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This is a peom I wrote for a competition at my school. Tell me what आप think of it, please?


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Have आप felt the torture of hate?
Like a poisonous cloud, it will wait,
Until आप burn in the flames of fury.
Then it will creep up and incapacitate.
Alas! आप will choke, and don’t try to deny your anger.
It is too late.

Hate is like grasping a red hot coal,
Intent on throwing it at another soul,
Instead it is you, yourself, who burns,
Then your own anger shall take its toll,
You’ll bring about your every mistake and failure.
You’ll be alone.

i was a normal 18 साल old colledge student until that night that horid night the night that all saftyein my life died it was a cold winters night and me and my friend trent were going to stay the night at the most haunted hospital in the world ( और like most haunted place of death and despair)waverly hlls sanitoryoum. "come on tristen were going to be laughing stocks of the city if we dont go" "trent." i कहा " i dont think we should go" " are u chicening out." he कहा " no" i snapped " but its not right" i argued to him "its these millions of death beads and u have famly that died there and so do i" " he looked mad at me mentioning his uncle who died there but i had to make him stop. "no" he कहा " we are going." to hell i thought if only i new