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Chapter 17: Freedom City's Wrath
Part 2: The Shocking Truth

Dokuro's secret is out--he isn't the true Malice. After he sent his skeleton army after th­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­em, they ran for it. Whirlwind fired off an air sphere at some of the skeleton's, and they broke apart. But a bunch और kept coming for them, armed with swords.
"I don't think both of us can fight them all off, Whirl! We need to find Duji....and fast!"
Whirlwind agreed and kept on running away from the skeleton arm ay. Whirlwind grabed Jackson's hand and flew off deeper into the city. Whirlwind looked down at Jackson and asked, "About Duji...where IS he? Shouldn't he be with you?"
"He was, but he and I विभाजित करें, विभक्त करें up when he went off to face the citizen's solo.....I hope he's alright," Jackson added.
While they were on their way towards Shock, Shock and मक्खी, ड्रैक, ड्रेक were still face-to-face with the citizen's. They hid under a car, trying to stay clear of the wrath of the citizen's. It was quiet. Both Shock and मक्खी, ड्रैक, ड्रेक listened for any sounds of the citizen's talking या preparing to आग again, but nothing was hard through the dead, cool air.
"OK, why haven't they आग at us yet?" asked Drake.
"How should I know, Drake? या whatever your name is...." Shock asked back, somehwat irritated.
He peeked his head out from beneath the car and looked around for any sign of them. He looked at the nearby buildings, and he saw that the poeple has seemingly vanished. He looked back to Shock and said, "I believe the coast is clear, kid."
He grabbed Shock hand as he got up from under the car and stood back up. They looked around for anymore signs of the citizens.
"It's quiet. And we all know that when things get quiet, all hell breaks loose..." Shock
मक्खी, ड्रैक, ड्रेक continued to look around and said, "Exactly...which is why I'm calling for backup. I'm sure they'll come, but I need to be sure they get here before--"
मक्खी, ड्रैक, ड्रेक was cut off suddenly, when they both saw bullets flying at them. It didn't take long for them to notice the citizen's running towards them. मक्खी, ड्रैक, ड्रेक fired off several shots, while running away from the scene. He got a few of them, but wan't enough to stop the riot.
"Come on! We need to get आप outta here!" मक्खी, ड्रैक, ड्रेक screamed out.
Shock shook his head and formed electricity around himself, also making himself hover into the air.
"No....I'm gona take them ALL on!" he shouted back, having his eyes focused on them.
"Fine, then I'll be back with back up!" मक्खी, ड्रैक, ड्रेक called out, before officially leaving.
With one last effort to stand against the city, he flew off after them, firing off massive electrical bolts. One person was hit, while another jumped आगे to stab Shock with a knife. He quickly grabbed the guys hand and electrocuted him, then swung him around using his electrical whip, and slammed him into two other people. Another person tackled him down and they both rolled around on the street. When they stopped, Shock kicked the guy off him and stood back up. He then flew after him, and was ready to electrocute him. But before he could get to him, someone else nearby caused a peice of the concrete below him to come up and hit him. The impact sent Shock flying up higher, and hurt like hell. he fell back down to the सड़क, स्ट्रीट hard--with scrapes and scratches all over him. He got up, but was sore from impact.
"Damn you...." he called out.
Just as Shock charged toward the remaining citizen's, several police cars drove into the scene--one of them driving in between Shock and the others. Drake, along with other cops, got outta thier cars.
"OK, everyone, get back to your homes! This riot ends now!" मक्खी, ड्रैक, ड्रेक shouted, ready to use his gun if this gets ugly.
One officer came over to Shock and saying, "We need to leave...if आप come with us, you'll be safe."
"NO! I'm finishing what I started!" he shouted back.
Tyson, with a few other mobians, came up and appraoched Drake.
"We're not going anywhere til that kid is DEAD!" he yelled at Drake.
मक्खी, ड्रैक, ड्रेक aimed his gun at the remaining Mobian's, mostly towards Tyson. मक्खी, ड्रैक, ड्रेक had mixed emotions about shooting Tyson--but knew he may have to if Tyson kept this riot going.
