Signs of Life 

Have you posted a link in the link section of the "Severus Snape and Original Female Characters" too ?

I'll come back to you for my remarks, like I said in my PM to you.

You did a good thing on FF.net by making your paragraphs shorter, as it is easier to read that way.

Keep up the good work !

Angel, Im glad you enjoy my work, but I would greatly appreciate it if you stopped posting it all over the internet as your own. You've helped me with this story quite a few times, and Im gratful, but this is NOT your story. Fix what you've said or it will cause a problem.