I can't write this anymore.
I feel like its a copy of अवतार the last airbender. And the companions quartet. I never intended on making it like that. But whenever I imagine my characters using their powers I see them bending. I know आप are all going to get. mad. Really mad. Really really mad. Really really really really mad. But my stories need और *sparkle*. A better writer with better talent. I think it needs और thought. I think I should create something that is REALLY from my imagination. Thats why, no matter what आप all are going to say....
I'm stopping Girl who cried wolf.
I know your gonna hate me. Yea....I really do expect that. But I have a different idea for a new story. It has no title. Thats why I'm going to start posting it here. The first chapter. If आप don't like it tell me in a comment. Tell me what आप really think about it. Tell the truth. And if आप loved Girl who cried भेड़िया SOO MUCH then I will MAYBE.....maybe.....keep लेखन it.
Here we go. (And sorry again.)
This is my new story. या idea of it.
Her giant grey eyes were so bright. Oddly they were grey which made it so weird for the fact they were bright. This always stumped me when I was near her. And her mood never really changed either.
She giggled at me. I didn't realize it until she pointed it out to me.
"EOS!!" She giggled at me. Her blond hair glistening in the sunlight. We were running at the चोटी, शीर्ष of the temple. I was hoping my father wouldn't be mad that I was running through the गढ़, महल when I was supposed to have lessons. But he was training the boys. He would never know.
"Eos why are आप standing there? आप face is so still! Are आप thinking off again!!" The girl laughed while stroking her long purple dress. It was a bit too big for her. But everything was on Sarafina, Sara for short. She was so small.
I looked up at her. "Sorry. I dozed off again." I began walking again.
"Have we finished tag?" She asked me.
"I guess so. And anyway-" I stopped. I heard footsteps behind me. WE looked at each other. We knew. Sara smiled and showed her missing teeth. And thats when we screamed in laughter and ran through the door.
We raced down the hall laughing. Behind me my father ran down in his brown leather boots. His chuckle was deep and low. आप would expect him to be stern because of it. But as he chased us down the hall laughing with us आप knew he was no where near stern.
"Come back here!!" He yelled. He looked funny running down the hall. Other teachers came out of their classrooms. Many laughed as the man with the brown shaggy beard ran down the corridor after two little 7-year-olds. And he wasn't gaining on them.
But then Sara tripped on her long dress. My father tripped over her. She laughed and screamed and all the other teachers hooted along with them. I giggled as my father picked up Sara and fixed her dress.
"What were आप two girls doing out of class?" He asked us while kneeling down.
"Uh....." I कहा while looking at Sara.
"We were....."
But of course my dad already knew. He was truth seeker after all. He can see the truth no matter how hard hard the lie has been dug.
"You were chasing a puppy!?!?" He कहा with his voice stern. But he couldn't stay mad. He began chuckling.
Sara smiled. "Actually we were hiding it." She reached into the pocket of her dress and pulled out the small black lab she had found outside when we went out to play before lessons started. "My कुत्ते का बच्चा, पिल्ला here, Zuka, wanted to come with us." She said.
My father smiled and the astronomy teacher, Lilly spoke as she came to my father's side. "And आप would know that of course miss animal whisperer! आप are in trouble Missy!"
"Yes grandma!" Sara कहा laughing. Lilly grabbed Sara's arms and led her to their room in the upper castle.
"And so are you." My father said.
I eyed him, knowing he wouldn't hurt me, he was too kind for that. He picked me up and held me in his arms. And the shining sun from the window called to my ears.
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10 years later, गढ़, महल of Alenfall:
I wanted to sleep. My eyelids were so heavy. I knew Sara and I should have gone to बिस्तर earlier. But the दिन had been so exciting. I always hated lessons anyway. They were so easy to me. And anyway, there were only three people in the class of sun. Me, keeper of the light, Joshua the Sunshine master, and Lydia, the stubborn know it all who could see one's future द्वारा पढ़ना the signs the sun rays made.
yea okay my new story sucks as much as the other does. Well I'll hear your टिप्पणियाँ to know for sure.
Do u want me to stop girl who cried भेड़िया या continue with this?
(and don't say both cuz i make final decision)
या I could always keep on लेखन my new thing and THEN let आप choose.