"I never thought I would have to do this....I never did like you, but still..." मक्खी, ड्रैक, ड्रेक कहा to Tyson.
Tyson rolled his eyes and said, "Do आप think I care? Once I make that kid pay for this, I'll be outta your hair, COUSIN Drake..."
Shock heard that and then looked at Drake, asking, "You two are related?"
"Yeah...he's my सेकंड cousin. That doesn't matter now--Tyson? Get these people to go घर before this gets ugly! We got the 'criminal' under control," मक्खी, ड्रैक, ड्रेक told Tyson.
"Liar! आप idiots didn't do nothing...now WE will take a stand against that monster!" he shouted, while motioning the other mobian's to attack.
Out of pure reflex, he shot several bullets at the crowd as he ran.
"Go...GO! GET THE KID OUTTA HERE!" मक्खी, ड्रैक, ड्रेक screamed at one of the cops standing by.
Him and another cop quickly grabbed Shock as they ran for their cars. They got in as quick as they could and then drove off down the street, heading for the bridge. Ironically, at the सेकंड they drove off--Whirlwind and Jackson stopped them as they happened to walk by. It didn't take them long to notice the group of citezen's.
"Wait...if they're chasing after that police car, then Duji must be in it! We need to get to him before--" Jackson said, being cut off when seeing Dokuro.
Dokuro flew past them in air above them, making his way towards the police car Shock was in. Whirlwind grabbed Jackson's hand and flew after Dokuro. While driving, मक्खी, ड्रैक, ड्रेक happened to notice Dokuro flying past them.
"Isn't that him, Duji? You're...'master'?" he asked Duji, who sat in the back.
"It is! Wherever he's going, follow him!" he shouted.
With that, मक्खी, ड्रैक, ड्रेक drove faster, as he turned right down the सड़क, स्ट्रीट where Dokuro was heading. Several bullet sounds where heard hitting the car from behind them, as the angry mod chassing them was shooting at them. Shock rolled down the window and shot out multiple electrical blasts at them. Most of them where hit, while the others decided to back off for the moment.
"I got them to back off....now go get--" Shock said, but noticed that Dokuro was outta sight.
"What is it? Did he vanish?" asked Drake.
Shock nodded as he pointed towards that same old house that he saw before--the house that "Malice" told him to stay clear of. मक्खी, ड्रैक, ड्रेक stopped the car as he aproached the strange, creepy old house. They quickly got outta their cars and Shock went ahead of them, running up to the porch.
"Hey, whats wrong? Did he go inside या something?" मक्खी, ड्रैक, ड्रेक asked.
"Yes...I'm going inside..." he said, with a determind look.
After that, he opened the door and waisted no time going inside. मक्खी, ड्रैक, ड्रेक noticed Whirlwind and Jackson coming into the scene--Whirlwind lowering down to the front yard.
"Glad आप made it....your grandkid went inside after Malice," कहा Drake.
"Good...but we have some news: that guy isn't Malice! His name is Dokuro and he's not your regular Mobian...." Jackson called out.
मक्खी, ड्रैक, ड्रेक was a little shocked द्वारा the sudden news, but then motioned for the other officers that were with him to go inside.
"Let's worry about that later.....right now we need to catch this guy," he told Jackson.
As they went inside, Shock was already waking in the livingroom. The house was dead quiet--as it has been for the last 6 month. There were no furniture around, just a huge empty space. As he looked around the place, memories of that house came flooding back to him. he looked over at the section where there was once a couch, and he began to see a specific memory reply in his head. One of him and his parents watching TV. मक्खी, ड्रैक, ड्रेक and the others finally caught up to him. Jackson rushed over to Shock and was worried.
"Duji, are आप OK? Is he here?" he asked him.
He didn't quite hear him talking--he was toobusy thinking back. मक्खी, ड्रैक, ड्रेक came over to Jackson and said, "Wait...I think he's remembering..."
सेकंड्स later, Shock went up the stairs and down the hall. Jackson, मक्खी, ड्रैक, ड्रेक and Whirlwind all followed. Jackson looked at Whirlwind and asked, "What exacty are आप doing here? Are आप still after that Spectre guy?"
"Yes. Spectre कहा that him and Dokuro are planning to team up...." he added.
