Let's just get this straight before आप go harping on my लेख because I'm a Twitard. Because I'm not. I'm just getting a little sick of Bella हंस being called "too perfect". She's perfect about to the extent that I am a Twilight fan. Which is to say, not at all.
OK, Let me tell आप a story about a REAL Mary-Sue.
Once upon a time, there was a girl named ऐनस्टेशिया B. Ana was in 6th grade, she was tiny for the age of ten (she skipped kindergarten), she was absolutely adorable, and she was in Gifted and 7th grade math. Boys all loved her, and she could crochet, knit, and she had perfect handwriting. She could play the शहनाई, क्लैरिनेट well and she was an avid reader. She was also very religious and sweet, never disrespecting her friends.
Does Bella हंस seem so perfect now? And now let's see what Mrs. Cullen/Swan has to say for herself.
Once upon a time,there was a girl named Bella Swan. She was beautiful and all the boys wanted her. She was smart and was horrible to her friends. She could play no musical instrument, and her handwriting is anybody's guess. Her religion is not mentioned enough to stick in my head, and when she got a boyfriend, her फ्रेंड्स left her only because she left them. She relies on her boyfriend for everything, and when he leaves her, she jumps off cliffs to hear his voice.
Does she sound so Mary-Sueish compared to Anastasia? And here's the twist: ऐनस्टेशिया is an actual person. Mary-Sues aren't just in books.
Here's my conclusion:
Bella हंस was written to be perfect. The small hints of her leading a perfect life, having no problems and consequences, etc. were meant to make her perfect. She was written as a Mary-Sue, probably unintentionally, and yet failed miserably.
PS... to zanhar1: Thank आप for making that point in my original draft. I changed it and really appreciate the tip. Thanks!
OK, Let me tell आप a story about a REAL Mary-Sue.
Once upon a time, there was a girl named ऐनस्टेशिया B. Ana was in 6th grade, she was tiny for the age of ten (she skipped kindergarten), she was absolutely adorable, and she was in Gifted and 7th grade math. Boys all loved her, and she could crochet, knit, and she had perfect handwriting. She could play the शहनाई, क्लैरिनेट well and she was an avid reader. She was also very religious and sweet, never disrespecting her friends.
Does Bella हंस seem so perfect now? And now let's see what Mrs. Cullen/Swan has to say for herself.
Once upon a time,there was a girl named Bella Swan. She was beautiful and all the boys wanted her. She was smart and was horrible to her friends. She could play no musical instrument, and her handwriting is anybody's guess. Her religion is not mentioned enough to stick in my head, and when she got a boyfriend, her फ्रेंड्स left her only because she left them. She relies on her boyfriend for everything, and when he leaves her, she jumps off cliffs to hear his voice.
Does she sound so Mary-Sueish compared to Anastasia? And here's the twist: ऐनस्टेशिया is an actual person. Mary-Sues aren't just in books.
Here's my conclusion:
Bella हंस was written to be perfect. The small hints of her leading a perfect life, having no problems and consequences, etc. were meant to make her perfect. She was written as a Mary-Sue, probably unintentionally, and yet failed miserably.
PS... to zanhar1: Thank आप for making that point in my original draft. I changed it and really appreciate the tip. Thanks!
Oh do आप not see, the language so cruciated,
द्वारा your most unfortunate attempt in grammars?
Do आप believe, for that moment that we're mirthed?
Well, then आप are as mistaken as the Balaclava Brits.
Don't आप see, your own insults to your common decency?
Do आप not hear, our desperate attempts to save your sanity?
I hope आप hear, I must hope आप see.
But I think, आप only see your vanity.
Vanity, vanity, everything vanity...
But then where are your humanity? The World wonder'd...
Dedicated to iluvtwilight, ellietwilight12 and every other rabid प्रशंसक in the whole wide world. I plead to you: Stop this madness...
Inspiration: Alfred, Lord Tennyson; the Charge of the Light Brigade
द्वारा your most unfortunate attempt in grammars?
Do आप believe, for that moment that we're mirthed?
Well, then आप are as mistaken as the Balaclava Brits.
Don't आप see, your own insults to your common decency?
Do आप not hear, our desperate attempts to save your sanity?
I hope आप hear, I must hope आप see.
But I think, आप only see your vanity.
Vanity, vanity, everything vanity...
But then where are your humanity? The World wonder'd...
Dedicated to iluvtwilight, ellietwilight12 and every other rabid प्रशंसक in the whole wide world. I plead to you: Stop this madness...
Inspiration: Alfred, Lord Tennyson; the Charge of the Light Brigade
Okay so first of i am going to say again i am a प्रशंसक of both.But if आप would ask me what i like better i think it would probably be Harry Potter.But i want to hear out why do आप dislike/hate(tho hate it's to of a strong word for a book/movie)Twilight.I want solid arguments not such as : cause the वैंपायर there sparkle , like this Twilight प्रशंसकों could just say 'because Harry has a scar' या 'because they go to a school of magic' या 'because all death eaters are black(mostly)' i mean these are arguments just so आप can say something.I tend to believe these days people hate/dislike Twilight just because others do.And i will ask आप nicely and be thankful if आप could tell me why आप don't like it at all/hate it.
i persenally dont like ether series and heres why!!!
books
twilight
1) i am a reel vampire and i do not sparkl!!! stephanie shud have धुंधला काले रंग, डुन, डन her reasearch before she wrote a book about vampires!!!
2) bella is a bad roll model!!!
4) edwerd is abusiv!!!
5) its unrealistic!!!
6) its badly writen!!!
7) edwerd is describd to much!!! it gets boring!!!
8) its boring overall!!!
harry potter
1) its not relatble!!!
2) its made for kids!!!
3)harry always beets te bad guy!!! he never looses!!!
4) harry gets away wit everything in skool!!!
5) they hav bad frends!!! ron leaves nd dosnt stay wit harry when peeps make fun of him!!!
6) its boring!!!
7) snape keeps his job even tho he bullys students nd is a deth eater!!!
8) dumbledoor doesnt reely care about harry!!! he leaves him at da durslys even tho they are abusiv!!!
movies
both फिल्में hav bad actors nd the filmers didnt follows the boks the way they were suposed to!!!
books
twilight
1) i am a reel vampire and i do not sparkl!!! stephanie shud have धुंधला काले रंग, डुन, डन her reasearch before she wrote a book about vampires!!!
2) bella is a bad roll model!!!
4) edwerd is abusiv!!!
5) its unrealistic!!!
6) its badly writen!!!
7) edwerd is describd to much!!! it gets boring!!!
8) its boring overall!!!
harry potter
1) its not relatble!!!
2) its made for kids!!!
3)harry always beets te bad guy!!! he never looses!!!
4) harry gets away wit everything in skool!!!
5) they hav bad frends!!! ron leaves nd dosnt stay wit harry when peeps make fun of him!!!
6) its boring!!!
7) snape keeps his job even tho he bullys students nd is a deth eater!!!
8) dumbledoor doesnt reely care about harry!!! he leaves him at da durslys even tho they are abusiv!!!
movies
both फिल्में hav bad actors nd the filmers didnt follows the boks the way they were suposed to!!!