what do आप think

I'm लेखन a story called taking chances right now but im starting to write a new story right now and heres a summary tell me what आप think. be honest plz.

adriana has been in a four साल reationship with a boy named Xaveor. adriana's parents got divorced when she was 6 she stil remebers when she had to choose, one of the two peope she coudnt live without. her parents tod her that she wi never have to choose like that. but they were wrong. xavie made her choose him या her fmily. Adriana chose her family. so Xaveor got really mad and started threatning her. when Xaveor kept on threattning Adriana, a guy came over and stopped him. his name was John. john made Xaveor back off of आप and he moved to another school after that for some reason. then yu try to be फ्रेंड्स with john while आप find out he has a mysterious past that आप are trying find out, and the summary is still being writen so tell me what आप think so far