I got some feedback from some people who read my story and they कहा they had a lot of सवालों about it. I didn't explain it as well as I wanted to. So I apologize. I hope this can make up for it. :)
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Everything was burning. It was so hot and my eyes stung. It felt like I was bleeding... badly. I felt dizzy... so dizzy...

I woke up 2 days later in a white room with medical stuff in it. Almost every inch of my body was covered in thick white cloth. I couldn't हटाइए my arms या legs. It was even a strugle to breathe...

I vaguely remembered the fire....

    Chapter 2
                    LUNCH
I sat where Jill was sitting. The same people from before. The blonde
Kid, the reporter with a few other people. They introduced themselves.
And I giggled when they all were done. I कहा "I laugh a lot...sorry"
Ken rolled his eyes. I cracked up. Mart the one who bumped into me asked me "so Estella--" "call me Stella" I interrupted. "So Stella would आप
Like to grab भोजन करनेवाला, डिनर sometime?" I laughed "sure!" ken just rolled his
Eyes, it made me...

Hello everyone! :] This is only a draft to a chapter of the first story of a series (Shattering Suns) I'm लेखन and, when I'm through, publishing. Since it's my first chapter, I want to be sure this story is interesting enough. Forgive me if there are any proofreading mistakes. I've been too busy to proofread every line. Please do टिप्पणी दे and tell me what आप think! Thankies so so much for willingly पढ़ना and sharing your helpful thoughts. Take care sweethearts, and enjoy! :D ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Blissful Ignorance
My name is Naomi Hart. I am a sixteen साल old...

"Run, आप idiot!"
"I am!"
Niki and I just robbed a gas station. We pointed our Colt's at the cashier, then tied him up. Sweat dripped off my face as we loaded our trash bags full of खाना and money. I didn't think we'd make it in time before the cops came. But, miraculously we packed up quick enough.
"Alright man, head over to those hills, here take this, I'm gonna go knock that guy out."
Niki nodded and took the two trash bags. His blonde hair falling around his head, soaked with sweat.
I ran back into the station, and went over to the cashier. I asked him if there was anybody else here and...

How is it possible for there to be possible to be और trouble?

    “ हे Cindy” Thomas shouts from across the room. I put a finger to my lips. Just as Mrs. Fitzgerald turns to Thomas and says “ Mr. Carlson sit down.’ “ What eva teach.” “ Now class since its pride time we are going to come up with ways to ask your teachers things and what are things to ask.” Thomas then throws a paper airplane to me with a message when Mrs. Fitzgerald isn’t looking. I begin to unfold the paper airplane just when Jaylee the school brat snatches it out of my hands and shouts...

I opened my bedroom window to let in an evening brezee. All of the trees have been bare for a while, exposing the cloudless sky. Letting out a sight i rested my head on my hand and leaned out letting the wind whip across my face. Today is the very last दिन of winter break,then its back to school till spring. May as well enjoy it. "ARTIE JONES, GET DOWN HERE RIGHT THIS सेकंड I WOULD LIKE TO HAVE A WORD WITH YOU!" My mom yelled vioentley from down stairs. Sluggishly I stood up and walked out of my room. "Mom my name is amy." I कहा walking down the steps. She just glared at me. " आप can change...

Okay, so here's the third chapter of this! Hope आप all like and PLEASE COMMENT!! ^.^


We immediately arrive in Hollow Bas- I mean, The Radiant Garden.

"Let's go find Leon and everyone," Sora said, and along the way to Merlin's house, we saw just how much this place has improved.
When we came to the house, Sora opened the door and went in before Kairi and I could stop him and tell him to knock first.

"Hey, everybody!" Sora shouted to everyone, and they all jumped.

"Huh? Sora..." Leon mumbled after he jumped.

"Jeez, Sora! Ever heard of knocking?" Yuffie asked him and he smiled sheepishly.

"We're here...

CHAPTER 1

“Where the fuck is he?!” Simon was getting really pissed already. Jacob was supposed to be back an घंटा ago. He promised अडेल he wouldn't be late. While waiting, Simon turned on the TV. He laid down to the couch, drinking beer, waiting for the news to start. अडेल came back from the kitchen, drinking सेब juice, “I don't know. Calm down, please, Simon.” she replied. “And don't drink!”
“Why not?” Simon asked her.
“Because,” she said, grabbing the बीयर, बियर bottle from him, throwing it away, “First, you're not old enough to be drinking, you're fifteen, if आप hadn't...

It was late and I think I had fallen asleep on damon, I really didn't want to go घर But soon I would have to and thats when i would talk to my dad about this stuff.

I woke up and I was in this very nice room, I am supirsed that Damon has a bed, I thought vamps didn't sleep although it could be for decoration. "Had a good sleep" I jumped up qiuck way to quick making a painful cracky nosie I think from from leg "sorry Belle should have knocked i thought आप would be sleepy".

I didn't care more, I hated that we took it slow and getting in trouble would दिखाना my dad why आप shouldn't like To Ariel-Belle....

