Hello, this is a story im wrting carrying on from where जे. के. रोलिंग left of after the war before the 19 Years later. This is not the full first chapter only what i have written so far- if i get enough feedback then I will eventually put the full chapter up when it is finnished and then I will put the new chapters on when they are finnished. Thank you- Here it is......



Ginny was sat on the bench in the great Hall, lent against her Mother who sat at her side, the last of her tears rolled down her cheeks. Looking down the तालिका, टेबल to where her Brother Ron sat with Hermione, their heads close together,...

A sharp siring pain struck my stomach; I froze tight as stone grasping at my stomach. The pain was unbelievably unbearable. I wasn’t able to breathe it just made the pain ten times worse. My eyes were pinched tight, tighter then when I jumped off the bleachers in the high school gym a few years back.
The thought about that whole night made me cringe making the pain worst. That night was one of the worst nights of my life; something I hope will never have to be brought up ever again.
Patch and I were sitting on the सोफ़ा, सोफे watching TV after our one o’clock lunch. My legs had been flung on top...

Chapter 1:A twist of fate!

XxXxX-Konoha, October 10th-12 years ago

It was a warm summer evening within the village of Konoha,and it had an odd calming effect on the people.There was still many people bustling about despite the fact the sun had set several hours ago.Minato stood,or rather paced,frantically around in his office.He kept glancing impatiently at the door,then to the walls,then the door again,in an endless cycle of anxiety that had been going on for hours."Kushina should be here yourself together!"

Minato berated himself,attempting to calm his nerves."I can't let her see me like this,or...

Hullo my lovelies. My name is alexischaos2004 या Alexis. Today, I am going to review a fanfiction based off of Naruto, and it is pretty bad. I got the bits from the fanfic from another review on it. So, let's go!


"ARE आप &&& KIDDING ME? I can't believe we && &$& $& &&&)(&# &$#&T&S two trips to the dentist!"

First, who says actual text symbols in a sentence? Nobody could actually say them. Next, please work on your grammar. I'm not really sure the world of नारूटो even has dentists. (It was written like this on the other review on this...

(Some viewers may find this a little raunchy, viewer discretion kind of advised.)
And count how many times I mention Jello. :D

Hello Zello Yellow Mellow I प्यार Jello Everybody! (WOW FIRST SENTENCE!) Today I am reviewing a GOOD Fanfiction, and will teach आप how to make one CORRECTLY. (You listening to this TrueBlueTeam? Dry Bones? Good.)

Seriously though guys, I really do प्यार this Fanfiction, and I really do प्यार Jello.

The Fanfiction makes clever funny references to the show, has plenty of logic, sanity, and कल्पना in it, the Fanfiction is funny, and does many things right.

But आप probably...

Bonnie and Damon were in the living room of the Boarding House. Bonnie was placing white candles in a triangle. As she lit each of them she mumbled Latin words. When she was done, she blew out the match and looked at Damon.
“So, here’s what we’re going to do” Bonnie said. “You have to step into the त्रिकोण, त्रिभुज and sit down”
“And what are आप going to do?” Damon asked, quite insecure.
“I’m going to stay outside the triangle” Bonnie answered. “I will put आप under some sort of hypnosis. I will be with आप in your subconscious”
“Very reassuring” Damon कहा sarcastic.
“Now...

*tears* Gaz break my arm back in "stop moving cry baby" she कहा not even caring if I was hurt "you heal...". If your saying how this happen... Well that's for a new time from the past when I started fighting the 3 worm baby's... "ok this will do for now so rest" Gaz कहा in Lil anger for the 3 worm baby's doing this to me... "see bad I told you, आप suck at fighting those 3 girls... Hmm" yeah she's right I didn't knew how powerful they were "maybe if we think of a plan to take them out but for now rest"

I can't even हटाइए my broken arm... I look at Gaz.. She was very pretty for a human... But...

Elena was too ashamed to leave her room and she didn’t open when someone knocked. And thus Caroline invited herself in. She found her best friend sitting in a corner, her arms thrown around her knees.
“Ah, poor thing” Caroline sighed compassionate as she walked to Elena, a box in her arms. “Damon told me what happened. आप okay?”
Elena shrugged and wiped her tears. “He’s says this is normal. How would he know? He’s a dude, isn’t he?”
“But he’s right” Caroline कहा and she sank down अगला to her.
“My stomach hurts” Elena sobbed. Caroline searched through her box and...

Elena’s POV
    The night got colder as I walked further away from the Founder’s दिन party. Just a few और steps and I’ll be at the school.
    I reached the school’s front door but when I tried to open them but they wouldn’t budge. I gave up and sighed. I crossed my arm’s trying to keep warm. Looking around trying to find another way in, though the only way I knew of was the doors in the back of the school.
    I slowly walked my self to the back doors. I grabbed the frost bitten door handle and pulled it open. Once I walked...

February 14, 2017.

It all started like a normal couple, Bob Himb was doing a video with FluxxHd.
They were playing Gmod, but it wasn’t a normal day, it was February 14.
FluxxHd कहा something he would never say he said, “Hey BB want to go with me to the cosplay convention”, Bob Himb yelled in a seducing voice, Bob Himb “Oh yes, I will dress up like your logo”. Bob Himb quick traveled to FluxxHD’s house, after he got their Fluxx was in a bunny sexy suit, Bob Himb कहा to him in a turn on voice, “Hey bon-bon, आप ready?”, Fluxx Responded in a दिखाना off voice “Yes babe” After...

