Protests against the Jedi

Nakoma was doing her hair one night when she heard a knock on the door. She got up and went to answer it. "May I come in?" Anakin asked. Though confused, Nakoma let him in. He sat down on her bed. "Can I talk to you?" he asked. Nakoma was still confused why Anakin was at her quarters this late, but she nodded.

Anakin was going through alot. His stress and anger had doubled since Ahsoka's suicide. "Afew months before आप became my Padawan, Ahsoka... लॉस्ट her will to live." Anakin croaked. Nakoma put her hands over her mouth in shock. "She was on her home-world Shili at the time of her passing."...

Nakoma sat nervously in the Jedi head quarters. She knew she was in DEEP trouble. Anakin was angry at her for doing such a thing. Obi-Wan couldn't believe she didn't listen. Padme tried her best get over the shock. What exactly DID Nakoma do, आप might ask? Secretly go out with a Sith Lord!

Dontel seemed to be nice. He was on an undercover mission for the Sith when he met Nakoma. The और the two got to know each other, the और Dontel used her as bait for his evil plans! Dontel was just bad news all around. That's just sad because Nakoma liked him. Here's what else is sad, because he only used...

This is about my Original Character, Lorrettai Hunalo.
Wondering how to pernounce that? Lor-et-tie, Who-n-all-oh. :)
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Intro:
Anakin was running. Not for his life या anything big like that, just for some peace and quiet, away from Ahsoka and Obi-Wan. He turned a corner and pressed up against the wall.
“Uh, sir, what are आप doing?” Rex had been walking द्वारा when Anakin made his appearance.
“Uh… nothing, nothing at all, why, what are आप doing?” Anakin replied quickly, walking away. Rex stared after him, completely bewildered.
As soon as Anakin knew...

I looked down at the valley below from our cliff position. Tens of thousands of droids massing up for a full scale attack I presumed. "Echo!You might want to see this!"I shouted to Echo. "What is i-By the force!Thats alot of clankers!"Echo कहा through the comm. "What do we do now?"I asked curiously. "We fight Lieutenant and we link up with the 501st".Echo said. "Echo Wraith this is Rex!We need to your cover fire!Where the hell are you!"shouted Rex over the comm channel. I could make out explosions and laser blasts in the background. "Hurry!Patching coordinates to you're HUDs."said Rex. "I...