Chapter 6 part 1 : Somthing just isn't right..
NOTE: This is just a VERY short chapter thats being पोस्टेड leading up to the अगला large chapter which will be पोस्टेड TOMOROW @ 5 PM EASTERN.
This is IN THE POV OF JACOB. Starting from where the last chapter ended.
I put this in because I found that what happened while Renesmee is gone was an small - put very important peice of the अगला few chapters and thought I should share it with you.
COMMENT, BECOME A FAN, LIKE .. ETC. It lets me know आप care <3
Ill almost shut up (; just one और thing; Let me know if आप want और different POV'S and who आप want them to be in - maybe someone such as Alec? या if your prefer staying in Renesmee's pov (:
THANKS FOR READING/MESSAGING/GIVING FEEDBACK
<333 -Brianna
Chapter 6 - Part 1: Somthing Just Isnt right..
I sat beside Elisabeth as I waited for Renesmee to return. Elisabeth was playing aimlessly with one of her dolls, giggling. She reminded me a little bit of Nessie when she was small. Speaking of Renesmee, she was taking longer then expected.. Maybe somthing is wrong.
I started to worry as I let the thought wander my mind. Just as I stood up to check on her, she walked in. Somthing was wrong - She seemed a bit shooken up.
"Renesmee?" I asked slowly as she walked in.
She looked up at me - realising what she had looked like and smiled. She was pretty good at hiding her emotions - unless of course she is caught off guard like this time.
"Oh, हे Jake. How is Elisabeth?"
I looked down to check - but she had already dropped her toy and was holding onto Nessie.
"Renesmee!" She exclaimed happily.
I smiled watching them interact. There was somthing..special about it. Maybe it's the fact they can interact with eachother so well - It was always a mystery to me how she was able to do that. Renesmee is just generaly good with children.
"How are आप feeling?" Renesmee asked Elisabeth.
"Im good"
Renesmee is always worrying about everyone- but herself of course. I watched her for a moment. Her face smiled but her eyes were careful - watching me as if im going to acuse her of somthing. I swiftly walked towards her, Careful of Elisabeth.
I kept her gaze for a moment, watching her eyes. I could tell somthing was off - She looked back down avoiding me.
"Elisabeth, Why don't आप go play some more?"
she suggested - सेकंड्स after Elisabeth was on the ground with her doll again.
I stood infront of Renesmee, taking a hold of her hand carefully.
" Is everything alright, Nessie?"
She hesistated, startled द्वारा my question. Looking down she smiled and nodded once;
"Everything is fine"
I stood there with her - silent. Somthing was up - and we both knew it. She wasn't one to lie - especialy to me. I started to worry और - my दिल beated faster as i considered the posibilites.
She didn't seem injured - Maybe she knows somthing about Elisabeth या - I didn't even wan't to think of someone injuring her. I lightly pulled her face towards me,
"Renesmee?" I कहा - challenging her earlier statment.
She bit her lip, watching me. "Really Jake, everything is okay"
She pulled away, and went to go sit with Elisabeth. Somthing was off, somthing wasn't right. Renesmee isn't usualy this distanced..
Suddenly an awful smell filled the air - I turned around meeting his - it's gaze.
"Alec" I heard Renesmee call - standing behind me.
I imedeitly tensed up. I wrapped my arm around Renesmee, holding her closer towards me. I didn't like this kid one bit. I don't understand how Renesmee could be so forgiving towards him after what he had done to her.
I glared at him - hoping he would be leaving soon.
" I hope I'm not inturupting anything.."
He was speaking towards me, yet his eyes stayed on Renesmee. I hated the way he looked at her - It was as if he owned her या somthing, which definitly is not the case. But it wasn't just looking - it was staring.
I flashed my eyes towards Renesmee - who I expected to be avoiding him yet she was staring back.
I started to worry - What was going on between them? I pulled Renesee a little closer in response to my thought. It stayed like this for a moment - until Renesmee broke the silence.
"Was there somthing आप needed?" Her voice was a bit on edge - annoyed, almost. This gave me some relife.
He looked at me for a second, then back to Renesmee.
"Aro would like to speak with आप - and Elisabeth"
I felt her stop for a moment. Stop talking, breathing, moving. Just stop. As if her life had been put on pause.
I looked down nervously at her. She had a worried, wide eyed expression on her face as if she was just दिया terrible news.