(So what आप are about to read was mainly inspired to me द्वारा a very weird yet interesting dream. I know that virtually every single time I make one of these, something goes wrong, but I have good faith that I can continue this one to the best of my ability. So, without further ado, let's get started.)

Tick, Tock...Tick, Tock...

BZZZZZZT!!

#1: AUGH! *Falls out of bed*

#1: Jesus, I thought I got rid of this stupid alarm clock...Always frightens the living hell outta me!

#2: आप should be complaining, Miles. I sleep right अगला to it!

#1/Miles: True, James. But still, whose idea was this anyway? Ah, never...

Tyler woke up with a burning pain on his chest. Someone was caressing his exposed chest with a vervain flower.
“Good evening, Tyler” a woman said. It wasn’t Veronica. She had a paper bag with her, probably full of vervain and wolfsbane. Her hand disappeared in the bag, but she withdrew her hand she was holding up a sandwich. Tyler raised his eyebrows, something that didn’t go unnoticed. “What? A girl’s got to eat, right? And I don’t know how long I’ll be in here, because that totally depends on you”
“Why? If you’re going to kill me, why not just do it?” Tyler snapped...

Matt, Keith, Bonnie, Jeremy and Veronica were sitting around the रसोई, रसोईघर table. Veronica had दिया each a cup of coffee, in order to stay awake.
“Thank you” Jeremy कहा uncomfortable. “You don’t really know Elena. It’s not like आप owe her anything”
Veronica cast him a grin that didn’t reach her eyes. “Anything for my soldiers” she replied charming.
“How’s that going?” Matt asked, trying to keep a conversation. “Do आप need anyone else in your…army?”
“Why? Interested?” Veronica returned, raising her eyebrows. “For now the training’s canceled” She turned...

Elena was still in the hospital. She had traded the बिस्तर for the seat, which was much और comfortable than the former.
The door opened and Damon came back with two coffees. He gave one to Elena and she took a sip, curling her nose.
“Is there alcohol in this?” she asked surprised.
“Oh, right, that’s mine” Damon apologized. “Sorry” He switched the cups and took a sip from his coffee with bourbon. “Why aren’t आप in bed?” he asked a little accusatory.
“Damon, don’t start” Elena कहा in begging tone.
Damon shut his mouth and signaled that she had to get up. Elena pulled...

Elena was lying on the couch, much to Damon’s discontent, while Meredith did some basic tests.
“How long have आप been feeling like this?” she asked while she checked Elena’s eyes.
“Started this morning, when I woke up” Elena answered softly.
“And you’re having pain?” Meredith continued, checking Elena’s ears. “Where exactly?”
“My shoulders. My knees. My ankles. My hips” Elena summed up frowning, pausing after every joint she mentioned.
“Open your mouth” Meredith ordered and Elena obeyed. “Looks just fine” she mumbled and Elena closed her mouth again. “I’m...

“Alright, I’ll do it!” Rachel exclaimed, looking angry at Stefan. “But if I get killed द्वारा Veronica’s minions I will come back to haunt you”
“Is that a promise?” Stefan teased. Then he was serious again. “Did आप guys hear that?” he asked concerned. Rachel nodded, Jeremy shook his head. Stefan walked towards the bushes, when a swarm of birds flew out of the them.
“Mystery solved” Jeremy कहा and Stefan shrugged and walked back.
Derek almost let out a sigh of deep relief, but realized just in time that the sound of his breath would give him away. Stefan and Damon believed...

“I’m the one getting आप out of jail” Stefan pointed out.
“And I’m the one still waiting for that to happen” Rachel responded with raised eyebrows. She tried to look beside Stefan. “How did आप get in here? I mean, with all the deputies and the sheriff”
“I used the backdoor” Stefan smirked mischievous. He took the bars and wrecked them. He took Rachel’s hand and pulled her out of the cell. “Let’s get out of here”

“Where are we going?” Rachel asked when Stefan dragged her along at a rapid pace.
“I need आप to meet someone” Stefan responded. He stopped at Mystic...

“I’m okay” Stefan groaned as he pulled out the arrow.
“I’m so sorry, Stefan” Elena कहा upset as she ran his way. Damon was already with his brother, helping him getting up. “I didn’t mean to shoot you”
“Really, I’m fine” Stefan tried to reassure her. Elena still looked rather guilty and so Damon jumped to another subject.
“So…did आप find Rachel?” he asked.
“Yeah, I did” Stefan answered.
“Where is she? I thought आप were going to take her here” Damon कहा confused.
“Yeah” Stefan replied slow. “About that”
Rachel walked up to the door of the building....

Elena parked her car at the Boarding House. Caroline had taxed her with the message to get her नितंब, गधा there ASAP. She opened the door and looked inside.
“Damon!” she called.
Damon appeared in the hallway, frowning. “What are आप doing here?”
“Caroline taxed me” Elena said, waving her phone. “Hello to you, too, btw” She tried to look over Damon’s shoulder. “What’s going on?”
Before Damon could answer Caroline appeared.
“Elena, what are आप doing here?” she asked, but in a completely different tone than Damon. “Come on” she continued as she took Elena’s hand and...