As they came up the hallway, मक्खी, ड्रैक, ड्रेक and a few other cops aimed their बंदूकों around the place.
"Shock? Are आप OK in here?" asked Drake, his voice echoing in the hall.
Shock was in his old room, looking around the place. He then saw another memeory reply in his mind as he looked at where his बिस्तर use to be. Thinking of these memories brought tears to his eyes as he silenty cried. Little did he know: Dokuro was watching him from inside a closet. The door was open, so he quietly stepped out into the empty room. Dokuro grinned maliciously as he saw what Shock was doing.
"Awww....is the lil कुत्ते का बच्चा, पिल्ला sad?" he asked him, clearly trying to taunt him.
He looked back and saw Dokuro standing there--he was angry.
"You lied to me, didn't you?" he asked Dokuro.
Dokuro rolled his eyes, though आप couldn't see it through his shades.
"Kid, we're way passed that now....so I'll just cut to the chase: I DID lie to you...." he announced.
Shock grew angrier and fired off some light bolts. Dokuro and jumped up and quickly flicked his wrists around, and started twisting Shock's bones.
"You....you कहा I had no family! आप कहा I was EVIL!" Shock screamed out.
While still holding Shock in his grip, he raised Shock's body in the air, saying, "Evil? Please....you were NEVER truely evil! I only made आप think it til I was done with you..."
Then he threw Shock across the room. Shock hit a nearby दीवार face first. Shock groaned in pain. He stood back up as Jackson and the other cops entered the room. They aimed their gun toward him.
"Put your hands up! I don't know what आप wanted with this kid, but it's over..." मक्खी, ड्रैक, ड्रेक कहा to him.
"Over? Far from it....wanna hear और of the truth, kid? आप DID have a family, but Malice killed them off 6 months ago," declared Dokuro.
When he heard that, he grey और angrier. And his teary eye's face was replaced with that of pure rage. Electricity circled around him. Jackson, मक्खी, ड्रैक, ड्रेक and Dokuro all backed away from him as this happened.
"Duji, I know you're probably in a of shock right now, but I want आप to know--" Jackson said, being cut off द्वारा Drake.
"Jackson, I think it's best we get outta here...." he said.
Then he got so angry, that his electricity became bright red flames. Shock didn't notice this of course, but the others did. At that moment, he officially remembered who he was and that Dokuro had lied the whole.
"You...you're gonna pay for this! For ever tinking आप could USE me like this!" he shouted, flames bursting from around him.
He made a loud scream and as he did so, a streem of आग burst from and went straight through the ceiling, making a huge hole. Dokuro knew this may end badly for him, so he flew out the window in a hurry. But Shock wasn't gonna let him off that easy. With आग still around him, he flew after Dokuro and smashed right into the wall, making another huge hole. Jackson rushed over to see if he could find out where Shock had went to. He looked upwards at the sky and saw him giving Dokuro hell. Shock, while still angry, made a firy sphere around himself and flew straight for Dokuro. He was coming on pretty damn fast, and Dokuro barely dodged it. He would attack with his bone-weapons but knew it was useless at this point. As he flew circles around him, he also shot out आग balls at Dokuro. He tried his best to dodge the attacks, but didn't do much good. Then had got an idea: he backed away some, and then started moving the बोन्स in Shock's arms while saying, "You think आप have me, don't you? Think again...."
He then made Shock push the button on that watch that he had दिया him a few hours ago. Afterwards he let go. Shock started to calm down some and gew confused. He heard beeping sounds from the watch and then saw a timer iluminate on the screen.
"What is this...? Why is it counting down?" he asked Dokuro.
"Considering it a birthday present form your master. Happy birthday, mutt!" shouted Dokuro, flying off.
He aw that the timer was counting down, and had 10 सेकंड्स left. He tried getting the watch off, but it wouldn't budge. He grew terrified, and didn't know what else to do. So as a last resort, he flew--WAYY up high as high as he could before it finally went off. The force of the blast still hit the city regardless, and poor Duji was cought at the center. But is this it? Is this the end of his journy?

