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Hey all I'm gonna post 1 chapter today for my friend ashesandwine and of course for all of आप thx for reading.Now I'm gonna shut up and let आप read. P.S. Don't kill me

Bella's POV


"Alice have आप hunted yet?" I asked her ,looking her straight in the eyes."Well no.I kinda forgot with all the planning for your party.But who cares." Alice कहा in her It Doesn't Matter voice.I rolled my eyes.It was so Alice to forget hunting while planning a party."Let's take a few pictures before open any और presents"Esme said.I Took pictures with all of them even Rosalie.Then Alice shoved a wrapped box into...

अगला chapter should be up tomorrow.. I HOPE! XD comment!

CHAPTER FOUR- Who are they?

It was a day, just like any other day. I was walking down to the shopping centre, along the समुद्र तट on the sand, not for any particular reason, but just to feel the morning sun on my skin. But of course, being me, I started दिवास्वप्न about the upcoming Saturday, our hunting day, when I bumped into someone. I knew that I could continue walking and pretend like nothing happened, but I acted disorientated just so I could get a good look at the person I knocked into. I started at his feet, slowly moving my head...

Sorry it took me soon long to finish लेखन this,
and getting it up,
I've been a bit busy, so I never had time to
write it.
but anyways here's the long waited for,
Chapter Seven of my Twilight प्रशंसक Fiction.
Hope everyone likes it[:

p.s. Sorry this chapter's so long,
i wrote it in four days, so everyday i added more
so it's quite long x]
sorry.

-Yuki<3


“Edward?...” I asked as I sat up in the bed. “Yes love?” “Can I ask आप a question....?
He paused for a half a second, thinking .
“Sure, okay.. What is the सवाल my love?”
I thought for a second, “Well... I was wondering.. It’s been...