reyna-Human

Name: Reyna (Ray-na) Jackson
Alias: Hyde
Occupation: Translator; vigilante; student
Powers: Levitation, magnetic fields, “wings” that can repel radiation, her voice can manipulate things and people for a small time
Weaknesses If she expels too much power, she will pass out. She is not invulnerable to weapons that aren't magnetic. She can only levitate herself and only for short periods of time. To use her vocal powers, she can not be in her other form
Skills/talents: She is fluent in sign language, English, and understands Myers in animal forms
Appearance: She has blue hair in both forms, brown...

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Update on Bella

posted by KatRox1

Yeah, I left the team. Why do आप ask?

Personal reasons.

My name? I thought this was already covered?

Bella Watson. Age 19.

No और powers for me. I grew out of them, like how आप grow out of allergies.

I work outside the government. According to them, I died in a train accident in December.

Yeah, new clothing style. No और fancy costumes, just plain old jeans and jackets.

I dyed my hair to be और brownish-red, so that it’s easier to blend in. Government, remember?

The कछुआ, कछुए backpack had to go, along with any other habits. So, no barefoot running, no teas… yeah.

No, I don’t miss it. It’s...

Urzelon Clash part 4

posted by Kurls_Basd

Lelisa the Fire Slayer

Aquapoint's eyes widen upon seeing Frostbite she grabbed Koda द्वारा this clothes and asked firmly,
"What is going on?"
"Get off of me."
She quickly got off of him and both of them stood up.
"So?" she said, folding her arms.
"After 8 years for not seeing your older brother I'm surprise आप can't say a single hello ."
"Call off those brats before my फ्रेंड्स hard them."
"Kids cool it."
"Artemis, Mafia they work for my sister." she pointed at the girl with the dark blue hair. Artemis and Mafia stopped suddenly saving both there victims from their incoming attacks. Mafia and Whisperer shapeshifted back into...

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New Villain OC (first one)

posted by killer24

Name: James Bishop
Villain ID: Jinx (or another I cant think any ideas if आप don't like it)
Age: 19
Height: 5,9
Hair: Red
Eyes: Red
Nationality: German
Father: John Bishop (deceased)
Mother: June Bishop (deceased)
Affiliations: him self

Powers: control over electricity/lightening, control over आग
Skills: master swordsman, killing, guns, multilingual and some other skills

Relationship status: no one but is a dangerous flirt (you have been warned)

Enemies: Alex, Ajax, Kane, the league, any hero या anti-hero

Likes: murder, sword fighting, नारंगी, ऑरेंज juice, beating up Alex and de-limbing him, pizza, flirting,...

A gardian gun. (one shot)

posted by godmor

Twan walkd in the park enjoying the peace surrounding him.
Suddenly he spotted Natacha walking towards him flankt द्वारा 2 soldiers, When she reaches him she and the soldiers salute him, in reaction he returns the salute.
Comrade I have some troubling news.
Twan look at her. Watt is it natacha?
The Russian mafia chapter here is planning to kill Cadmus.
Twan lets out a soft grows and he felt an anger and rages he had not felt fore years, a feeling he though long lost. Thad basterd, Dimitri will pay fore this.
We re going to दिखाना his pattatic little mob watt happens when they mess whit my loved one's....

My new OCs (Kaya&Akash)

posted by Kurls_Basd

Akash in his mode

Name: Akash
Powers: Controls fires.
Appearance: Red hair and eyes.
Civvies: T-shirt and blue jeans and blue contact lens.
Weapons: Carries आप daggers and fuse them with fire.
Age: 25 yrs.

Status: Champion of this people. Guardian and Brother-in-law to Ashley. Husband to Kaya (Ashley's sister).
Atittube: kind, caring, acts mature, a leaders attitude.
History&Past: Akash is an Inferaion, people with the same ability to control fire. At the age of 15 he claimed the name champion of this people, after that he was assign a mission to protect the Aquanason princess Kaya (Ashley's sister). When they...

Adrian

posted by MafiaYJ

Alice

I am Adrian, one of the few Watchers of your Earth. I was here before the beginning of time. And now i'm going to tell आप something, no one knows, no human anyway, until now of course. And promise me my dear sweet readers...do not tell Babylon our secret. This is the back story on who her mother was, she's been wondering, yes she has.
It started back, way WAY back, in London.The साल was 1665, and हैलोवीन was taking its toll on the town. Babylon's mother, whose name I shall not reveal just yet, was a nun in an old Catholic Church. She had gone to visit another church, far out of town. However,...

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Things Never कहा

posted by Robin_Love

((Just a one-shot based off of the last part of SilverWing's Blue Rose story. When Tara finds out Alek was taking the reverse syndrom thing))

A strong wind blew through her hair, the sunny atmosphere contradicting to the darker feelings inside. Her feet made prints along the wet sand as she walked towards the shading trees. Emotions and thoughts bouncing around in her head like टेनिस balls. Her hands tightened around the हार in her pocket. She couldn't भालू leaving without it but she didn't feel like bringing herself to wear it.
She stopped at the trees and, with no further thought, feel...

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Something on my Mind (part 2)

posted by killer24

(His hair is meant to have black streaks)

He sat in a café drinking a glass of चॉकलेट दूध thinking over the past year
He had left America heading to the worlds most knowledgeable places, London, Japan, India and Russia plus और learning as he went along
A side hobby he did was magic, trying to learn the world myths, mysteries and riddles.
But....there seemed to be one thing always there in the back of his mind the दिन he awoke
_____________________________________________________
(Flash back: a साल earlier)
He woke up on the floor his body in terrible pain as he shakily got to his feet, looking around he could tell it was a bedroom,...

New OC,FreshAir

posted by khanna266

Name:Dustin Romanov
age:immortal but appears 17
powers:superspeed,superstrength,reads minds,invulnerability(Babylon wouldn't be able to drain his energy),and किस of death
hero costume:a black tuxedo,and white mask shaped like an x
civvies:(doesn't have anything special he has a different pair of civvies each day)
Alias:FreshAir
BG story:Thew दिन of his seventeenth birthday he fell off a cliff and died for a few सेकंड्स and his mother and father kept praying for God to bring him back and so he brought him back but he brought him back with eternal life as a price added द्वारा an evil demon.He can only end his eternal life if he finds the demon and cuts off his head,but for until that दिन he has sworn his allegiance to the young justice members...and has a secret crush on Babylon.
P.S he's Russian.

Dustin in civvies

My Rockin new OC!

posted by khanna266

Name:Shaine Do
age:15
gender:male
Alias:DragonsHeart
powers:transforms into a huge red and black dragon and hypnosis
hero outfit:a red pair of pants and t कमीज, शर्ट with black ankle boots and sunglasses
civvies;white t कमीज, शर्ट with a black dragon on it and jeans(but he also likes wearing other outfits)
appearance:White hair and red eyes they sometimes change color and he's about 6"5'
BG story:He's Augusts long लॉस्ट brother who has been searching for her for years wondering where she might be and finnally finds her at a स्टारबक्स and discovers he has powers just like her and fights along her side against evil.(yes i know they don't have the same last name it's a long story),he's also a former male model.