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I'm लेखन a fanfic called "Almost Alice" about Alice, Jacob, Jasper, and Bella, and I'd really like it if you'd review. If आप like it, I can put up a link to the story (which is much farther along than the first chapter, I can tell आप that). And if you're gonna be mean about it, don't bother commenting. Thanks!
-Alice <3

Almost Alice
Chapter One: Smoke


“I win,” Alice कहा smugly, holding out her hand towards Edward. “Again.”

Edward rolled his eyes as he searches his backpack for Alice’s “prize.” I smiled. She was getting to be exactly like Jasper, always betting on something....

Mysterious love

-chapter one-



It was my first दिन of 11th grade.My alarm clock went off I stayed in बिस्तर for a little while I didnt want too get up.But after a miniute या two I just got up.I went too my closet and pick out some clothes really it was just what I seen first.After I dressed my self I went down stairs too see my father in the रसोई, रसोईघर makeing coffee.Soon he would be on his way too work, just like every day.My father is a lawyer for the town of Bartonville,Arkansas. Every body liked him thoughs who didnt did not know him very well,but he is very queit kinda like me.Him and my mother...

bella's pov

edward took my hand and we walk toward my parents

when my mother look at me her eyes got wider and my dad look surprized
edward was still holding my hand i was getting और nervous with each step a took foward

"Hello mother , father" my mother nodded and also my father
after a मिनट of silence
then my father look at edward
"Are आप carlisle younger brother Edward??" my dad ask and look at me when he कहा his name

probably remembering when i interrupt him and कहा edwards name i look at edward and he was repressing a smile probably someone was thinking something funny
my edward was...

The car is warm and as we drive off the reservation, my mind can only think of my dreams. They were so real so life like. They felt like the were really happening . My future couldn't already be set द्वारा my nightmares, could it?

"What are आप thinking about?" Jacob ask's me, never removing his eyes from the road. He is so good at setting the mood.

"Life, in general." I answer, not wanting him to worry. His face looks emotionless.

"I'm a good listener." he turns to me and smiles. "Really whats up?" He ask stoping the car.

"I'm just worried thats all."

"Do आप want to go se Carlisle?" His expression...

I watched my Aunt pack my bag. She barley told me that I was going to stay there a whole year. " Do आप want to take this Ipod" she asked. I didn't say anything. " आप know this silence treament won't do आप any good" She said. "Ok grab your backpack and let's go" she whispered. I followed her to the car. We arrived at the airport and she hugged me and cried." Be good and listen. The sonner आप start to talk the sonner आप get to come home. I didn't want to come घर and pass द्वारा the empty lot that once held my home. "Bye. प्यार you. आप better leave the plane to Arizona is about to leave" she...

hope आप like it if it is looking to much like twilight sorry a twist is coming promise

his car wasnt that fancy like the cars i was used to seeing या driving but it was clean and new.and he look great driving it...i ask one of the सवालों to distract me
"so do आप have any family how old आप really are do आप have any powers why did आप chose to live in here?" ok i ask और than one question
he smile at me "calmly i will answer all your सवाल "he smile and started
"i am 25 years live old but my growing stop i think आप could say 18 या 19 years old never a way to be sure right?" he look at...