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People im making a story n i need ure opinion on the part i made!!!!

So i decided 2 make my first story(wooohoo) n a funny one...il post a small part off the 1st chapter....oh and sorry if my english is bad....il fix it when i finish it...feel free to criticise

the storys about a guy nicknamed failo couse he fails a lot....his full name is michael Mc Ground,the story follows him in a pcyho n sick adventures
"AUTOBIOGRAPHY OF A FAIL"
It was a stormy n cold night,rain had no intentions of stoping. I was looking out the window n i saw an old man in the rain.i feelt sorry n sad for him,so i pulled up my curtains n i layed in my बिस्तर to watch the tv. I was watching the news n i saw tht an abandoned mine was still full of सोना n diamonds.i decided to go in it tonight before its reopened.

So thats the part....what do ya think????
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cullenROCKz said:
I am confused!! Can u pls post the entire first part of the story.. I dont see the relation between the old man and the tw and सोना mines.. He feels sorry one moment and the अगला he decides to watch tv.. Does he multiple personality disorder या something?
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Yep....oh n the jokes in tht he feels sad for him so he pulls up the curtains so he wouldnt c him n so wouldnt feel bad for him xD????get it now
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N then he sees on the tv the abandoned mine with सोना so he wants to get it to get rich...i just wrotte the full 1 chapter...i just started fixing it
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Yes pls.. I would प्यार to read it... Good Luck..
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