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I've been working on a book for a while now. Im not gona post all of it at the same time, but I Will post the Prologue. Please tell me what आप think! I invite constructive criticism to make it better! THX!
Prologue
“Tanya! I don’t understand what’s so different about this kid! He’s done nothing to make me see him as special!” Tanya glowered at her obnoxious boyfriend. “Don’t आप see?” She कहा icily, “He isn’t like us!” Virgil and Tanya looked at there new child. He wiggled around in his पालना and giggled happily. The child crabbed the edge of the पालना and clung to it tightly. Suddenly, the boys’ eyes began to glow. When the glowing stopped, the boy released the पालना and continued to giggle and squirm. There was a scorch mark left on the bar from where his hand was.
Tanya looked at her hard headed boyfriend and said, “We where not like this. We didn’t giggle and squirm and go to sleep kindly. He’s soft hearted.” Virgil looked at Tanya with an expression half way between anger and sadness. “What are आप saying that we do?” Virgil asked. Tanya Looked at her child. He had her pale blue eyes and dark skin, Virgil’s snow white hair.
“I was talking to some of the other characters the other day,” Tanya said, “They told me about the Guides. They कहा that It’s getting to be the time where a child of two villains becomes a Guide.” Virgil looked at Tanya with a cool expression, “And आप think that it’s him?” Tanya looked at her boyfriend with annoyance. “It’s time for us to take the lead for a while. We villains need a turn to be triumphant.” Virgil nodded inn agreement.
“We should train him.” Virgil कहा flatly, “He obviously has your आग using abilities, and I have a strong feeling that he will be an excellent swords master.” Tanya laughed. “All in good time Virgil,” she said, “All in good time.”
I've been working on a book for a while now. Im not gona post all of it at the same time, but I Will post the Prologue. Please tell me what आप think! I invite constructive criticism to make it better! THX!
Prologue
“Tanya! I don’t understand what’s so different about this kid! He’s done nothing to make me see him as special!” Tanya glowered at her obnoxious boyfriend. “Don’t आप see?” She कहा icily, “He isn’t like us!” Virgil and Tanya looked at there new child. He wiggled around in his पालना and giggled happily. The child crabbed the edge of the पालना and clung to it tightly. Suddenly, the boys’ eyes began to glow. When the glowing stopped, the boy released the पालना and continued to giggle and squirm. There was a scorch mark left on the bar from where his hand was.
Tanya looked at her hard headed boyfriend and said, “We where not like this. We didn’t giggle and squirm and go to sleep kindly. He’s soft hearted.” Virgil looked at Tanya with an expression half way between anger and sadness. “What are आप saying that we do?” Virgil asked. Tanya Looked at her child. He had her pale blue eyes and dark skin, Virgil’s snow white hair.
“I was talking to some of the other characters the other day,” Tanya said, “They told me about the Guides. They कहा that It’s getting to be the time where a child of two villains becomes a Guide.” Virgil looked at Tanya with a cool expression, “And आप think that it’s him?” Tanya looked at her boyfriend with annoyance. “It’s time for us to take the lead for a while. We villains need a turn to be triumphant.” Virgil nodded inn agreement.
“We should train him.” Virgil कहा flatly, “He obviously has your आग using abilities, and I have a strong feeling that he will be an excellent swords master.” Tanya laughed. “All in good time Virgil,” she said, “All in good time.”
It’s the color of you
आप always wore it
It’s the color we shared
As we hid from them
With it we showed our true selves,
Though no one cared
Our नारंगी, ऑरेंज book bags
Were our shields from some of the pain
We protected each other
But it wasn’t enough
We were like two नारंगी, ऑरेंज crayons
When everyone else was green
Then आप left me alone,
All I had was our color orange
As they hit me
I took peace in knowing
आप were in the नारंगी, ऑरेंज field in the sky
आप always कहा was there.
The नारंगी, ऑरेंज of the sun set
Is your smile
Even though आप left too soon
Orange…
Now it’s my color
My way of remembering you
Now I am the lone नारंगी, ऑरेंज in the rainbow
Without आप here
I protect my own
Though I wish आप were here
Now नारंगी, ऑरेंज is my color
A color for your bravery
A color for my survival
नारंगी, ऑरेंज will forever be our color
Even though death took आप away
Forever नारंगी, ऑरेंज for you,
Sweet Cassidy.
आप always wore it
It’s the color we shared
As we hid from them
With it we showed our true selves,
Though no one cared
Our नारंगी, ऑरेंज book bags
Were our shields from some of the pain
We protected each other
But it wasn’t enough
We were like two नारंगी, ऑरेंज crayons
When everyone else was green
Then आप left me alone,
All I had was our color orange
As they hit me
I took peace in knowing
आप were in the नारंगी, ऑरेंज field in the sky
आप always कहा was there.
The नारंगी, ऑरेंज of the sun set
Is your smile
Even though आप left too soon
Orange…
Now it’s my color
My way of remembering you
Now I am the lone नारंगी, ऑरेंज in the rainbow
Without आप here
I protect my own
Though I wish आप were here
Now नारंगी, ऑरेंज is my color
A color for your bravery
A color for my survival
नारंगी, ऑरेंज will forever be our color
Even though death took आप away
Forever नारंगी, ऑरेंज for you,
Sweet Cassidy.
Violently, the ground shook,
As the mountain exhaled black smoke.
Overwhelmed, they ran for cover,
Those left began to choke.
Cherished, were the possessions left behind,
Melted and scattered as ash.
Beloved, the children lost,
They couldn’t make a तत्पर, तेज, स्विफ्ट dash.
Darkened, the cloudy heavens above,
Black clouds fell from the sky.
Covered, the people escaping,
With no way out they began to die.
Lost, the souls of the trapped,
A snatched half-chance at life.
Fallen is Pompeii;
Civilisation, प्यार and it’s people’s cries.
As the mountain exhaled black smoke.
Overwhelmed, they ran for cover,
Those left began to choke.
Cherished, were the possessions left behind,
Melted and scattered as ash.
Beloved, the children lost,
They couldn’t make a तत्पर, तेज, स्विफ्ट dash.
Darkened, the cloudy heavens above,
Black clouds fell from the sky.
Covered, the people escaping,
With no way out they began to die.
Lost, the souls of the trapped,
A snatched half-chance at life.
Fallen is Pompeii;
Civilisation, प्यार and it’s people’s cries.