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The एंजल went up.

Sesshomaru braced himself for attack. He instigated this battle, but he should have known it was a battle he couldn’t win!

~2~

How life can change so quickly. Sesshomaru had heard this saying before, but it bore little meaning....

This is a prequel to Saharah, and the first part to chapter 1 that will be divided into two to three parts, depending on length. The remaining parts will be पोस्टेड up shortly.

Edited द्वारा LadyLilith :)

And thanks to the encouragement and support of sesshylover (sesshyz) and my husband Matt :D

Chapter 1: Omiah, Part 1

775 AD – 1997 AD

The heavens see all
The heaves know all
The heavens hear all
Under the sun,
Upon the earth
And what lies therein
In the beyond
And underneath

In the साल 775 AD, in a remote village in the desert of Djudea, a woman’s voice cried out, “Heaven help us!” Alongside her,...

Chapter 2

“Stranger explain yourself, why do आप barge in unannounced into a person’s home?”

Kagome just froze, and stared back at the familiar face, a face she knew so well. A face she both loathed and perhaps even a little feared, about a face for whom she had also an ilking of sympathy towards believing she was the living dead. And yet, Kikyo stepped forwards her eyes cold and narrow glaring almost threatening at her. “Explain yourself, and why is it आप claim to know me?”

A icy chill rose up Kagome’s spine chilling her to the bone. This was Kikyo that was addressing her, she should...