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posted by twilight-7
Guys, I am utterly sorry. MacNurse11 is right. Jacob does know that Kayla was bitten. Sorry. When I was लेखन the chapter this morning I did look to see whether Jacob knew but I couldn’t find it at all in my prequel folder. So I assumed he didn’t. I have written a tonne of these and आप lot should know so I am allowed to get confused as to what has already happened. I have rewritten the chapter but don’t worry. Jacob not knowing now wasn’t a significant thing, it just made the story drag longer. Now that I know that he does things are much और easier.

So here it is, re-edited Chapter 13.




Edward held onto me tightly. His arms wound around me waist and his hands interlocking with mine. I was sitting on his lap on the sofa in the living-room. Mitchell and Charlie were in the kitchen, discussing plans and strategies. It felt weird sitting here in Edward’s arms when I knew my life was in danger. I didn’t feel scared या panicky, I just felt normal.
“I have exams on Monday,” I कहा to Edward.
“Is that all आप can think about?” Edward asked me. “There’s a guy out to torture and kill आप and आप think about your exams?”
“Edward, if I worried about every person that was out to kill me I wouldn’t have a life.”
“Well, since you’re not bothered about Loren trying to kill आप maybe आप can think about my proposal.”
“Your proposal?” I twisted around in his lap so I was facing him.
“Before Loren and Mitchell interrupted I had asked आप to marry me.”
I wish I could have कहा that I had forgotten about that but I hadn’t. Yes, Mitchell and Loren had taken up a big part of my mind but Edward’s proposal had been lurking there, reminding me of its presence.
“I have thought about it,” I said, slowly. “But I don’t know if this is the right time, Edward.”
“Are आप rejecting me?” Edward asked, hurt.
“No, no, no.” I kissed the tip of his nose. “I am not rejecting you. What I meant was, should we really be discussing marriage when I haven’t graduated from high school and someone is trying to kill me. I mean, there will have to be bodyguards and everything at the wedding.”
“We don’t have to get married right now,” he said. “You can’t get married until आप turn eighteen. And द्वारा अगला April I’m sure this little mess will have been cleared up.”
“Little mess?” I said, incredulous. “This guy is trying to kill me and my father! How is it a little mess?”
“Loren is completely harmless, Mitchell कहा so.”
Edward was right. Without Mitchell, Loren was powerless. But that didn’t mean there weren’t other Jenzis that would happily kill Charlie and me. But it didn’t hurt to have something to look आगे to in the mean time. I did want to marry Edward. It wasn’t something I had dreamed of because Edward would be able to see and that would be embarrassing but it was something I had thought about. And another thing I had thought about was Alice. She would प्यार this.
Edward kissed me softly. It was a reassuring kiss, to let me know that he would always be there for me. I hated it when his kisses ended.
“So आप are going to marry me?” he asked, his cool breath washing over me.
“Yes,” I said, dreamily. Dazzling द्वारा Edward Cullen seemed to happen daily to me.
“Then you’ll need this.” He pulled something out of the inside pocket of his jacket. It was small and in a black box. My eyes widened when I saw it.
“Alice told me that आप I would ask आप unexpectedly,” Edward said, smiling. “She said, I should be prepared.”
“You knew I would say yes?” I asked, eyeing the box.
“No, Alice couldn’t tell me that. आप were so uncertain, she said.”
He opened the box and a diamond ring sat in black velvet.
“It’s beautiful,” I gasped.
“Alice was sure आप would प्यार that,” Edward chuckled. He took the ring from the velvet and gently slid it on my left ring finger. I looked at the ring on my finger from different angles and smiled when it glittered and sparkled.
“It’s just like you,” I said. “It’s beautiful and glitters in the light.”
“It’s also cold and hard.”
“Don’t be so negative.” I hit him playfully. “I प्यार it and I प्यार you.”
He kissed me again, dazzling me within seconds. If only every दिन I could be kept in this dazzled state, protected from anything dangerous. Life would be so much simpler.
I leaned आगे to किस him when his nostrils flared and he snarled quietly.
“What is it?” I began to panic, thinking that Loren had come back with an army of little minions.
“The dog.” Edward कहा sourly.
I unlaced one hand and flicked Edward on the nose.
“Stop calling him that,” I said, sternly. “I told him not to call आप leech या bloodsucker so आप don’t call him dog.”
Edward just rolled his eyes at me.
“You better go see to him.”
He let me go, reluctantly and I hurried to the door. I opened it and Jacob stood there, all six foot seven inches of him.
“Hey!” I said, brightly.
Jacob grinned at me.
“You sound rather cheerful,” he replied. “What’s happening? Have they caught the guy?”
“No, but there’s other things that have made me happy.”
“Like me arriving here?” Jacob said, cheekily.
“Of course, you’re the highlight of my day.”
A snarl from the living-room sent Jacob into a fit of laughter.
“He doesn’t think so,” he said, through his laughs.
I giggled.
“He’s just a little uptight. He doesn’t like me in danger.”
“You in danger?” Jacob asked, sceptically. “He is constantly with you, glued to your side. How can आप be in any danger?”
“That is true,” I said, smiling. “Charlie’s in the रसोई, रसोईघर already discussing battle plans.”
I stepped to the side and let Jacob in. He was still standing in the hallway when I closed the door.
“Is something wrong, Jacob?”
His deep brown eyes were watching me thoughtfully. I wanted to know what he was thinking but I didn’t want to go barging into his mind uninvited.
“Did आप tell me the truth, Kayla?” he asked me. “When आप told me आप were bitten द्वारा that male vampire, did आप tell me the truth?”
“Of course I did!” I said, incredulous. “Do आप think I lied about that? Do आप want to see the scar?”
I held my wrist up to his eyes but he looked straight past it to my eyes.
“I’m not talking about if आप were bitten,” he said, pushing my hand away. “I’m talking about if it was that male vampire that bit you, not someone else.”
“Why would I want someone to bite me? Don’t आप know that I can die if a vampire bites me?”
“But what if आप didn’t want them to bite आप though but they just did?”
“And you’re saying I staged the whole vampire tracking me thing just to cover for another vampire?”
“No,” he said, smiling. “That I know is true. It’s just आप smell so much like him.”
“Like who?”
“Edward.”
Then it clicked. What Jacob was trying to say. He thought that Edward had bitten me and to cover for him I कहा that Jared had bitten me.
“Don’t आप believe what I had said?” I asked.
“I did,” he said. “But I’ve been thinking and maybe Edward did bite you.”
That was Edward’s cue to शामिल होइए in. He was standing in front of me and glaring up at Jacob in less than two seconds.
“Are आप calling her a liar, mutt?” he snarled at Jacob.
“Edward, please, I can handle this.” I pushed Edward to the side and I looked up at Jacob. “If I had a choice as to who would bite me that day, between Jared and Edward, I would have chosen Edward. I would rather have Edward’s venom in my bloodstream than Jared’s but I didn’t have a choice. Edward didn’t bite me and it’s not his venom that’s keeping me alive for eternity फ्रोज़न at sixteen.”
“Hasn’t he told you, Kayla?” Jacob said, his voice slightly mocking.
“Told me what?” I looked at Edward but Edward was watching Jacob.
“Keep your mouth shut, pup,” Edward snarled.
Jacob hesitated. He looked from me to Edward and back again. He was struggling to decide what to do. Tell me whatever it was I didn’t know या keep his mouth shut like Edward had said.
“You’re not really फ्रोज़न at sixteen,” Jacob said. He seemed to wince under the death stare Edward gave him when he spoke. “You’re ageing, Kayla.”
Missing आप could turn from pain to pleasure, if I knew आप were missing me too..