I looked back accusingly at Alec - In time to see him shake his head. Following, she let out a breath - regaining composure. What had worried her? Could it have to do with the way she was अभिनय earlier?
She nodded once and turned to meet my gaze.
"I'll be right back"
I pulled her in and hugged her. I never liked her leaving - The last time she कहा I'll be right back, she snuck off to Italy, possibly to her death. I sighed.
She carefully took Elisabeth द्वारा the hand - Who nervously went to her side. Elisabeth didn't like the Volturi either - if only Renesmee had as much awareness of what danger was..
"I promise" She assured me before leaving.
I felt empty when she was gone - Like half of me had just gone up and walked away. In reality - it had. I looked back towards where Alec stood and to my surprise he hadn't gone with her - he stared slyly back at me.
"A little over protective, are we?" He said, accusingly.
"Do आप blame me? I can't trust your kind" I कहा bitterly towards him.
He laughed "You think your any safer, dog?"
I looked at him, angrily. "I would never hurt Renesmee!" I spat through my teeth.
"..Well not on purpose - But we all have our slip-ups.."
"What are आप trying to say, bloodsucker?"
He walked closer towards me , stopping only a couple a feet infront of me.
" I'm just saying that your not her only choice.."
I watched him in awe. No, he wasn't taking Renesmee from me! I'm not going to lose the one I प्यार to a dirty bloodsucker, not again.
"You stay away from her" I warned him - staring into his mocking bloodred eyes.
He smirked "You know Jacob, your pretty lucky. For now, Renesmee's young - easily persuaded. It won't take long.."
Before I could respond he was gone.
No!
This can't be happening, it can't. He isn't good for her, not like I am. But I have to trust Renesmee, She loves me. And I'll always प्यार her -
even if she does decide to -
No, I can't think like that.
Had he confronted her? Is that why she was so shooken up earliar?
I might have to keep a closer eye on her then I thought. I can't beilive this is happening to me again.
And I can tell he isn't going to back down without a fight - so if it's a fight he wants, then it's a fight he'll get.
NOTE: This is just a VERY short chapter thats being पोस्टेड leading up to the अगला large chapter which will be पोस्टेड TOMOROW @ 5 PM EASTERN.
This is IN THE POV OF JACOB. Starting from where the last chapter ended.
I put this in because I found that what happened while Renesmee is gone was an small - put very important peice of the अगला few chapters and thought I should share it with you.
COMMENT, BECOME A FAN, LIKE .. ETC. It lets me know आप care <3
Ill almost shut up (; just one और thing; Let me know if आप want और different POV'S and who आप want them to be in - maybe someone such as Alec? या if your prefer staying in Renesmee's pov (:
THANKS FOR READING/MESSAGING/GIVING FEEDBACK
<333 -Brianna
Chapter 6 - Part 1: Somthing Just Isnt right..
I sat beside Elisabeth as I waited for Renesmee to return. Elisabeth was playing aimlessly with one of her dolls, giggling. She reminded me a little bit of Nessie when she was small. Speaking of Renesmee, she was taking longer then expected.. Maybe somthing is wrong.
I started to worry as I let the thought wander my mind. Just as I stood up to check on her, she walked in. Somthing was wrong - She seemed a bit shooken up.
"Renesmee?" I asked slowly as she walked in.
She looked up at me - realising what she had looked like and smiled. She was pretty good at hiding her emotions - unless of course she is caught off guard like this time.
"Oh, हे Jake. How is Elisabeth?"
I looked down to check - but she had already dropped her toy and was holding onto Nessie.
"Renesmee!" She exclaimed happily.
I smiled watching them interact. There was somthing..special about it. Maybe it's the fact they can interact with eachother so well - It was always a mystery to me how she was able to do that. Renesmee is just generaly good with children.
"How are आप feeling?" Renesmee asked Elisabeth.
"Im good"
Renesmee is always worrying about everyone- but herself of course. I watched her for a moment. Her face smiled but her eyes were careful - watching me as if im going to acuse her of somthing. I swiftly walked towards her, Careful of Elisabeth.
I kept her gaze for a moment, watching her eyes. I could tell somthing was off - She looked back down avoiding me.
"Elisabeth, Why don't आप go play some more?"
she suggested - सेकंड्स after Elisabeth was on the ground with her doll again.
I stood infront of Renesmee, taking a hold of her hand carefully.
" Is everything alright, Nessie?"
