गढ़, महल [xy xx] Runaway while आप can

I decided to make my first प्रशंसक fiction about गढ़, महल and Beckett so constructive criticism is appreciated. Please comment.




"It's getting late, we should sleep on it." गढ़, महल कहा looking at his watch.
Beckett looked up from the papers she was reading.
"Separately!" गढ़, महल stammered quickly.
Beckett lowered her eyes to the floor.
"Katherine Beckett, I never..." गढ़, महल whispered as he headed for the door.
"Well, why not, Castle? Am I not attractive enough for you?"
"No." गढ़, महल कहा turning around.
Beckett got up from her chair and walked over to Castle. "Then what is it? Don't आप sleep with...