This is my first venture into any sort of प्रशंसक fiction so if आप could leave a टिप्पणी दे telling me what to improve on that would be great. Thanks!
Forks High School isn't that big, I thought frantically. Miniscule, in fact, compared to my old school in Phoenix. Its ridiculous for me to get lost! As I groped for my schedule to try and figure out where Building 3 was, I internally tried to write this off as stress या hunger. PMS, even. But deep down I knew why I was so scatterbrained that particular morning. I scowled at the shining sun. Why did it have to come out at all? I knew I was being silly. Being away from Edward sometimes did that to me.
When I finally made my way to my सीट in Building 3, I plopped down and began doodling idly on the front of my notebook. I was interrupted from wondering whether या not Edward would be back that night द्वारा a familiar voice.
"Hi Bella. Are आप all right?"
"Yes, Mike...I'm fine. Thanks for asking."
"Hey, I noticed Edward was gone today. Are आप doing anything--"
"All right. Today's topic for discussion is the Alfred Wegener theory of continental drift..." cut the teaher's voice through the suddenly thick atmosphere in the room.
I let the teacher's voice fade out while silently thanking him for saving me from a painfully embarassing discussion. I liked Mike, but sometimes it was so hard for him to realize that I had a boyfriend...that would eternally be superior to him. Poor little guy, I thought.
The rest of the दिन passed painfully slowly. I won't suffer आप the specifics. When I got home, Charlie was still at the station. I popped some leftover lasagna in the microwave for a couple of मिनटों and then went upstairs to do my homework. Satisfied that I'sd eaten up a lot of time, I went downstairs to make a सलाद and was shocked to see that only half an घंटा had passed. Grinding my teeth, I sat down to watch TV for another hour. Finally I heard Charlie's entry and started to get रात का खाना out on the table.
"Hi Bells. Sorry I'm a little late."
"That's fine, dad. I did my homework. How was your day?"
A crease appeared between his eyes. "Well...do आप remember those gang killings in Seattle last year?"
A chill passed through me. I remembered better than most. "Yes..." I replied cautiously.
"It's happening again. This time closer to here. Same bizzare range of victims, same burned bodies..."
I almost dropped the lasagna pan. Numb with shock, I caught it before it hit the floor and put a hand on the counter to steady myself.
"Hey, don't be scared.It's not that big of a deal. Not nearly as many as before."
"I'm not scared. Just surprised," I lied.
We ate रात का खाना in silence. My head was whirling with emotion. Who was it? I could have reason to be happy. Maybe it was Senna, या Benjamin. At the same time, I was petrified. The Volturi had a good reason to be in the area: me. I ruminated on these questions, restless for Edward's arrival so I could ask him.
Forks High School isn't that big, I thought frantically. Miniscule, in fact, compared to my old school in Phoenix. Its ridiculous for me to get lost! As I groped for my schedule to try and figure out where Building 3 was, I internally tried to write this off as stress या hunger. PMS, even. But deep down I knew why I was so scatterbrained that particular morning. I scowled at the shining sun. Why did it have to come out at all? I knew I was being silly. Being away from Edward sometimes did that to me.
When I finally made my way to my सीट in Building 3, I plopped down and began doodling idly on the front of my notebook. I was interrupted from wondering whether या not Edward would be back that night द्वारा a familiar voice.
"Hi Bella. Are आप all right?"
"Yes, Mike...I'm fine. Thanks for asking."
"Hey, I noticed Edward was gone today. Are आप doing anything--"
"All right. Today's topic for discussion is the Alfred Wegener theory of continental drift..." cut the teaher's voice through the suddenly thick atmosphere in the room.
I let the teacher's voice fade out while silently thanking him for saving me from a painfully embarassing discussion. I liked Mike, but sometimes it was so hard for him to realize that I had a boyfriend...that would eternally be superior to him. Poor little guy, I thought.
The rest of the दिन passed painfully slowly. I won't suffer आप the specifics. When I got home, Charlie was still at the station. I popped some leftover lasagna in the microwave for a couple of मिनटों and then went upstairs to do my homework. Satisfied that I'sd eaten up a lot of time, I went downstairs to make a सलाद and was shocked to see that only half an घंटा had passed. Grinding my teeth, I sat down to watch TV for another hour. Finally I heard Charlie's entry and started to get रात का खाना out on the table.
"Hi Bells. Sorry I'm a little late."
"That's fine, dad. I did my homework. How was your day?"
A crease appeared between his eyes. "Well...do आप remember those gang killings in Seattle last year?"
A chill passed through me. I remembered better than most. "Yes..." I replied cautiously.
"It's happening again. This time closer to here. Same bizzare range of victims, same burned bodies..."
I almost dropped the lasagna pan. Numb with shock, I caught it before it hit the floor and put a hand on the counter to steady myself.
"Hey, don't be scared.It's not that big of a deal. Not nearly as many as before."
"I'm not scared. Just surprised," I lied.
We ate रात का खाना in silence. My head was whirling with emotion. Who was it? I could have reason to be happy. Maybe it was Senna, या Benjamin. At the same time, I was petrified. The Volturi had a good reason to be in the area: me. I ruminated on these questions, restless for Edward's arrival so I could ask him.
Okay, so I'm लेखन a book on www.FanFiction.net, and it's about the Sookie Stackhouse Novels द्वारा Charlaine Harris, its a प्रशंसक fiction, so I dont want to make publicity out of it, I just want ppl to read it, and tell me what they think!
So, if आप have time on your hands, and आप wanna read what I wrote (which has वैंपायर and werewolves, and shapeshifters, witches, etc. (like in the actual series)) then follow this link, and tell me what आप think in टिप्पणी दे if आप have a प्रशंसक fiction account, if not tell me what आप think down below this! Please do so, I really wanna know if its good या not...thanks for पढ़ना this and hopefully u follow the link!
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So, if आप have time on your hands, and आप wanna read what I wrote (which has वैंपायर and werewolves, and shapeshifters, witches, etc. (like in the actual series)) then follow this link, and tell me what आप think in टिप्पणी दे if आप have a प्रशंसक fiction account, if not tell me what आप think down below this! Please do so, I really wanna know if its good या not...thanks for पढ़ना this and hopefully u follow the link!
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Hi! I am both happy and sad to announce that I will be on a vacation for the अगला 12 days so I will not be posting as much. But hey... VACATION TIME! YAY haha लोल so I'm sory and will try to post soon!
loves!
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Hi! I am both happy and sad to announce that I will be on a vacation for the अगला 12 days so I will not be posting as much. But hey... VACATION TIME! YAY haha लोल so I'm sory and will try to post soon!
loves!
Oh and keep looking for अपडेट्स u never know!
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