"I feel the Half of Me Missing when You're Not Around.. I Miss आप with every Breathe.. आप mean the World to Me.. या May be even More..." Jake whispered in My Ears on the Phone & a shiver ran down through My Spine

I've been floating these days in the Air. I feel hideous 'cause I can't Help Smiling and So I feel an Urge to Hide My After-All-She-is-Insane Expressions. My Heartbeats weren't Normal these Days and so was My Body Temperature. My Nights were Sleepless..

"I Miss आप too" I sighed

"I hope to see...
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"We may consider that It's almost Impossible to get what we are asking from God Since Long.. But Its NOT always Impossible.. आप got to Believe it, आप Never know that आप can Actually get what आप desire.."

It was a Typical Sunday Morning for Me.. though It was the Valentine's दिन for all Others. I was still in my बिस्तर as always as I was working late last night.. My Alarm rang so Loud & I stretched in My Bed. I knew I got to Endure this दिन because we may say all the Time that We're Happy for our फ्रेंड्स & everyone that they are so Truly in Love, But somewhere Deep inside ourself, We'll...
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posted by melikhan
Despite Twilight's popularity, the पुस्तकें have received criticism. Stephen King stated, "the real difference [between J.K. Rowling and Meyer] is that Jo Rowling is a terrific writer, and Stephenie Meyer can't write worth a darn. She's not very good."However, King understood the appeal of the series, adding, "People are attracted द्वारा the stories, द्वारा the pace and in the case of Stephenie Meyer, it's very clear that she's लेखन to a whole generation of girls and opening up kind of a सुरक्षित joining of प्यार and sex in those books. It's exciting and it's thrilling and it's not particularly threatening...
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posted by melikhan
Today, The Twilight Saga: New Moon and The Twilight Saga: Eclipse तारा, स्टार Tinsel Korey will be speaking to the youth before the Aboriginal Youth Night hockey game. The event is sponsored द्वारा True North Sports and Entertainment and the Manitobe Moose Hockey Club, and tonight's events will be called "Follow Your Dreams." According to a हाल का press release, "the concept is fairly simple in nature, the goals are to encourage First Nations Youth from around Manitoba to pursue their dreams through healthy living and a very specific focus on suicide prevention, due to the high suicide rate amongst First Nations youth." 2,500 are expected to attend from the 63 First Nations communities around Manitoba, and "Ti
posted by kiwi12
part 12

