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its a poem i made about school (its just a joke thats not how i feel about school):

school is not cool
it's just cruel,
teachers want आप to do maths
because its one of their wrath,
they'll make आप in detention
and when आप ask they just won't mention,
they'll give आप tests
so आप do your best,
(but really they just do it to torture us)

लोल i liked it do u write little poems like these a lot?

ryofangirl posted एक साल से अधिक पुराना

ya i do and thank आप

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Bananaaddict said:

I think it's funny! But here are some suggestions:
1. आप should capitalize the first letter in each line, unless you're trying to mimic e. e. cummings.
2. I don't know if 'wrath' can be used in that context या as a plural noun.
3. आप can't 'make' someone in detention. How about put?
4. The last line doesn't rhym, with doesn't really matter since it could be free verse, but the rest of the poem does rhym, so it's sort of messing with a pattern आप already laid out for yourself.
Of course, आप don't have to do any of that. They're just suggestions.

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thanks i will try to do it अगला time

StarGirl1721 posted एक साल से अधिक पुराना

hahah i कहा detentions cause i have heard of some teachers they just make u in detention and when आप ask they won't answer and change the subject so thats why i पोस्टेड that

StarGirl1721 posted एक साल से अधिक पुराना

No detention is fine, it's just that someone "make" आप in detention makes no sense. It would be better if it was "put" आप in detention.

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