does this sound like agood peom?

a tear fell down my soft cheek and soon another follows after it until im swept deep into my sorrow filled mind as i slowly slip away into the night....as i slowly remeber what fun memories i have made here these will last forever in my mind.
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SaturdaySurpris said:
YES!!t´s how I feel so many times. And I don´t think that that other टिप्पणी दे just made sense. XD
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thank आप :)
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codyo1 said:
Hell yes!
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^^ thanks this is the first peom i ever wrote
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