I feel like its a copy of अवतार the last airbender. And the companions quartet. I never intended on making it like that. But whenever I imagine my characters using their powers I see them bending. I know आप are all going to get. mad. Really mad. Really really mad. Really really really really mad. But my stories need और *sparkle*. A better writer with better talent. I think it needs और thought. I think I should create something that is REALLY from my imagination. Thats why, no matter what आप all are going to say....
I'm stopping Girl who cried wolf.
I know your gonna hate me. Yea....I really do expect that. But I have a different idea for a new story. It has no title. Thats why I'm going to start posting it here. The first chapter. If आप don't like it tell me in a comment. Tell me what आप really think about it. Tell the truth. And if आप loved Girl who cried भेड़िया SOO MUCH then I will MAYBE.....maybe.....keep लेखन it.
Here we go. (And sorry again.)
This is my new story. या idea of it.
Her giant grey eyes were so bright. Oddly they were grey which made it so weird for the fact they were bright. This always stumped me when I was near her. And her mood never really changed either.
She giggled at me. I didn't realize it until she pointed it out to me.
"EOS!!" She giggled at me. Her blond hair glistening in the sunlight. We were running at the चोटी, शीर्ष of the temple. I was hoping my father wouldn't be mad that I was running through the गढ़, महल when I was supposed to have lessons. But he was training the boys. He would never know.
"Eos why are आप standing there? आप face is so still! Are आप thinking off again!!" The girl laughed while stroking her long purple dress. It was a bit too big for her. But everything was on Sarafina, Sara for short. She was so small.
I looked up at her. "Sorry. I dozed off again." I began walking again.
"Have we finished tag?" She asked me.
"I guess so. And anyway-" I stopped. I heard footsteps behind me. WE looked at each other. We knew. Sara smiled and showed her missing teeth. And thats when we screamed in laughter and ran through the door.
We raced down the hall laughing. Behind me my father ran down in his brown leather boots. His chuckle was deep and low. आप would expect him to be stern because of it. But as he chased us down the hall laughing with us आप knew he was no where near stern.
"Come back here!!" He yelled. He looked funny running down the hall. Other teachers came out of their classrooms. Many laughed as the man with the brown shaggy beard ran down the corridor after two little 7-year-olds. And he wasn't gaining on them.
But then Sara tripped on her long dress. My father tripped over her. She laughed and screamed and all the other teachers hooted along with them. I giggled as my father picked up Sara and fixed her dress.
"What were आप two girls doing out of class?" He asked us while kneeling down.
"Uh....." I कहा while looking at Sara.
"We were....."
But of course my dad already knew. He was truth seeker after all. He can see the truth no matter how hard hard the lie has been dug.
"You were chasing a puppy!?!?" He कहा with his voice stern. But he couldn't stay mad. He began chuckling.
Sara smiled. "Actually we were hiding it." She reached into the pocket of her dress and pulled out the small black lab she had found outside when we went out to play before lessons started. "My कुत्ते का बच्चा, पिल्ला here, Zuka, wanted to come with us." She said.
My father smiled and the astronomy teacher, Lilly spoke as she came to my father's side. "And आप would know that of course miss animal whisperer! आप are in trouble Missy!"
"Yes grandma!" Sara कहा laughing. Lilly grabbed Sara's arms and led her to their room in the upper castle.
"And so are you." My father said.
I eyed him, knowing he wouldn't hurt me, he was too kind for that. He picked me up and held me in his arms. And the shining sun from the window called to my ears.
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10 years later, गढ़, महल of Alenfall:
I wanted to sleep. My eyelids were so heavy. I knew Sara and I should have gone to बिस्तर earlier. But the दिन had been so exciting. I always hated lessons anyway. They were so easy to me. And anyway, there were only three people in the class of sun. Me, keeper of the light, Joshua the Sunshine master, and Lydia, the stubborn know it all who could see one's future द्वारा पढ़ना the signs the sun rays made.
yea okay my new story sucks as much as the other does. Well I'll hear your टिप्पणियाँ to know for sure.
Do u want me to stop girl who cried भेड़िया या continue with this?
(and don't say both cuz i make final decision)
या I could always keep on लेखन my new thing and THEN let आप choose.
I keep my rhythm
I tap in time,
My संगीत is my world
An angry beat inside.
It can crash like a waterfall
या gradually trickle down,
It can make आप laugh and cry
That powerful sound.
My headphones on my head
The lyrics flowing though,
Filling up my brain
संगीत is the खाना I chew.
