True Writers Article: Misty: The First Chapter Chapter 1 (2nd Rough Draft)

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Misty: The First Chapter Chapter 1 (2nd Rough Draft)

posted by kitty190123

One day. A girl named Rachel was camping with her friend, Misty. Later, they climbed trees. When Rachel fell from 5 feet, Misty went into the deep, dark forest to look for the ranger. After 2hours, Rachel decided to look for her friend. After searching, she found a row of what looked like cottages. Curious, she stepped into a newly built one. She saw a girl with long whitish-blonde hair and a white dress, slightly torn.You know, it kind of looks like..."AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!"

Please tell me if it needs any other revisions. If not, I will हटाइए on to chapter 2. Note: For Chapter one, I will not go farther than "AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!"

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hgfan5602 Okay, don't revise this. I mean, just two tiny errors. When Rachel fell 5 feet (NO FROM) Space between 2 and hours

alicia386 yep i likes this one.

लेखन for the Joy

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Source: गूगल i guess

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inspiration

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लेखन Jokes

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लेखन for the Joy

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Source: गूगल i guess

Be True to आप

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Inspiration

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Just Because

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Through Her Eyes...

posted by malmcd

Alice could still fell the warm breeze glide across her skin and through her blonde streaked स्ट्रॉबेरी, स्ट्राबेरी red hair, making it fly every which way. She remembered looking over at he father with his warm brown eyes and brown hair a shade litter then his eyes. His nose big as every. She would always make fun of him for that nose. She remembered leaning in to give him a warm किस on the check and saying, “I प्यार आप dad.” He looked down at her and said,”I प्यार आप two.” As he turned into the अगला road, She gasp. He slams on the breaks but it’s to late. They were heading straight at another...

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Daredevil's Vs. Murderer's Ch.4

posted by Problematic129

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Chapter 4
    Be a disgrace, I’ll mess up your face
    “I’m loving this town, I mean one मिनट in that hellhole and suddenly I’m popular. Can आप believe it? I’m not even kidding, and this really hot girl was giving me the look, आप know Zy, ‘the look’.”
    I nodded laughing as Azerien shoveled another handful of स्पघेटी, स्पेगेटी into his mouth, father wasn’t घर when we came back and we found he hired a maid. A bit weird and totally awkward, but...