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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. द्वारा no means am I forcing आप to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless आप truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before आप start posting. It can be as little as a bio, या as big as an entire लेख series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no और than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he या she is in, can pull out another trick out of his या her hat.
4. If आप absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his या her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely बिना सोचे समझे and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when आप have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the अगला दिन you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own या is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the हाल का outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, या claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If आप must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, या so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if आप do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot या stabbed in the heart, then pop up मिनटों later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull या flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to या dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to या dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created द्वारा you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing या potential character is a Mary Sue, या if आप suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, आप can take link. If आप want, आप can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case आप were curious, which आप probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all आप want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, द्वारा no means do आप have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
posted by Robin_Love
 Tara
Tara
LAYER ONE : THE OUTSIDE
Name: Tara Almaraz
Reason या meaning of name: “Queen” (Irish), “Star” (Asian)
Eye Color: Brown
Hair Style/Color: Blown, worn down mostly
Height: 5'7
Clothing Style: Uhm..suave nerd?
Best Physical Feature: Hair

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: Uhmm.....skip
Your Guilty Pleasure: Chocolate
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: Personal space
Your Ambition for the Future: To live...

LAYER THREE: THOUGHTS
Your First Thoughts Waking Up: I'm so sore
What आप Think About the Most: Do white-haired Siberians count?
What आप Think About Before Bed: I wish this was over already
You Think Your Best Quality...
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posted by SilverWings13
Note: Happens simultaneously as link


Hounds on the Bridge

The girl blinked quickly as her eyes adjusted to the sunlight while the white portal she had stepped through faded from existence. A warm Mediterranean breeze rustled her untidy red curls, carrying the scent of the sea. As much as she wanted to run through the narrow streets until she was panting for that sea salt sweet air, there was no time for such leisure. Her concern was for someone who had been left behind in the city द्वारा mistake.
Before she could even wonder about the trio that had meant to accompany her, her eyes found them. Though...
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posted by Robin_Love
 Jessie Bennett
Jessie Bennett
Name: Jessie Bennett
Alias: None
Powers: Healing, combat
Occupation: Doctor
Weakness/Limits: Unknown
History: Jessie Bennett came from a long line of pure-blood healers. Her race is unknown, despite how human she looks. Her दिया name has been forgotten. She came to Earth much like the Man of Steel. But she was found द्वारा a traveling caravan in an Arabian desert. She grew up among them and immediately took a fondness to medicine. द्वारा accident, she found out her inhuman abilities when she was five. Almost immediately, she was sent away, to America. She spent almost a साल in a facility, learning English....
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posted by Eclipse-YJ
(In the not too distant future)

“I think Dad moved all the decorations down here” कहा Jayson pulling on the cord switch. The florescent lights illuminated the basement with a series of clicks and flickers. Christian followed Jayson down brushing his platinum white dyed hair from his eyes.

“whoa, got enough boxes?” Christian asked gazing on the labyrinth of old boxes and various sized bundles of stuff. Jayson smiled as he bent down to peak into the boxes closest time him.
“It’s mostly my Mums stuff and my old baby things, I think they’re too sentimental for Dad to get rid of so...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
Hi, life has been busy, sorry, kthnxbai



Chris' eyes widened as the weather began to spiral out of control, his grip on Alex tightening even more. "You're too emotional to even try and restrain him.." He swallowed and his eyes darted to Tobias who was tending to the speedster. "You three get out of here!" He handed Alex off to the two males, blowing into his hands afterwards. "Jaime!" He called out, slowly making his way through the blinding snow. Scotty snarled, snow and wind spiraled around the लोमड़ी, फॉक्स as he made his way over towards Cadaver, shoving Erasers aside and pushing his way through,...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
 Before work
Before work
I lumped the two new ones in together because I didn't want to spam with articles.. My older characters will be out later. (:

Name: Fletcher Caverly
Alias: Was formerly known at Catalyst
Occupation: Was a hero, now is a scientist who secretly assists the YJ team.
Age: 25.
Appearance: Brown hair that usually hangs in front of his eyes, however when he is working it is usually pushed up in the front. He has dark green eyes and is unusually tan for someone who doesn't go outside much. He stands at 6'2 and is fairly thin.
Powers/skills: Fletcher is able to speed up chemical reactions with his touch,...
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posted by SilverWings13
Note: For anyone not up to speed with my one hundred and then some OCs, the small child = Alek, the hero/ Tara's boyfriend/ that guy who was practically Ary's brother but आप all shipped them anyway. Dr. Felis is the bad guy and Aleksander's father, though Al doesn't know that until he's older. It'll make और sense later.

The sun remained high in the sky, yet the air itself was practically frozen. Each breath promised a renewal of biting frost to the lungs and an exhale of smoke as white as the snow clinging to the grass. The men in black that marched toward the cliff were as silent as the...
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added by Robin_Love
posted by DiscordYJ
 T^T
T^T
Name: Catalina Azure Liberty

Alias: Cobalt

Race: Caucasian

Nationality: French/American

Species: Half Spirit

Civvies: Varies

Costume:Doesn't have one.

Powers: She can make things die and cause things to live.

Apperance: Long blue hair with a light shaded streak down the middle of her bangs. She has fair skin and green/blue eyes.

Personality: Quiet, Content, Calm, Scared, Sad, Alone. But she also is annoyed easily and untrusting. (ONE WORDED RESPONSES)

Abilities/Skills: She was a gymnast, so she can do flips and tricks, and she is some-what skilled with knives, blades, and swords.

