Here's one of my poems called 'Music'. Tell me what आप think of it plz?

Memories of आप are forever gone
संगीत drowns out everything going on
can't see, can't hear,
suffocating in despair,
I wonder when you'll ever see
the dark that lives inside of me?
I'm sensitive to everything,
संगीत is all that seems to stay with me
everything, everybody else leaves

So while you've gone, left me astray,
I can always find my way,
with संगीत always guiding me through,
I realize I don't need you.