The phone conversation took a long time. At one point I heard Bella say "Yes I know she hasn't even met Sam yet" in a slightly exasperated voice. Edward must have heard something I didn't form the other end because he took the phone and कहा "Do not ever talk to my wife in that tone of voice Jacob Black... She's a human in a house full of वैंपायर with वेयरवोल्फ visiting frequently. Be reasonable... Thank आप Jacob... If आप would like I will give her contact information and she can keep in touch if she wants to." He started लेखन something on a notepad near the phone then कहा goodbye...
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Hey...x
Okay so this chapter is my favourite and I think आप are going to enjoy (crossed fingers) it! Okay so just remeber to leave your feedback-it's always great to see it.
Amber/Twilightsauce

Alice wouldn’t let me go until she and Rosalie had दिया me a complete makeover; I didn’t complain though, it was nice to have girl time. Jacob gave me a dazzling smile as I walked back into the living room a full घंटा later, he and Emmet and jasper had probably been chatting about some new turbo engine.
“Wow आप look... amazing,” Jacob breathed as I walked into his open arms while Emmet wolf...
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posted by kiwi12
part 10

"Ok sorry about that" Jacob कहा to me "Can आप phase back?" I found I could. I heard Jasper mutter "I wonder..." then he spoke louder with purpose "You phase when you're angry right?" Jacob nodded "She doesn't. I think she phases when one of आप are upset. She does have to be relaxed to phase back but so do all the वेयरवोल्फ in the room." They all found this interesting.

"Did phasing hurt this time?" Embry asked me "Not as much" I lied "Is Quil alright?" I asked hesitantly. I didn't want to sound heartless nor did I want to be nosy. They hesitated too "Yeah... a friend of his fell...
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posted by kiwi12
I know they've been pretty short if that bugs आप leave a टिप्पणी दे letting me know and I'll combine a few parts to make them longer. Also if आप don't think I'm being true to the characters let me know and I'll try harder. Pretty much anything that isn't right I'd प्यार to know so I can make it better. Thanks.

part 8

"Absolutely not!" the mind reader कहा harshly "Why not?" the huge one countered. His mate asked what was going on. He whispered his thought in her ear. She looked mad "We can't do that!" He turned sulky "She's durable we won't hurt her." The mind reader growled under his breath "She's...
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posted by kiwi12
part 7

The huge vampire spoke for the first time. Utterly terrifying. "Are आप human?" he demanded, eyes wide. "Yes" I answered, too defensively. The huge one's mate, the one who had kidnapped me, started making a सूची out loud:

1. Her eyes change to सोना when she's around us and they turn red when Bella is the closest to her (I hadn't known that.)

2. She picks up a small bit of the gifts around her.

3. Her skin becomes a few shades paler when she's near us.

4. She's a bit too strong and fast for a human (I added that these were also only around vampires.)

At this point Emmett came near me and sat...
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posted by New_Moon_Master
Her heartbeat fast द्वारा the second. I watched her from the chair that I sat in अगला to the bed. It had been three days. She had not moved a muscle. My family stood at the दीवार behind me, saying nothing, not even breathing. I had not spoken to them. I hated them. They had gone behind my back, and turned Bella into...what? I did not know. A monster without a soul? I could not picture Bella as that, but the thought was excrusiating. It was almost over, almost all her human scent gone. She smelled amazing, the same yet differant. Sweeter, and I did not want to kill her, which was very odd for me....
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"Carlisle!" I felt so relieved to see him again. I realized I had missed him a great deal. I couldn't help myself, I ran up and hugged him. He seemed quite shocked, but he rubbed his hand against my back soothingly.
"Bella...it's good to see you..." I pulled away and he was starring at Alice, who was standing several feet behind me. We had just arrived, after what was supposed to be a twenty four घंटा drive but was only eleven. Alice had gone over twice the पोस्टेड speed the entire way. Rosalie and Emmett-thank goodness-weren't there at the moment. Esme, and Jasper stood in the room behind...
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I jumped at the sound of her voice. She was back already? But I couldn't focus on that for long. What had Jacob just said? Had I really heard right?
"Over my dead body!" he rowred at her.
He took a step आगे and tried to pull me over to him द्वारा my waist. Alice's hand grabbed mine, and I started to get scared that a tug-o-war would begin. That would be painful. Jake growled. I looked back at Alice. She was glaring at him in such a terrifying way...she honestly scared me a little. She yanked on my arm, and I came flying towards her, out of Jacob's grasp. She flung me behind her body. My mind...
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I was expecting the kind of reaction I used to get when I'd say those kinds of things. But she just looked at me. Speculating. Was she actually thinking about it?! My दिल beat faster as I grabbed at the oportunity.
"I could stay with you." I blurted out, and then thought better of it. "Unless आप wanted space, then I could find somewhere else. If आप did not want me crowding you." I was so happy that I might get what I had dreamt of for so long, I was babbling on.
"What would आप tell Charlie, Bella?" She कहा as though she could not believe I hadn't thought of that already.
I looked down,...
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Chapter Seven (what will embry do?)