Background: Catalina...
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posted by Kurls_Basd
 Ashley in civvies
Ashley in civvies
Events of before and during the fire.
Ashley had just finished with a mission. Jaivus was her temporary bodyguard द्वारा Kaya's orders, he had just picked her up from her phone booth in her blonde wig with blue jeans and shirt
"Let's get ice-cream." She says with a thumbs up. He didn't answer but rather turn and continued walking down the road. She rolled her eyes and ran up behind he pulling his hoodie down. Jaivus turned to her exposing his sapphire eyes.
"Please.."
"You really are annoying." He replied, in a low tune walking away from her. She walked briskly pass him grabbing his hand.
"Ashley...
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posted by Blitz359
////Sigh....there's, like, one या two और parts after this one.////////

Richi looked up at his friends, his eyes empty and cold, as if the आग that once fueled his emotions had finally snuffed out. They glanced over at the two bodies in the shadows द्वारा the corner, and an audible choke escaped from his mouth. "We're done here." stated Richi, his words monotone and meaningless, and he stepped away from the decapitated corpse. Before Richi could say anything else, a long beep emitted from the remains of Giovanni's metal suit. Without warning, the ground under the teens began to tremble and rumble,...
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posted by Kurls_Basd
 Frostbite aka Kaya Ashley's older sis
Frostbite aka Kaya Ashley's older sis
"Do आप have any idea how hard I worked to get it like this." Aquapoint yelled, as Artemis and Mafia hit the ground. Mafia rubbed her head, "She worried about her hair and not her partners."
"At least आप know what i have to put up with." Artemis said, as she and Mafia stood on their feet and backed up to Aquapoint.
"I'm going to turn आप into a popsicle Sparky!" She yelled. Artemis and Mafia looked down at the protégés both astounded द्वारा her words.
"Wow you're pretty ticked off about your hair." Mafia said.
"You're not turning anyone into anything kid." The blue head male कहा firmly, "Look I...
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"Ugh, that girl is still confusing. Even after five years." Nye got up, holding his untouched coffee, and walked towards the door. He went back to Jennifer's place and handed her his coffee. "Here, I didn't sip any of it."

"I wouldn't have minded if आप did," she said, taking it and drinking a little. "So, who did आप go to meet? David? James?"

"Charlotte." Her eyes grew wide, because she knew who he was talking about.

"Why would आप go to her?" She whispered.

"Because she's the only who'd be able to figure it out."

"That's not true. आप could have gone to-"

"No," he interrupted. "I couldn't."...
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posted by khanna266
Victor swung a kick to Ari's face,and missed"You call yourself an experienced fighter?"she questioned him,but he ignored her and dropped an ax kick onto her knee,"That barely hurt,maybe we should train when आप actually learn how to fight,train with someone else your no challenge,and I only take challenges,"she कहा as she walked away",Victor just stood there."What do I do i'm supposed to help save the world.when i don't even know how to spar anymore i used to be great at sparring in my past life."he said,then he heard a familiar voice,"Pray for help."it was Rei,"We should go to church together...
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Well, guess I can't शामिल होइए an RP community without characters, right? Sorry if I break every single rule आप have; I don't know all of them yet. (I'm studying.)

Also, I’m sorry about the lack of pictures. I'm drawing these two later and will certainly have a hell of a time finding pictures online, so भालू with me.


Plague Rat

Name: Chip Winnipeg

Alias: Plague Rat

Age: 22

Alignment: Neutral.

Appearance: Paler than a gamer's left cheek. Dyed blonde hair (with the roots showing, because some people just suck at hair dye) that stays in a stiff wave above his face. Dull grey eyes with noticeable circles...
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posted by Mclovin_69
 JD
JD
Name: JD ( Jared Dammon Morse)

Alias: none

Age: 18

Appearance: dark wavy brown hair and rich blue eyes, always wears snapback.

Personality: JD is a very nice and funny guy to get along with, he hasn't met one person whose had a problem with him. He is very understanding and will do anything for his फ्रेंड्स and loved ones.

Powers/Skills: he has the ability to see the potential of people. basically he can see what they can fully do and have that others may not. (ex. he would be able to see someones skills, way of thinking, and talents)

Relations: owner to Shane

Civvies: jeans, a sweater, converse,...
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posted by Mclovin_69
 Conrad Civvies
Conrad Civvies
Name: Conrad Bolivar

Alias: none

Age: 15

Appearance: dirty blonde hair and clear light blue eyes, touqe या beanies, usually has head gear.

Powers/Skills: he has the ability to turn translucent and turn others translucent द्वारा touch (etc. holding hands), he can walk through walls and objects in his translucent state. He has skills in balance as he hovers on a hoverboard when invisible for quick get aways ( skateboard skills). Combat skills but he usually uses combat in his favour द्वारा being translucent when fighting.

Personality: Conrad is a laid back person who often doesnt really care what happens....
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 Weeheee
Weeheee
((PART 2))

आप stared hard at the four keys in your hand. The cold silver cools your hot palms. Closing your eyes आप think over the options आप have: Blade, Phoebe, Becca, या Silver. Over and over आप go through the सूची until आप finally reached your verdict. Narrowing your eyes आप go over to Blade. आप couldn't let her suffer any more. As soon as आप unlock the restraints आप can hear her gasp a thank you.

Blade stared at her, still, impaled hand. Slowly she tried to pull her member off, but the चाकू was jagged, pulling her hand off was doing और damage than before. She could feel the...
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posted by Blitz359
As the fighting sounded out in the corridor ahead, Richi looked over at his companions. "Can आप guys fight?" Jenna glanced over at Richi with a look of both annoyance and concern and replied, "Duh. I'm not sure how effective we'll be though. Something's been weakening Sean and me since we've been in this dungeon." Sean silently nodded in agreement. "Feels like Dampening Magic." Richi bit back a curse as the fighting seemed to get closer. Before he could say a word, a guard came flying out from around the corner and was embedded about 2 feet into the brick wall. Five और guards came running...
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