Twilight

I got this from Stephenie Meyer's website...I didnt write this myself!
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**A note: I don't pull any punches here, so if आप haven't read New Moon and आप don't want to be spoiled, don't read this.**

Writing a sequel is a very different experience than लेखन a story. It was for me, at least.

If you've read the link, then आप know that I didn't set out to write a novel या begin a career as an author. I was just लेखन down a story for my personal enjoyment, letting it grow as it would and lead where...

here is my twilight कल्पना life......
it is SERIOUS fantasy, its also SUPER long(I am NOT exaggerating so if आप are doing something important, आप should wait to read this some other time), some of the parts of the story are not in relation to twilight at all, while others are, so if i get something different than the book, its probably on purpose, and I’m not wrong, I’m just making stuff up!
also it is in a first-person story-thingy so if आप get lost, sorry! AND it is my first story-thingy(haha) so dont sue me if its THAT bad. just tell me where i can improve! टिप्पणी दे PLEAZ!

My name is...

yea i made the शीर्षक to be something a little less opinionated, and और open to other peoples opinon. so if आप agree, say why, and if not, give some examples of her good side! all i did was her bad side cuz thats my opinion. :)

These are from the first chapter of Eclipse.

pg. 14-Charlie to Bella"You're hurting Jake's feelings, avoiding him like this."
response: HOLY CRAP listen to your father Bella!!! आप have got a serious problem, and आप are hurting poor Jake in the process! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU?!?!?!?!? GET..A..LIFE, and leave Jacob out of it

pg. 17-in Bella's mind"I wrenched the door out...