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hi guys just being really ब्रेव here coz i dont usually do this but would u plz read a poem i wrote? it was inspired द्वारा twilight saga :)

my friend Twilight_lover encoraged me 2 put my poem up here! plz tell me wot u really think i want to b told the truth coz i प्यार लेखन and i want to improve it thx :

प्यार is the closest thing we have to magic
But It can be hurtful and painful too
it lies in those whos hearts are cold
it glows in those who are true.

आप can find it in the least expected places,
It can kill to let प्यार go
It can comfort those who are in need of help
It can fight and take over woe

प्यार is something that never dies,
It stays in the hearts of the gone,
प्यार is a candle that never goes out,
No one knows where its from

प्यार is the glue that holds us together,
It is the thing that makes us smile
Without knowing, we rely on love
और then anyone would know

It can kill those who turn against it,
It can take over those who don’t
It can bring tears and laughter and cries of pain
But die is what it wont

People hurt for those that leave
प्यार finds the one who another needs
They need the ones they can’t live without
It can cause hearts to bleed


Sometimes प्यार burns
To an extent that we can’t bear
प्यार is an emotion,
something we can to share

Maybe आप don’t प्यार the one who loves you,
But even if your दिल is full of hate
प्यार comes first before anything
It burns on after fate

प्यार can bring back life to those
Who have लॉस्ट meaning and hope
So I belive प्यार is good,
It warms the ones grey and cold who havn’t the strength to cope

प्यार is goodbye, but also a welcome
A bird that flies there, free
प्यार is something आप can’t buy,
Whatever the price may be.

To watch a face twist up in pain,
प्यार is how आप sooth
प्यार is calm but also wild,
संगीत that makes आप move

Peaceful is what प्यार is,
a flutter in the air
प्यार is sometimes peaceful
प्यार isn’t fair

A palm on an island,
a petal on a rose
प्यार never stops growing
we don’t know how big प्यार grows.


प्यार is the closest thing we have to magic
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sorry guys couldnt fit the rest in it was 2 long but the ending sentence was the first verse of the poem :) thx for पढ़ना it
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thanx i luv this poem girl this rock.
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wow great poem better than some pro work can i add u as a friend?
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ABDCFan- said:
This poem is awesomeeee! (:
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thx!! that means alot
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o and btw ur reveiw is awesomeeee! aswell ;) लोल
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Hellohoudini said:
Beautiful and moving! Dont be afraid to post more..
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thanks that is really really nice it means loads to me thank u xx
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countrygirl2008 said:
wow that was very touching . आप have a natural talent.!
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:::::DDDD लोल thank u thank u!!!! thats really nice it means alot
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ScottishChic said:
THAT WAS AN IMMENSE POEM!!!!!!!!
how'd u get so good at लेखन them??? *jealous*

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wow thx that really nice :)
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twifan2010 said:
WOW, AMAZING! Could u give me some tips on how u can write poems like that, cause I really like लेखन n would like to do some more! :)
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thx ye i will x :)
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loverofedward said:
हे there ur poem is really awesome u knw .I guess u must b in luv too dats y u wrote dis poem.U did include dat suggestions r welcome so i just felt dat ur line "love isnt fair" is incorrect as i think luv is always fair या maybe u cld xplain wat did u meant द्वारा it.
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kk thx and btw im not in love!!! लोल thx tho
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