Huddy Article: I Need Opinions!!!!

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posted by CuddyHuddy

This is a song I'm writing, thinking about Huddy. I need opinions. Should I add another verse and chorus? Is it okay where it is? I feel like it's still not quite finished, but I need some ideas. I have a basic melody in my head that I just need to get written down. Anything आप could do to give me ideas would be greatly appreciated. *THERE IS ONE BAD WORD* Thank You.

There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
To tell आप everything I want to.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
So I’ll simply say I want you.

The world is speeding up
And I am loosing you
My mind is slowing down
आप कहा that we are through
But this can’t be it
I’ve got to try
I’m sorry if my shit
Ever made आप cry
I need a sign
That you’ll be mine
Casue I am running out of time

There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
To tell आप everything I want to.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
So I’ll simply say I need you.

You’re trying to हटाइए on
And I am loosing you
आप लॉस्ट your faith in me
And कहा that we were through
I can’t leave it like this
I’ve got to try
For that one last kiss
Even if it is goodbye
I need a sign
That you’ll be mine
Cause I am running out of time

There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
To tell आप everything I want to.
There’s not enough time, there’s not enough time
But I’ve got to say I प्यार you.

houseluva8, HuddyHudduHuddy and 7 others like this

midnyte007 This is good, but yeah, I'd add another verse to it.

CuddyHuddy I thought so to, thanks.

livi_wells It's brilliant, you must be so talented to be writing a song! Another verse would be great, just to make it a little longer.

livi_wells Maybe the verse could allude to the fact that you try to hide but you want it as much as I do, or something along those lines? You don't have to take the suggestion, but just thought I'd offer it! :)

huddyislove aww it's lovely!!!

CuddyHuddy Wow! Thank you all so much! I'm going to go work on this right now. Also, livi, thanks for your suggestion. I was thinking about something like that as well, I'll keep it in mind.