She hesistated, startled द्वारा my question. Looking down she smiled and nodded once;
"Everything is fine"
I stood there with her - silent. Somthing was up - and we both knew it. She wasn't one to lie - especialy to me. I started to worry और - my दिल beated faster as i considered the posibilites.
She didn't seem injured - Maybe she knows somthing about Elisabeth या - I didn't even wan't to think of someone injuring her. I lightly pulled her face towards me,
"Renesmee?" I कहा - challenging her earlier statment.
She bit her lip, watching me. "Really Jake, everything is okay"
She pulled away, and went to go sit with Elisabeth. Somthing was off, somthing wasn't right. Renesmee isn't usualy this distanced..
Suddenly an awful smell filled the air - I turned around meeting his - it's gaze.
"Alec" I heard Renesmee call - standing behind me.
I imedeitly tensed up. I wrapped my arm around Renesmee, holding her closer towards me. I didn't like this kid one bit. I don't understand how Renesmee could be so forgiving towards him after what he had done to her.
I glared at him - hoping he would be leaving soon.
" I hope I'm not inturupting anything.."
He was speaking towards me, yet his eyes stayed on Renesmee. I hated the way he looked at her - It was as if he owned her या somthing, which definitly is not the case. But it wasn't just looking - it was staring.
I flashed my eyes towards Renesmee - who I expected to be avoiding him yet she was staring back.
I started to worry - What was going on between them? I pulled Renesee a little closer in response to my thought. It stayed like this for a moment - until Renesmee broke the silence.
"Was there somthing आप needed?" Her voice was a bit on edge - annoyed, almost. This gave me some relife.
He looked at me for a second, then back to Renesmee.
"Aro would like to speak with आप - and Elisabeth"
I felt her stop for a moment. Stop talking, breathing, moving. Just stop. As if her life had been put on pause.
I looked down nervously at her. She had a worried, wide eyed expression on her face as if she was just दिया terrible news.
I looked back accusingly at Alec - In time to see him shake his head. Following, she let out a breath - regaining composure. What had worried her? Could it have to do with the way she was अभिनय earlier?
She nodded once and turned to meet my gaze.
"I'll be right back"
I pulled her in and hugged her. I never liked her leaving - The last time she कहा I'll be right back, she snuck off to Italy, possibly to her death. I sighed.
She carefully took Elisabeth द्वारा the hand - Who nervously went to her side. Elisabeth didn't like the Volturi either - if only Renesmee had as much awareness of what danger was..
"I promise" She assured me before leaving.
I felt empty when she was gone - Like half of me had just gone up and walked away. In reality - it had. I looked back towards where Alec stood and to my surprise he hadn't gone with her - he stared slyly back at me.
"A little over protective, are we?" He said, accusingly.
"Do आप blame me? I can't trust your kind" I कहा bitterly towards him.
He laughed "You think your any safer, dog?"
I looked at him, angrily. "I would never hurt Renesmee!" I spat through my teeth.
"..Well not on purpose - But we all have our slip-ups.."
"What are आप trying to say, bloodsucker?"
He walked closer towards me , stopping only a couple a feet infront of me.
" I'm just saying that your not her only choice.."
I watched him in awe. No, he wasn't taking Renesmee from me! I'm not going to lose the one I प्यार to a dirty bloodsucker, not again.
"You stay away from her" I warned him - staring into his mocking bloodred eyes.
He smirked "You know Jacob, your pretty lucky. For now, Renesmee's young - easily persuaded. It won't take long.."
Before I could respond he was gone.
No!
This can't be happening, it can't. He isn't good for her, not like I am. But I have to trust Renesmee, She loves me. And I'll always प्यार her -
even if she does decide to -
No, I can't think like that.
Had he confronted her? Is that why she was so shooken up earliar?
I might have to keep a closer eye on her then I thought. I can't beilive this is happening to me again.
And I can tell he isn't going to back down without a fight - so if it's a fight he wants, then it's a fight he'll get.
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WIN BELLA'S ENGAGEMENT RING!
Submission topic 'Why I प्यार Edward Cullen' या 'Why I Want Edward Cullens Ring' या anything about EDWARD CULLEN may consist of any ORIGINAL content including fanfiction, fanart, कविता and या your personal reason/story.
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The Edward Cullens ring as decribed in the Twilight saga is yellow सोना however the winner of the contest will have their choice of either white सोना या yellow.
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Contest begins Saturday June 26, 2010 and ends Sunday July 11, 2010.
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