Need to know Basis, Rules and Legislations of a Vampires’ World
The Cult of वैंपायर was an ancient ritual of vampire corpses, half-vampires, and mystic creatures.
Normal vampires, and वेयरवोल्फ were likely to join, too.
Everyone who was apart of the cult, dies after 40,000 years.
Anyone who didn’t शामिल होइए the cult, lives forever.
Too bad your born a vult.
If आप want to run away from the cult या un-join the cult, आप will die, या suffer extreme pain and then die.
Usually, it’s option two.
People who just died, were very lucky.
If आप have suffered great deals of physical pain before joining...

Both Crack-a-bottle and Shatter-a-glass were teens, and their names had a lot in common. Crack-a-bottle and Shatter-a-glass. Hee Hee. The सवाल right now is how the heck do we get out of here?” कहा bill. Shatter-a-glass searched in her pockets. हे my phone, the only phone in the world that lets आप text and do nothing else,” कहा Shatter-a-glass. How will that help?” asked Crack-a-bottle. I could text a plane to fly over here and pick us up!” answered Shatter-a-glass. Shatter-a-glass was thinking for a moment. She didn’t have a clue of what number she text so she did every combination...

"Drip,drop,drip drop."I couldn't tell if it was the rain या the tears running down from my face that had was drip dropping.I still couldn't believe Joel actually left me here all द्वारा myself.Alone in this pouring thunderstorm.Joel was suppose to my best friend,my soul mate,my lover but instead he became the opposite,the total jerk of my life.But the hardest part is that even now,now that tears flood my face and my दिल is completely torn I still प्यार Joel as if he hasn't done anything wrong.I knew I wouldn't be able to just let him go like that;I don't think I will be able to get over him ever!...

Academic life has challenging demands. Students are expected to manage their time wisely between their academic requirements and extra-curricular activities. Living in a time when the world requires highly sophisticated demands, this challenge is no easy feat. No one understands this dilemma better than professional writers, students, retirees, and freelancers specializing in academic लेखन seeking to offer their excellent services to students who intends to maintain a good academic standing but needs some assistance in completing academic requirements due to time constraints and limited...

It's been a while since I write anything here! I just didn't feel like posting this on my spot, so I thought I would post it here!


I looked into his eyes, not knowing what to think... It's been so long, so much has happened and yet I feel just like I did that first time!
I hate thinking of it... Every word that comes out of my mouth seems to fade away as soon as it reaches the air. Every thought that comes to my mind is full of pain and hate, and yet I never seem to be sad!
I face life with a smile in my face, with a mask in my heart! I keep my thoughts close, not letting anyone reach them!
I...

After the film they all walk to Antiworld to hang out for awhile. They all laid on the grass, peacefully thinking about बिना सोचे समझे things in their lives. Grito was watching over them, thinking that Cassie, Nathan, Slone and Lindsay may be in trouble if they keep their bonds with the others. Parvulo was sleeping on Grito’s shoulder, making no sound what so ever. Grito himself was getting drowsy, he quickly fell asleep, and he hadn’t slept in a few days, watching over them. What could stop something from attacking them now, Grito is asleep, and a sneak attack and Grito may not be able to save...

Marley was bleeding from his wound, he was fighting the same sort of creature as the others, it was small but it was fast plus its forearms are used like clubs. The creature had marks all over its body, due to Marley’s elbows and knees. It swung its arm again, hitting Marley straight in the shin, Marley was quick to react and स्लैश up the creatures face. It left four claw like marks on its face; Marley looked at his hand and notice that his nails had pointed, as the creature wiped it’s eye he looked at Marley and saw that his eyes had become yellow. Marley quickly struck the creature in...

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The last of the रात का खाना guests poured out of Joseph Warren's house. He didn't have रात का खाना parties often because they usually resulted in fight's between two different people या parties with extremely different political views. Fortunately, their was only one, small conflict on whether America should be fighting communism in other coutries या not. Joeseph of course took the side of fighting communism, and so did a couple of others. But most of the other people...

Chapter 12
6 महीना later
School was boring as always everyone in the school looked at us like they did with the Cullen's and as for me and matt we got closer! I really liked him ,almost loved him but not the kind of प्यार my दिल held for edward it was different like he can complete me we went to are medow every दिन after school and talked and other stuff as आप know but I never slept with him not know I wasn’t ready I just have this stupid stupid idea like I'm cheating on him but that isnt true he leaft me and got over me and started dating another vamp that I'm sure was Tanya.i hate him I...

“Train us? For what?” Opal Asked. Grito didn’t say anything; he started pointing, first at himself then to Marley, Alec, Mia then Opal. “Train us to fight of creatures” कहा Mia. Grito nodded, and then he looked at the fairy on his shoulder. The fairy nodded and flew up into the air and created a square in the air, like a movie screen. On it pictures of demons and humans being attack appeared, much to the four friends’ disgust. “What the hell is going on here?” Alec Asked. “This is why I was sent to train you, so this stops happening to innocent humans” कहा Grito. “When...

Okay I should very careful. If I mess up I could get very hurt I think.
I sigh and I raise my hands. A sand storm starts forming. So far so good My hands control the speed of the sand. When I wiggle my fingers it controls where it will go. It starts going to my right.
It sounds like a horrible hurricane. I wiggle my left fingers and it moves towards my house.
Oh crap! That's not good. हटाइए your fingers Sam! MOVE!
My sandstorm picks up my house and it starts spinning around.
I hear screaming coming from my house. It's probably my mother.
I raise my hand. To stop it which is impossible because I'm...