TO BE CONTINUED
I’ll go with one per (almost every) character I do here, and I’ll do just SOME of them.

Rin

FORM: Three-mood forms
Basically rage forms. First form is normal, सेकंड mood doubles everything, but increases aggression, and third doubles that, but basically sends her into a bloodcurdling rage. The downside is that her nanites can't take it (the same for all 3-Mood identities), and completely burn out, leaving her as a completely chaos-energy-creature unless she is able to power down enough to regenerate her nanites. If she (or any 3-mood) becomes too explosive with energy, it can trigger the...
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Mancer had done nothing but stand there in silence as he watched what was going on around him. He was starting to wonder if he was even noticed anymore, not that he was complaining at all. He just stood where he was and slipped his hands down in his pants pockets, not knowing what to say या what to do, so he just continued to stand there in silence. He didn't have to stand there for long, however, before Cinder turned her head and noticed him.

"Oh, who are you?" Cinder asked in curiosity. "Are आप a friend of Kyle and Kagen's?"

"Yes, I am in a way. I suppose आप can call me their friend. I...
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posted by mephiles97
Chapter 1: A Snow दिन and a Simple Errand
Location: Waktini family residence, Northern District, Freedom City
Date: Friday, January 2nd
Time: 7:30 P.M.


"Hey, Mom? Can I ask आप something? Please?" A somewhat tall, slightly chubby yellow hedgehog asked with excitement in his voice as he walked up to a tall, long black-haired woman.

"Yes, Kyle? What is it?" The woman asked with a bright voice, turning her head to look at the hedgehog with a smile.

"Um... Well..." Kyle looked up slightly at his mother, taking a small breath. "Kagen and I wanted to hang out together and maybe play out in the snow...
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...Have आप ever felt like...you are being watched?Ⓧ

One day,a hero who is named MTL journeyed through the woods...In खोजिए of the remaining fragments of his past...however,He was not aware of the legend of the woods...and it's terrible dark evil that resides within...MTL traveled deep into the woods,passing many rocks,trees,shrubs,and owlsⓍ.MTL started to approach a bazaar area putting off a magnetic field which disrupted his nanite code and he had to revert to watch form in order to continue traversing...

MTL came upon a large three,massive.it's roots where the size of houses and it literally...
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posted by ripperoo1
CHAPTER 2
"Serrations"

I held the sword, feeling it's cold steel in my hand. My door creaked open. A man with a बरसती, लबादा and a dagger in his hand stood in my doorway. He strode over towards me, raising his dagger. I stepped back with each step he took.
"What do आप want?" I asked, my voice shaking. I took a few और steps backwards.
He pulled out a rope. Pushing me up against the wall, he put the rope around my neck. He raised the dagger up in the air. I raised the sword as far as I could हटाइए it, and slit his leg. He fell down to his knees and dropped the rope. I tackled him and put the rope...
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posted by silverstream101
 Tempest the भेड़िया (Now 18)
Tempest the Wolf (Now 18)
ok...i give trying 2 type it as a story...now ill just use as a paragraph...still 1st person though...hope u like it ^_^
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Well....my life was no real walk in the park...in fact...i hated it. My dad Rider the भेड़िया was a villian...and might still b...i dont even know if hes still even alive. Truthfully? i dont really care either way. I HATED it when he forced me 2 watch as he torchured people...but i did as he told me....if i didnt i was treated just bad as his prisoners...i BECAME a prisoner. But my life changed when a lil spy girl got caught...thats when EVERYTHING...
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 Boots with Asylum Straps
Boots with Asylum Straps
this is all the info on my characters that maybe isn't clear from the pictures i drew...so i'll सूची it here (Note: this does NOT include any background info. that's a compleatly different story)
Dark Blade (Hedgehog)
Fashion Sense: Pt. 1; Clothes
he has a punk style and always wares leather combat boots, usually with Asylum Straps and some sort of metal in places (like studs या a metal skull) his pants usually have visible stitches and multiple colors, some call them patch pants. he never wares a कमीज, शर्ट but always has a जैकेट on. from time 2 time he wares different gloves depending on how he...
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Name: Tyler Andrew सोना
Nickname: बाज़, बाज़न the Vamphog
Attire: Black, blue, and red sneakers
फर Color: सोना and brown
Eye Color: Green
Bio: When बाज़, बाज़न was young, he was turned into a vamphog. The reason he became a vamphog was his father came घर from work with some sort of chemical. When his father wasn't looking, he took it, and accidentally broke the bottle it was in. The chemical got all over his fur. Once his parents realized, it was too late. It got into his blood stream and made him a vamphog.
posted by gyrothehedgehog
Here I am. On the edge of a cliff, with him. His eyes are so red that they seem to be glowing as he approaches. I review my options; take a few steps back and fall over the cliff, possibly to my death या stay and let him kill me. Both options suck. I’ll die either way. He is a blue echidna, with white ring-like designs around his dreadlocks and a face twisted in a menacing sneer. “I never thought it would end like this, Gyro.” The rings encircling his wrists that his power have fallen off. One thought runs though my brain; I’m so dead. He pulls out a sword made of
heat-resistant...
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I've never been used to death...

