Please टिप्पणी दे your opinoin should i make और या do आप like it???

Hey, I wrote a fanfic but no-one seems to be पढ़ना it. I'm hoping it just cuz they can't find it. Please could आप read it and tell me what आप think?

It was a normal दिन in Destiny Islands.The sun was shining and the residents were as happy as ever.But when Kioka woke up,Destiny Islands had changed forever.Some of the ideas from this fic came from my पूर्व fic but I'm ditching that one.

As the fallout occurs, the story closes on Zexion's reflection

The final battle of the story.

Xenmas reports something that forever changes everything.

A दिन that belongs only to LarSon

Axel attempts another assassination.

A huge smorgasbord explodes in Twilight Town.

Zexion and Jason go on a mission together.