It can be beautiful, strange
Crazy and cool,
I couldn't live without music
There's a style to suit all.
संगीत is like a brand new life
Jumping around your mind,
Each instrument that is played
Is an ingredient to find.
There's nothing quite like music
There's nothing quite like me,
आप can always find a friend in music
संगीत will always be.
I tap in time,
My संगीत is my world
An angry beat inside.
It can crash like a waterfall
या gradually trickle down,
It can make आप laugh and cry
That powerful sound.
My headphones on my head
The lyrics flowing though,
Filling up my brain
संगीत is the खाना I chew.
It can be beautiful, strange
Crazy and cool,
I couldn't live without music
There's a style to suit all.
संगीत is like a brand new life
Jumping around your mind,
Each instrument that is played
Is an ingredient to find.
There's nothing quite like music
There's nothing quite like me,
आप can always find a friend in music
संगीत will always be.
The city of light was full of marchants and villagers. Elyon stood and gazed at them from the huge silver gate. And gurding the gate was two broad shouldered men, wearing bright white robes, that glowed from every angle.
"Excuse me?" the man with blonde hair asked. When Elyon took a shaky step forward, the men stared shocked at her.
"Elyon? What are आप doing outside the city?" The man asked. Elyon took in a deep sharp breath and took another shaky step forward. She still hadnt noticed that the vilagers were watching silently.
"Elyon...my name is..?she smiled and fell into the darknes, fainted. The two gaurds rushed to her aid, and the vilagers erupted into a panicky uproar
"Quick take her to Lady Alexsis!" the man with darker ahir nodded, picked up Elyon and disapered.
"Leo? What the hell is going on? This is a bad sign," an old man closest to the alone guard asked.
"I dont know," he muttered looking up at the गढ़, महल of light, "i really dont know,".
टिप्पणियाँ PLZ
"Excuse me?" the man with blonde hair asked. When Elyon took a shaky step forward, the men stared shocked at her.
"Elyon? What are आप doing outside the city?" The man asked. Elyon took in a deep sharp breath and took another shaky step forward. She still hadnt noticed that the vilagers were watching silently.
"Elyon...my name is..?she smiled and fell into the darknes, fainted. The two gaurds rushed to her aid, and the vilagers erupted into a panicky uproar
"Quick take her to Lady Alexsis!" the man with darker ahir nodded, picked up Elyon and disapered.
"Leo? What the hell is going on? This is a bad sign," an old man closest to the alone guard asked.
"I dont know," he muttered looking up at the गढ़, महल of light, "i really dont know,".
टिप्पणियाँ PLZ
The pain आप caused isn't what scarred me
The burning tears आप left me to shed isn't what burned me
Your last words aren't what hindered me
It was the Legend.
That endless struggle to win
To fight back
To not toss and turn in my bed
That secure feeling I had before you
To feel as a sharp as a pencil lead
Now that loneliness I feel without you
A constant reminder
Feeling my दिल beat again
Done with the breathtaking moments
And the heart-skipping kisses
To breathe again
Over and Done with
It wasn't those tears
It wasn't those words
It wasn't all that pain आप left me to bare.
It wasn't the legend आप were when आप were here
But the legacy in my दिल that आप left!
The burning tears आप left me to shed isn't what burned me
Your last words aren't what hindered me
It was the Legend.
That endless struggle to win
To fight back
To not toss and turn in my bed
That secure feeling I had before you
To feel as a sharp as a pencil lead
Now that loneliness I feel without you
A constant reminder
Feeling my दिल beat again
Done with the breathtaking moments
And the heart-skipping kisses
To breathe again
Over and Done with
It wasn't those tears
It wasn't those words
It wasn't all that pain आप left me to bare.
It wasn't the legend आप were when आप were here
But the legacy in my दिल that आप left!
There I was. *sigh* Just sitting there, waiting for him. Who? आप ask? My crush, Patrick Wellsiben, he was the one for me. Let alone, him being THE most लोकप्रिय boy in school, I was known as a loser. I was the omega of the भेड़िया pack. What am I talking about? Nevermind. My conscience says "Ask him out!", but my guts say "Don't do it you! He's gonna say no!" I don't know what to do! He comes near me and says "Hey." I stand there like a scarecrow smiling. "I feel stupid." "So stupid." Why shouldn't I get the attention from populars? I have short, thick black hair, I wear tank tops all the time, regular jeans and converse. So much for fitting in.