द हीरोस ऑफ ओलिंपस Percy Joins Chaos

Musabbir-Noor posted on May 22, 2012 at 09:16PM
Hey Guy's
This is a fanfiction. It takes place after the giant wars. All the gods start having more kids. One of them is called James. He was Percy's half brother. Everyone started to forget about Percy. Soon even Annabeth forgot him and started going out with James. Percy had enough. /he was running away. Unknown to him Chaos, creator of the universe, was watching him. He was teleported to a distant planet. After liberating them, there was a problem on earth. After 10,000 years he was returning home.

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एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Musabbir-Noor said…
yes new page have cake
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Avidsel said…
Thanks for great update :D HAH! Take that Annabeth! He moved on without you! Wonder what the reactions will be when they find out he married to Bianca :O
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Pegasus100 said…
smile
Yah I can't wait for that part either.
POST SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना zaheer_abbas123 said…
awesome chapter once again im excited about the next chapter and other series percy RULES!!!!!
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Musabbir-Noor said…
posting 2morrow
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Musabbir-Noor said…
Im posting now. Patience.
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Musabbir-Noor said…
Chapter 15
Annabeth

The transmission obviously meant that we can ambush them know. I was too upset to care. Percy had moved on. He had a son. Who was the wife? She had to be drop dead gorgeous. I can't believe I ever cheated on him. i regret it. A lot. A scream broke out and my thoughts were interrupted.
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Musabbir-Noor said…
That is really short. Im updating 2morrow after 4:00 cuz of Kaplan.
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Musabbir-Noor said…
comment!!!
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Pegasus100 said…
smile
Wow great chapter. When you posting?
POST SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना DoTH said…
uhhhhh.....you were going to post yesterday......you still haven't posted....did a drakon eat you?POSTTTT
POST
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना ChampionChaos said…
smile
Its a great story, but don't demand reply's. If makes you seem needy. We have a choice to reply or not. But great story. Try not to have Percy too perfect, add some flaws.
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Musabbir-Noor said…
sad
hey guys. sry. was out of commision. Broken leg.
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Musabbir-Noor said…
another 2 comments and im posting.
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Avidsel said…
Urghh I hate people holding story hostage :/ Guess thats 1 post towards at least :/
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना zaheer_abbas123 said…
oh!!sorry to hear about ur leg how is it??
if u cant post due to injury please dont strain urself take ur time we will wait until u get welll...:)
anyways getwell soon........:)
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Pegasus100 said…
worried
U posting?
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Musabbir-Noor said…
smile
sry guys i was busy im posting now.
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Musabbir-Noor said…
Chapter 16
Ace

We listened to what my dad had to say when I heard a scream. I went outside to check what it was and found that a small army was attacking us. only a thousand monsters. Boring. i sighed and drew my sword. Between me and the army it will only take a couple of minutes to wipe them out. i drew my sword, Streamer and started attacking.

I sliced dozens of dracene with each strike. I used the very force of gravity to help me. I crushed the entire army. The smaller ones died immediately. After this there were only a 100 monsters left. They included Lystrigian giants, hell hounds, and hyperborions. Even they were distorted.

The campers were just watching wide eyed. I sighed. Losers. I summoned huge amounts of plasma and took care of the rest of the monsters.

I walked back to the shocked campers and said "Where were we before we were interpreted?"
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Musabbir-Noor said…
It's short sry.
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना cass-bosch said…
big smile
Great chapter when are u posting again your story rocks!!!!!!!!!!!!!
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना book-worm said…
That's awesome!!! I just found your story and LOVE it!!!! Please post soon!!!
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना cass-bosch said…
sad
PLZ post soon dieing to find out what happens next
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना greekgeek7083 said…
big smile
post soon
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Musabbir-Noor said…
Read my latest story

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एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Musabbir-Noor said…
i'm posting in 3 days.
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना book-worm said…
3 DAYS?!?!??! How about 3 hours? 3 minutes? 3 seconds?
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना cass-bosch said…
crying
Can't wait for 3 days!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Musabbir-Noor said…
any1 gonna read my new story. Leave a comment
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना book-worm said…
You have a new story?
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Musabbir-Noor said…
ya heres the link

link
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Musabbir-Noor said…
this is y its taking me so long to post. I'm writing 2 stories.
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना book-worm said…
Oh nice
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना cass-bosch said…
laugh
When are u going to post, your new story is cool
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना book-worm said…
I read your MoA and it was good. Don't abandon it!!!!! Post soon!!!!!
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Musabbir-Noor said…
k guys posting today
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना cass-bosch said…
Yay!!!!!!
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एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Musabbir-Noor said…
Chapter 17
3rd person POV

After everyone was seated again one of the campers blurted out "how did you do that."

Ace just shrugged it of "Basic sword fighting and I used the force of gravity."

"You call that basic" one of the campers asked in awe.

Ace was getting slightly annoyed but used this chance to brag about his dad "Compared to what my dad could do. If we make it to the randevpous in time you can watch him. He bends time, earth, fire, water, air, nature, and death into 1 as he fights " Ace finished proudly.
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना cass-bosch said…
laugh
Cool
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना kkw1700 said…
i like it
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना LORDCHAOS said…
big smile
I'm reading this story again!
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना book-worm said…
I love this please post soon!!! ^i might have to read again so I don't go crazy!!!!
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना cass-bosch said…
Post soon!!!!!!!!!
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना somisista said…
surprise
this is intense!
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना book-worm said…
Please post soon!
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना cass-bosch said…
angry
Post soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना somisista said…
worried
POST NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना book-worm said…
Post please!!!
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना kkw1700 said…
So much for 3days....
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना book-worm said…
haha I was just thinking the same thing let me see when he was last on