Dose anyone have a tile sugestion and is this any good?

Have आप ever been hurt द्वारा the one आप love
Have आप ever wanteed to change
Who आप were, who आप are, who आप will be
Feeling as though your life is all laid out
Wondering why आप have the life आप have
आप have it for a reason
Figure it out!

Have youo ever been hurt द्वारा the one one आप love
Have आप ever felt so betrayed
That आप wanted to die
Don't give up
Things will change...for the best

Have yoou ever tired to change the world
With just a song
Try to change a दिल just द्वारा saying "hello"

Have आप ever though आप had true love
Then found it in a total stranger
Have आप ever had so much hate
Then saved a soul that was dying alone

All of us have in one way या another
Live life your way
The futures always changing








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BittenGirl said:
wooow!that is amazing!you should write और poems because आप are really good!
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irena83 said:
It's a nice poem, emotional, partly dark but filled with a hope.
Suggestions for the tittle could be:
- Eternal struggle
- Pieces of living hope
- Wondering mind
;)
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