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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. द्वारा no means am I forcing आप to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless आप truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before आप start posting. It can be as little as a bio, या as big as an entire लेख series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no और than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he या she is in, can pull out another trick out of his या her hat.
4. If आप absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his या her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely बिना सोचे समझे and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when आप have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the अगला दिन you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own या is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the हाल का outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, या claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If आप must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, या so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if आप do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot या stabbed in the heart, then pop up मिनटों later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull या flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to या dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to या dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created द्वारा you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing या potential character is a Mary Sue, या if आप suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, आप can take link. If आप want, आप can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case आप were curious, which आप probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all आप want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, द्वारा no means do आप have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
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"Is this cool या what?!" the teen exclaimed और than asked. His companion merely grunted a reply barely audible over the cheering crowd.

"Oh come on! How can आप not like him?!"

"Do I really need to tell आप again, Parker?"

"Yes."

"He's an eccentric, प्लेबाय billionaire who goes out at night and--"

"And?" Peter asked, smirk plastered to his face.

Sam grinned. "Ah, you're right." He frowned again. "I still don't like him."

"Whatever." Peter said, waving his hand absentmindedly.

"And now, ladies and gentlemen, Samuel Grant!"

The crowd burst into fresh cheers as Sam walked on-stage and shook the billionaire's hand. "Pleasure to meet आप Mr. Stark."

"He's a natural actor." Peter shrugged.
posted by Blaze_YJ
Name: Blaze Burnett

Age: 16

Gender: Female

Appearance: blonde hair and dark blue eyes ( eyes can change colour depending on mood)

Personality: she is very strong willed and powerful, she often enjoys sparing but seems to be very stubborn when she needs help या is in danger.

Powers/ Abilities: she can teleport ( but usually fails) she is very handy with her sword and has many skills in combat .

Past: when she was young, her mother died being stabbed द्वारा her father and she was abused द्वारा her father for many years, she ran away and was set off on her own until she was found द्वारा flash and was recommeneded to jooin the team.

( hope आप like it i worked really hard and think i did a good job)
posted by Robin_Love
Oh yeah! My creativity strikes again!!!!


The sound of a gun and breaking glass pierced through the night. The sounds of a struggle were clear for anyone close by. Meaning only two. He stumbled backwards, taken back द्वारा the blow. It didn't last long. He kicked, punched, dodged, did all in his power to keep the other one down. His cape shadowed his every move. He was a figure in black, manipulating every thing with his tactical brain. He threw the other one against a wall, watching as he fell and knocked over a few trashcans. He was breathing heavily but prepared for an attack. Nothing. He laughed...
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posted by The_Writer
(I'll have pictures later)


"No results in police database, google--"

The large computer chimed. 

"One result..." Sam muttered, opening it. A chill ran down his spine as he read the two words. "Turn around"

He spun, grabbing his sword and pointing it at the figure in the shadows.

"Come out." he said.

The woman walked out. Now that she was standing still in front of him, he could get a better look at her. 

She was tall, that was for sure. She wasn't bad looking either, but the टैटू ruined it all. They covered her left shoulder and arm as well as her right hip and leg. Blackness swirled around the...
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posted by anime-niac
Korran's POV

I decided to go out and find a place to draw as there hadn't been anything huge happening in the cave for days now. I put my sketch book and pencils into my bag and walked out of my room shutting the door behind me. As I walked through the cave I noticed how deathly silent it was and shivered at the feeling of loneliness that tugged at my heart. It had been like this for days and I was still diturbed द्वारा it, I summoned my shadow beast Amoria in hopes that it would dull the loneliness. We walked out of the cave heading into town hoping to find a peaceful place to draw. I stuck to...
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posted by Robin_Love
 Zeth
Zeth
I’ll add his OC Bio underneath all this. He’s one of the Outsiders, just one I don’t always use.

LAYER ONE: THE OUTSIDE
Full Name: Zeth Parker
Nickname: Z, Zay
Reason या meaning of name: Gift of God
Eye Color: Green
Hair Style/Color: Brown, short
Height: 5’ 7”
Clothing Style: Modern
Best Physical Feature: Eyes

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: Being found
Your Guilty Pleasure: Warm Fires
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: People आप can’t trust
Your Ambition for the Future: Is to live an option?

