Twilight Eclipse 09/09/09

i brush my hair and went down stairs when i got down
5 persons went inside the house
wow i mean this house is big but so many people i dont know

they were 2 really big and strong men on was pale ,beautiful and curly dark hair

and the other one had a darker skin he was good looking i guess

then the only woman was a blond girl probably the envy of every super model that had ever live

the other guy was also blonde and also sltong but not too strong

When i look at the last gut that enter i saw that he was already looking at me i couldn't understand his expresion i look away from his gaze confused...

I'm लेखन a fanfic called "Almost Alice" about Alice, Jacob, Jasper, and Bella, and I'd really like it if you'd review. If आप like it, I can put up a link to the story (which is much farther along than the first chapter, I can tell आप that). And if you're gonna be mean about it, don't bother commenting. Thanks!
-Alice <3

Almost Alice
Chapter One: Smoke


“I win,” Alice कहा smugly, holding out her hand towards Edward. “Again.”

Edward rolled his eyes as he searches his backpack for Alice’s “prize.” I smiled. She was getting to be exactly like Jasper, always betting on something....

bella's pov

"hello everybody this is Bella" edward कहा happily
"hi" i muttered shyly

carlisle step foward
and shook my hand" is a pleasure to see आप again bella, this is my wife Esme" the older woman she must be 26 years old she was beautiful and her look was warm and sweet the look of a mother
"edward had told me a lot a bout you" esme कहा and smile at me

edward squeeze my hand i look at him and smile getting लॉस्ट in his eyes

"i suppose आप remember emmet" edward कहा while emmet कहा hi with his hand

"of course i remember" i कहा and emmet laugh a booming laugh

"and this is my एंजल rose" emmet...

bella's pov

edward took my hand and we walk toward my parents

when my mother look at me her eyes got wider and my dad look surprized
edward was still holding my hand i was getting और nervous with each step a took foward

"Hello mother , father" my mother nodded and also my father
after a मिनट of silence
then my father look at edward
"Are आप carlisle younger brother Edward??" my dad ask and look at me when he कहा his name

probably remembering when i interrupt him and कहा edwards name i look at edward and he was repressing a smile probably someone was thinking something funny
my edward was...

-Jasper wants to go.

I frowned, turned my head and looked at her curiously, waiting for the rest of what she knew.

-But, Why?!

She sighed and said:

- He doesn’t talk with anyone. Not even me! And this shocks me. All I can see is that Jasper goes away. And if he goes away, I can’t survive. Not without him! He’s my other half.

I could feel pain with every word she said. I understood what she was saying. I had the same feeling when Edward went away. But at that time there was no one for me to talk with. She still had her eyes on the road, but after ten सेकंड्स of silence, she said:

-Bella, I’m...

bella's pov

i quickly felt asleep when we arrive घर
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i was in the woods
i was wearing my प्रिय dress it was a white cotton dress i wasn't wearing any shoes and my hair was free the sun make it look like it had red in it and the wind make it हटाइए ......
this was my happy place
then i saw that edward was standing द्वारा a पेड़ in the shadows
i run towards him and he open his arms
i jump and hug him tightly he hugg me द्वारा the waist also tighlty and sigh happily

"i प्यार आप edward" i कहा he smile brightly at me
he हटाइए clser until our lips touch when our lips touch i suddenly felt uncomfortable...

bella's pov ( another strange version of twilight remember is in like 1800's)

Edward's hands turned to fists
"WHAT" edward yelled

James jump back a little द्वारा the sound
but then he grab my waist and pull me closer to his body

"Yes आप heared me right Isabella is soon to be my wife so.." james stop talking
because edward's face change into a deadly and devilish glare james let go of me and step one step back
"Hey why don't आप go mind your own buisness" james कहा trying to sound angry but he sounded terribly scared i smile

edward was still looking at James and he took one step foward but then 2...

He turned off the car near a cliff and Got out himself. I opened the door and got off the car.

His face was in pain and he was struggling to talk. I realized his eyes changed color and he was coming closer to me every second.

-Edward, What are आप doing?! Edward?!

But he wasn’t my Edward anymore! His eyes were wild and I couldn’t recognize him at that moment. His एंजल face was suddenly an evil one. Edward was coming closer and with every step he took, I took a step back where the car was. In a second, I recognized Alice, jasper, Carlisle and Emmet which circled me and were protecting me from...

TWILIGHT:
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Bella Swan’s हटाइए to Forks could have been the most boring हटाइए she ever made. But when she meets the mysterious and alluring Edward Cullen, her life takes a thrilling and terrifying turn. Up until now, Edward has managed to keep his vampire identity a secret in the small community he lives in, but now nobody is safe, especially Bella.
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NEW MOON:
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Star-crossed प्रेमी Bella and Edward return find themselves facing new obstacles, including a devastating separation, the mysterious appearance...

I was crying when Edward told me he doesn’t wants me anymore his face was hard as a statue with no emotions I was begging him to stay but he कहा its to dangerous for him to be with me it occurred to me maybe Alice had a vision that something is going to happen to me I looked up at him with pleading eyes but he turned around and left me in the woods.
I woke up screaming from the nightmare I saw, Edward was holding me in his arms ,he was looking at me confused I looked back at him seeing him there with me it was just a dream, I was dreaming , trying to comfort myself “are आप alright love?”He...