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what do आप think of this poem?

this is my first but just tell like it is. if आप hate it just tell me.


every time i look at आप i makes me want too cry.

every time i look at आप it makes me want too scream.

every time i look at आप it makes me want too die.

every time i look at आप it makes me think of आप and her lastnight.


so what do आप think should i wright more?
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dustfinger said:
this is not a poem. its a song. make it a song. i like it so far.
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ok thanks for answering ;)
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Mela1994 said:
i like it, u should write more!!! :D

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do आप think people would read it?
lilred96 posted एक साल  से अधिक पुराना
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i would read it so yeah i think people would read it :)
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sweet_n_silly said:
like dustfinger I think it would be a good song. It's pretty darn good too. there's some spelling issues though. आप definately should write more.
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if u do decide to make it into a song, I could maybe write the संगीत if u want
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peterslover said:
Awesome☺ Like they said, make it into a song☺
अगला line could be:
every time I look at आप I want to say goodbye
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TwilightSagaLdy said:
yeah its और of a song and its pretty good!!! and i think आप should finish लेखन it! i like it!!! =)
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