I gulped and nodded. She knew what she was doing. Didn’t she? She smiled then jerked आगे on the bike, leaving me behind. I followed her quickly.
“Crap!” She yelled just before we got half way down the dust road. She screamed to a stop. I stopped just behind her.
“What is it?” I asked scanning her face.
“It’s those bloody ‘protectors’.” Her face was stony. “I was riding down here last week, and they told me to ‘pack it in या they’d stop me’.” She imitated Sam Uley’s voice. “They’re so weird. Sam Uley I think it was....
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I looked at the compass and the map, made sure the compass was pointing the direction on the spoke I had followed, and started moving again. What a pain it was to hike all this way. It was so much easier the first time I'd come here...
I had to think of something else every fast, if I ever wanted to make it home. Of course it was better when Jacob had come with me. My personal sun, lighting everything in his path. But I was और grateful for the fact that he had not taken this trip with me. FOr so many reasons I couldn't even count. For one thing, how would I explain my conversation with a vampire?...
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Hey..x
Here is chapter 3 of My True Love. Please go to my प्रोफ़ाइल to rate and leave टिप्पणियाँ THANKS!!!


I was shocked at the sight I saw when I woke up. Everybody was rushing around carrying heavy bags and fancy looking equipment to the cars outside.
“Jasper?” I called, I was anxious to know what was going on and I knew that he was the only one who would give me a straight answer. He was at my side before I could blink.
“What is it that आप want Nessie?” he asked with a warm but not quite genuine smile.
“What is happening?” I whispered “I just woke up and I can’t see mum या dad...
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it hurts to live. life to me is a सेकंड death, only like being left to bleed on a pavement instead of a quick stab, then to be left in peace. death and life are much the same thing now. only death seems और peaceful, i already know, as i watch other people living there lives, there is nothing left for me. fun was like a greek word to me now. i didnt know what i ment. i thought about making the most of life before the pain killed me for sure. i couldnt remember HOW to have fun. what was the point of going to the beach? it wasn't going to bring my future back. it wouldnt make me feel any better....
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 Bellas गुलाब
Bellas roses
Im really sorry I havent पोस्टेड in a long time I have been busy with holiday plans and homework over चोटी, शीर्ष of that too. Hope आप guys like this chapter though :P...




Bellas POV

That night was pretty dreamless, no dream at all. Probably because Edward was there and chased the dream away. But I havent had that one dream in a long time. He probably started to come over whe I never had that dream anymore. I would ask him in the morning if I remembered to do so. I felt releaved that he loved me as much I loved him. He was such a gentlemen and so kind; it was unbearable. He was just to good a person,...
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posted by PePs95
I haven't read any of the पुस्तकें yet, but i did watch all of the फिल्में released until now. I want to say that the story of the Twilight series is simply great! The intense love, the romantic atmosphere...everything in it is very involving! while watching both movies, my mouth was dripping and my body completely still. It was as if my mind was the only part of my body that was active. I was totally into it! I will watch both फिल्में again and i'll get totally inspired again. My feelings were totally mixed! I was engulfed द्वारा the magic of love!
posted by SuperFunFan1001
Yahoooo! So my story is really coming along. So आप think आप know what's gunna happen do you? Well I think I might surprise you!Ok so here! I really hope that I did good on the last chapter. Sorry if on this chapter some facts are wrong. I am not exactly an expert on the Volturi. Thanks for all of your comments!

Disclamer: Sigh....... I do not own Twilight या any of its characters. No matter how much I wish या beg I never will. :( Stephanie Meyer does...

bella POV

"Ok I'm ready." I कहा and started running in the direction that Alec and Jane had ran. I caught their scent and ran up to them. They...
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