final?

I know generally speaking this isn't a very 'emo' poem but I gathered since कविता is a way of expressing emotions freely for some people I would post this because there is also quite alot of good कविता on this site.

I am a daughter hurting, and trying to regain my mothers love. I wrote this poem from my heart, and find कविता a very satisfying way to get my feelings out. This is the first poem I have ever really worked hard on, and actually finished. Thanks for पढ़ना it in advance...

I remember the good times,
That we once had...
But still my life,
Is oh...so sad,
I try to look forward,
But my...