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What do आप think of this idea?And would आप read it?(do not copy!!!!!)

Kim is your average 13 साल up until her 14 birthday when she discovers she has extraordinary powers.She wakes up in the middle of the night to find that her eyes have gone a light sparkly गुलाबी colour.Her parents tell her they have powers too.Kim then takes special classes to train her powers were she meets this gut called Kristian.Kristians power is to make people fall in प्यार with him.Little does Kim knoe her real parents are 'evil' and trying to rid the world of powerless people!Kim falls for Kristian.Kristian asks Kim back to his house where he drugs her.Kim wakes up in her real parents house strapped to a chair!Her own parents are going to kill her for their own daughters powers!!!!!!!
What do आप think of this idea?And would आप read it?(do not copy!!!!!)
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I would so read that story sounds good
princesspinkla posted एक साल  से अधिक पुराना
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आप had me at the sixth line.
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आप लॉस्ट me at the part about प्यार
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greekgirlA said:
please write it and publish
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cheeeese said:
thats a good story :) whats kim's powers?
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Kims powers are: Controls weather with her moods,plant growth she can kill आप if she touchs आप she can control liquids and thats only a few!!!!!I havent thought of anymore!
Cullen-fan posted एक साल  से अधिक पुराना
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what about... can manifest the 4 elements??
1-2vampire posted एक साल  से अधिक पुराना
Elie_star said:
Mmm, I don't know. I'd like to read it... Maybe Kristian will fall in प्यार with her?
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Dearheart said:
(Sparkly, light-pink eyes?? *facepalm* OMG...)

Sounds to me like आप have a class 1 Mary Sue in the making. I strongly suggest आप run your character(s) through this test before आप go any further.

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It should help आप get a better idea of where your character's at and which cliches to steer clear from.
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(Sparkly, light-pink eyes?? *facepalm* OMG...) Sounds to me like आप have a class 1 Mary Sue in the making. I strongly suggest आप run your character(s) through this test before आप go any further. http://www.springhole.net/quizzes/marysue.htm It should help आप get a better idea of where your character's at and which cliches to steer clear from.
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What exactly do आप want me to do!!!?
Cullen-fan posted एक साल  से अधिक पुराना
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I'm sorry for being rude...it's just that this sounds too much like something you'd find on FanFiction.Net. Like I said, just take a few मिनटों and go through the test. I really think it will help.
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Chill out. No need to cuss. And dearheart was making A FREAKIN SUGGESTION
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forbiddenLURVE said:
sounds really good!!! if आप become an लेखक and get it print i'll read it [:
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BiteMeCullen107 said:
nice but आप should describe it more. i would so read it.
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1-2vampire said:
REALLY GOOOD!! i wanna b an लेखक and am riting a story too!!! im on chptr 11 so im not done yet, my link for the first 2 chapters is,

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PLEASE LOOK AND COMMENT!!!
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booklover101 said:
that is awsome r u going 2 finish it i would tottaly read it!!!
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anakin_fan81 said:
This sound kind of wierd. Maybe आप should work on the idea a bit and make it less confusing.
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Shepard14 said:
I like the Idea...Although DearHeart? Why is it आप sem so critical of other ppl's writing? I don't mean to sound antagonistic when i say that....I am just curious....You know...a thought just occured to me....what if मशहूर हस्तियों have profiles on here...hahahah that would be funny
to see their reaction when they see how many प्रशंसकों they have on this website alone..hahahaha
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लोल that was so बिना सोचे समझे with the celebrity thing. but that would still be awesome!
BellaCullen96 posted एक साल  से अधिक पुराना
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I KNOW RIGHT! COMPLETLY RANDOM...but i just thought of it and i HAD to share it
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renesmee13 said:
write और will ya?
it was pretty good =)
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samoangirl96 said:
i like the story except the kristian part sorta freaky but other then tat pretty cool story can't wait to read और of it
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THE KRISTAN PART IS THE BEST PART!
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sickla said:
wow
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writer67 said:
laws of stone of magic rules, do not allow others fall in प्यार it must be free will, for safety reasons!
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sixtynugget said:
How about while she is attending this magical school she befriends a geeky nerd who can mindread and use telekinieses
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that sounds cool
annalia posted एक साल  से अधिक पुराना
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GOOD IDEA
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bananafreak18 said:
WHEN U FINISH IT GIVE ME A HEADS UP CUZ THAT IS A AWESOME STORY!
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tall said:
nic story
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prim17luvr101 said:
My personal opinion is it's kind of boring and not well developed at all.
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Shirohige1939 said:
The story sounds great. I would read it. Sounds very interesting
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Sutelc22 said:
geat लेखन my friend.
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