This is a song I'm writing, thinking about Huddy. I need opinions. Should I add another verse and chorus? Is it okay where it is? I feel like it's still not quite finished, but I need some ideas. I have a basic melody in my head that I just need to get written down. Anything आप could do to give me ideas would be greatly appreciated. *THERE IS ONE BAD WORD* Thank You.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
To tell आप everything I want to.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
So I’ll simply say I want you.
The world is speeding up
And I am loosing you
My mind is slowing down
आप कहा that we are through
But this can’t be it
I’ve got to try
I’m sorry if my shit
Ever made आप cry
I need a sign
That you’ll be mine
Casue I am running out of time
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
To tell आप everything I want to.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
So I’ll simply say I need you.
You’re trying to हटाइए on
And I am loosing you
आप लॉस्ट your faith in me
And कहा that we were through
I can’t leave it like this
I’ve got to try
For that one last kiss
Even if it is goodbye
I need a sign
That you’ll be mine
Cause I am running out of time
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
To tell आप everything I want to.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
But I’ve got to say I प्यार you.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
To tell आप everything I want to.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
So I’ll simply say I want you.
The world is speeding up
And I am loosing you
My mind is slowing down
आप कहा that we are through
But this can’t be it
I’ve got to try
I’m sorry if my shit
Ever made आप cry
I need a sign
That you’ll be mine
Casue I am running out of time
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
To tell आप everything I want to.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
So I’ll simply say I need you.
You’re trying to हटाइए on
And I am loosing you
आप लॉस्ट your faith in me
And कहा that we were through
I can’t leave it like this
I’ve got to try
For that one last kiss
Even if it is goodbye
I need a sign
That you’ll be mine
Cause I am running out of time
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
To tell आप everything I want to.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
But I’ve got to say I प्यार you.
Okay, this poem is basically in Cuddy's POV kind of to House. I wrote it to be kind of Cuddy's personal thing, but of course, it turned into Huddy. My first लेख on this spot AND Huddy poem, so please tell me what आप think! It's short and might be a bit confusing at first, but here it goes;
Love.
And that's all I ever wanted.
How did I get here?
Just crying in an empty room
Once again a vacant world to me
I'm hurting and I'm sure आप know
I hope, and that's just what i do
That the world could be, just be
What i want it to, another happy ending
Which we both know it won't be
Just hold me, so for a second
I could pretend it is
Could pretend it can
Pretend it could be
And maybe I could प्यार you
And pretend i didn't know
That it was one of the few things
I was missing.
I know it kind of sucks, but it's my first and what do आप expect?
Love.
And that's all I ever wanted.
How did I get here?
Just crying in an empty room
Once again a vacant world to me
I'm hurting and I'm sure आप know
I hope, and that's just what i do
That the world could be, just be
What i want it to, another happy ending
Which we both know it won't be
Just hold me, so for a second
I could pretend it is
Could pretend it can
Pretend it could be
And maybe I could प्यार you
And pretend i didn't know
That it was one of the few things
I was missing.
I know it kind of sucks, but it's my first and what do आप expect?