Tension in the workplace, a jealous ex-boyfriend...

All I have to do is to piece together the evidence and finally close the case file...

But what's bothering me?

I know I'm missing something! There's something else here!

There's a strange fluid in her lungs...I don't buy the claim that she died in the tub.

The stage was set...

...the poor girl was murdered...

[AUTHOR NOTE: Hello everyone! I am going to be लेखन a new story and I would like to know if I should continue या abort the idea. So please critique and tell me what आप think. I appreciate it. :) ~Juli]
She giggled incoherently and swerved serpentine on the road in her black porsche. She really should have gotten a designated driver, but no one was available, so she drove. When she was drunk, she:
A.) thinks everything is a fun game.
B.) SEEKS OUT trouble.
and C.) Is easy prey.

 Right now, both A and B were applied. She intentionally went over the speed द्वारा 20 MPH. 
 When she heard the sirens, there were three things she could have thought.
1.) I can do this. SO LONG, SUCKAS.
2.) Mm... Trick #1.
or 3.) Trick #2.
 
 She thought the third one, and slowly and safely pulled over. There's a reason...
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posted by ShadowChaos
As Twilight ran to find me (Shadow the Hedgehog), he found out he could fly. "How am I able to this?" he asked himself. He found all of the things he could do cool since he thought that this was his first time using them. As he kept going, all he could think about was what I could look like. But he was also scared that I am a cruel villain. "What the-" he कहा as a blue hedgehog past him. Of course since he didn't remember anything he went to see who it was. "HEY!! BLUE HEDGEHOG?! WHO ARE YOU?!" Once Sonic realized that Twilight was calling him, he went to see him.
"Wait, आप don't know who...
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posted by shadowknuxgirl
G-Sil was chokeing Silhouette, holding her above a pond. Shock, V2, Claws, Prime, and Rico stood about 5 feet from them. One step closer, and G-Sil could've dropped Silhouette into the pond. Silhouette was bleeding oil, which made it look और disgusting than blood. Her oxygen supply was running low, and she could barely move. Her ears were releasing smoke. And her eyes looked red and tired. It was like her own personal hell. The sky was red and cloudy. The sounds of sirens filled the air. But I'm starting at the ending, let's start at the beginning, shall we.........?