LAYER THREE: THOUGHTS
Your First Thoughts Waking Up: Must...sleep
What आप Think About the Most: My old master...
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posted by MafiaYJ
DID A WHOLE REVAMP FOR THIS GAL

General

Full Name : Katyushka Matryona Pavlova; Katyushka Dmitrievna
Nickname: Mafia, Cad, Yushka, Yona, Nana, Kat
Gender: Female
Place of Birth: Nyda, Russia
Birthday: April 22, 1994
Currently living in: Based in Gotham; constantly traveling
Species/Race: Human
Ethnicity: Russian
Occupation: Formerly, assassin
Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual
Social Status: Unknown

Appearance

Body Build: Muscular, some curves
Height: 5’5
Weight: 144 lbs
Skin colour: Warm Ivory
Hair style: To her shoulders to chin, depending on when आप catch her, always down.
Hair colour: Red
Eye colour:...
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posted by Robin_Love
 Kai Conley
Kai Conley
LAYER ONE: THE OUTSIDE
Full Name:Kai Conley
Nickname: None
Reason या meaning of name: आग
Eye Color: Brown
Hair Style/Color: Blonde, wild
Height: 5’10”
Clothing Style: Modern?
Best Physical Feature: Everything ;)

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: Dying without living
Your Guilty Pleasure: Video Games
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: Fakes
Your Ambition for the Future: To live

LAYER THREE: THOUGHTS
Your First Thoughts Waking Up: I’m not ready for this
What आप Think About the Most: Fire
What आप Think About Before Bed: Finally over
You Think Your Best Quality Is: I don’t judge

LAYER FOUR: WHAT’S BETTER?
Single...
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posted by SilverWings13
It was her brother's idea of apologizing. Every time Ana left for an errand, या to go for a run as she had done two hours ago, she returned to find a new contribution to the ancient two-bedroom cabin. Yesterday it had been a pile of dry firewood, the दिन before a repaired रसोई, रसोईघर window. She had considered tossing the logs into the freezing river या shattering the window with a stone, but despite her anger, those resources allowed her to stay in the dilapidated केबिन away from the गढ़, महल where her brother lived like the false prince he was. The freezing mountain side was unfamiliar territory...
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posted by SilverWings13
LAYER ONE: THE OUTSIDE
Name: Callaghan Ivan Rurik
Reason या meaning of name: Callaghan like the royal O'Callaghans of Ireland, Ivan for Ivan the Terrible of Russia, and Rurik because my mother's last name is और valuable than my father's.
Species: Warlock
Eye Color: Honey in the sunlight, midnight in the shade
Hair Style/Color: Short and dark with blonde highlights
Height: 6' even
Clothing Style: Flannels, t-shirts, jeans, and my glasses
Best Physical Feature: Everything (his humility)

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: Bats... Big, flying rats *shivers*
Your Guilty Pleasure: All night movie marathons...
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posted by SilverWings13
Note: Happens simultaneously as link


Hounds on the Bridge

The girl blinked quickly as her eyes adjusted to the sunlight while the white portal she had stepped through faded from existence. A warm Mediterranean breeze rustled her untidy red curls, carrying the scent of the sea. As much as she wanted to run through the narrow streets until she was panting for that sea salt sweet air, there was no time for such leisure. Her concern was for someone who had been left behind in the city द्वारा mistake.
Before she could even wonder about the trio that had meant to accompany her, her eyes found them. Though...
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posted by Robin_Love
 Jessie Bennett
Jessie Bennett
Name: Jessie Bennett
Alias: None
Powers: Healing, combat
Occupation: Doctor
Weakness/Limits: Unknown
History: Jessie Bennett came from a long line of pure-blood healers. Her race is unknown, despite how human she looks. Her दिया name has been forgotten. She came to Earth much like the Man of Steel. But she was found द्वारा a traveling caravan in an Arabian desert. She grew up among them and immediately took a fondness to medicine. द्वारा accident, she found out her inhuman abilities when she was five. Almost immediately, she was sent away, to America. She spent almost a साल in a facility, learning English....
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
Hi, life has been busy, sorry, kthnxbai



Chris' eyes widened as the weather began to spiral out of control, his grip on Alex tightening even more. "You're too emotional to even try and restrain him.." He swallowed and his eyes darted to Tobias who was tending to the speedster. "You three get out of here!" He handed Alex off to the two males, blowing into his hands afterwards. "Jaime!" He called out, slowly making his way through the blinding snow. Scotty snarled, snow and wind spiraled around the लोमड़ी, फॉक्स as he made his way over towards Cadaver, shoving Erasers aside and pushing his way through,...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
 Before work
Before work
I lumped the two new ones in together because I didn't want to spam with articles.. My older characters will be out later. (:

Name: Fletcher Caverly
Alias: Was formerly known at Catalyst
Occupation: Was a hero, now is a scientist who secretly assists the YJ team.
Age: 25.
Appearance: Brown hair that usually hangs in front of his eyes, however when he is working it is usually pushed up in the front. He has dark green eyes and is unusually tan for someone who doesn't go outside much. He stands at 6'2 and is fairly thin.
Powers/skills: Fletcher is able to speed up chemical reactions with his touch,...
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posted by SilverWings13
Note: For anyone not up to speed with my one hundred and then some OCs, the small child = Alek, the hero/ Tara's boyfriend/ that guy who was practically Ary's brother but आप all shipped them anyway. Dr. Felis is the bad guy and Aleksander's father, though Al doesn't know that until he's older. It'll make और sense later.

The sun remained high in the sky, yet the air itself was practically frozen. Each breath promised a renewal of biting frost to the lungs and an exhale of smoke as white as the snow clinging to the grass. The men in black that marched toward the cliff were as silent as the...
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Source: गूगल image
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