Stay tuned for part 2!!!!!!!
(FC's belong to original owners!)
~Have a good Christmas, everybody!
(To the tune of "Jingle Bells")
Madjin: *wearing a Santa Claus hat*
Drexel: *Holding a present*
Chris: *wearing a तारा, स्टार on his nose and covered in clorful lights*
Madjin: Chris is such a hoe.
Chris: Well, Madjin is so gay!
Drexel: And I think आप all should know... Madjin's too scared to pray!
Chris & Madjin: HA HA HA!
Madjin: * frustrated* I'm not gonna say one thing.
Drexel: Are आप also scared of the light?
Madjin: I don't think आप should say that if आप want to live tonight!
Chris: OOOOHH, You're life fails!
Drexel: Yes, he fails!
Madjin: I've had enough today!
Drexel: But It's fun to tease आप so... Will I listen? Naaaaayyy!!
Chris held the gun up and shot. It hit a buzzbomber. Chris felt a tingling feeling in his stomach and chuckled. "MUAHAHAHA." He ran around, firing everywhere, hitting badniks, knocking down hills, and making loops collapse. "BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!" He shouted, running along. "This is SO COOL!" he shouted. About an घंटा had passed, and Green पहाड़ी, हिल Zone had been torn apart and filled with smoke and ruins and now looked like piles of blocks and dirt and scrap metal. He ran away, but then ran into a blue hedgehog. "Did आप do this?!" It said. "Ummmm..... आप DIDN'T SEE ME AND I WASN'T HERE!" Chris...
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 An early interpratation of Chris.
An early interpratation of Chris.
Shadow was walking through the ruins of Ark. He coughed in the debree. He had a flashback of Maria. He sniffed. He looked at a broken panel. It had a picture of a blob with a head and tiny writing. He remembered that from when the Ark was invaded with the Artifical Chaos. Then he looked at something not that familiar. It was a giant capsule with a few cracks in it and a body. It had a green liquid inside. "What's this?" Shadow said. He punched the capsule open. The liquid poured out. Shadow picked up a stick and poked the body. "Ha. Squishy." He continued poking at him. "SQUISHY SQUISHY SQUISHY!"...
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"How I did I get this new outfit? Well, I'm keeping it." Tak walked द्वारा and said, "Where'd आप get that?" Tak said. "I really don't know..." Zim said. He walked outside. He saw a flag. It had an M on the left side, an X in the middle, and a G on the right. "Huh." He said. He saw a strange creature that looked like a पार करना, क्रॉस between a hedgehog, a cow, a cat, an elephant, and a monkey. He had a wristband on his arm with the same sign that was on the flag. "My name is Stuler! Don't आप just प्यार me? शामिल होइए the Gary/Mary- Stu army!" He said. A group of people ran up behind Stuler and gave a strange...
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He was suddenly transported. He still had his cool clothes on, though. He was walking. It was pitch black. "That could've been cool." He कहा to himself. "NESS.... NEEESSSSSS.......NNNNNNNNNNEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS....... Oh, wait, I be doin' it wrong. ZIM....ZIMMMM.... ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZIIIIIIIIIIMMMMMMMMM....." He heard. It was echoey. It sounded like Gir. He started to hear strange music, no, not the giygas theme. Instead he heard "Levan Polka." He suddenly saw a red mist swirling all around him. He saw a slightly blurred Gir's face in it. "Gir?" He said. "I AM GIRGAS!! Girgas.... feels........
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Your not ment to be here. Vector mumbled, as he was walking around Bluebell, who was about the age of 7 या 9, Very young for her to be working at a consentration camp. Bluebell, आप need to get outta here..and fast.[b] He then drops a bag on her lap, she looks up. [b]"But, Vector.." She कहा softly. I don't really know where to go... and if आप told me, I'd forget... Vector then takes out a map of mobius, telling her where she should go, Bluebell nodded and stood up. She then looked at Vector, she didn't know why she कहा it, but she asked. I'd like some soap, please... There was silence for...
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 Midnight Stormcloud
Midnight Stormcloud
(Midnight Just Got Up)
Midnight:It's my birthday!Im finally 10!
Platinum:Can I come in?
Midnight:Sure!Come on in Platinum!
Platinum:Happy Birthday!
Midnight:Thanks!
Platinum:For your present It's something I couldnt wrap...
Midnight:Thats okay what is it?
Platinum:I found out the location of a Chaos Emerald!
Midnight:OMG!
Platinum:For your birthday,we are going to get the Chaos पन्ना together!
Midnight:Awesome!Thank You!
Platinum:Im your bff.It's my job.
(Downstairs)
Midnight:Mom,Dad?
Midnight's Mom:What is it?
Midnight:Platinum is going to take me to get a Chaos Emerald!Can I go?
Midnight's Mom:I dont know?What do आप think hun?
Midnight's Dad:She can go I trust Platinum.
Midnight and Platinum:YAY!
Then Platinum and Midnight had set out on their adventure for the Chaos Emerald.
The End I HOPE आप LIKED IT!
PLEASE READ PART 2!
 Platinum Silverburst
Platinum Silverburst