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Critical Analysis of Twilight सवाल

I've been thinking...

I am currently an English-Creative लेखन major in college, and I've been turning over an idea in my head for a while now. I want to practice on my own first 'novel.' I'm aware of copyright infringement and all that (I'm going to put a disclaimer XD), but I was thinking of rewriting Twilight. In my own way. Not as a parody, but with developed characters and a good storyline and plot. I think that Twilight had some potential in the hands of a capable author, and from what I've heard, I'm a pretty good writer.

I was going to write it as a fanfic on fanfiction.net. What do आप think? I'm still on the edge of deciding whether I'll do it या not. If आप like या dislike the idea say so, but just be polite please. And if आप have ideas for it FANTASTIC! :D My ई मेल address is ladyvampresslilith@yahoo.com; please send me your ideas. It could be about anything to do with Twilight to make it better.

Please tell me what आप think! Thank you!

LadyLilith (aka LadyCat aka Shelby) ♥
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Critical Analysis of Twilight जवाब

Twilight_Dream said:
well, thinking that its a bad story is YOUR opinion. not fact. so please dont make it like it is. and what do आप mean in the hands of a good d author? twilight was Stephenie Meyer's idea. no one els's. otherwise it wouldn't BE twilight. and rewriting it saying that YOU'LL make it better like your some accomplished लेखक makes it seem like your really full of yourself. so i would say no. im sorry if i haven't been polite but its just i got really ticked off seeing this question.
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I apologize that it made आप angry, I was simply asking a question. No, I am not full of myself; I am actually the exact opposite. It took many other people saying that I was a good writer to consider this, and I still don't wholly believe them. I am no accomplished author; I never कहा it once. It's a fanfic, so I can write it if I decide to do so; I will put the disclaimer on it saying that it is Stephenie Meyer's work. It would simply be an experiment of my abilities as an author. I personally think Ms. Meyer is not a good author, and I think that she could have made Twilight into a way better, और well written series than what it is. I am curious as to what my version would be like.
LadyLilith posted एक साल  से अधिक पुराना
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but how could that offend someone so much? it seems childish.
Twilight_Dream posted एक साल  से अधिक पुराना
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can आप please take one सेकंड to stop being rude and sarcastic?
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friendsfan101 said:
Well, I'd प्यार to see a story!
Even though I'm a प्रशंसक of Twilight, I don't think that SM is the best writer, now that I look back on Twilight, it kind of...sucks. (No offense, Twilight_Dream, I know आप प्यार Twilight!) I think that it'd be cool to read a re-write of it. I don't think that it would be too bad, because there are a large numbers of सिंडरेला re-writes and nothing bad's happened. I'm all for it!
Of course, you'd have to write that आप don't own Twilight if आप put it up online, and I'm guessing that आप would have to tweak some of the names and some aspects of the plot if आप ever प्रकाशित करे it, but I'd प्यार to read a story! I hope आप write it, and please, tell me when आप do! I'd enjoy पढ़ना it. =)
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^-^ Thank आप for your support! I'm thinking I may; once I've written some of it, I will post up a link. :)
LadyLilith posted एक साल  से अधिक पुराना
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Cool! I can't wait to read it. =)
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Queenoftard said:
Personally, I think it's a brilliant idea. I've been toying with the idea myself.
I don't really have any specific ideas yet, as I'm pretty occupied with other projects, but I would प्यार to read your version.
Will आप tell me if आप do decide to write it? या maybe आप could just give me your यूज़रनाम on fanfiction.net?
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My यूज़रनाम on fanfiction.net is AikaOokami, and I might post a link to the first chapter up on the spot as well, if Dearheart doesn't see an issue with it. If आप come up with any ideas for character या story development, please ई मेल me या message me and let me know and we can discuss it. People have कहा that I'm a decent writer, but any help I can get is much appreciated. :)
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Dearheart said:
It's very true and very tragic...Twilight had a LOT of potential, but it was squelched and turned into a teeny-bopper drool fest. In the right hands, it could've turned out to be a genuinely great series.

If आप want to rewrite Twilight "LadyCat style", then द्वारा all means, go ahead. As long as आप don't try to प्रकाशित करे या sell it, I don't think you'll run into any trouble. And I think it could be a fun and interesting way for आप to exercise your लेखन skills. However, I think it only fair to warn that link has already been done. So make sure your version stands out from the others people have done.

And hey, if आप get creative enough with the plot and the characters, maybe आप could change their names and प्रकाशित करे it as an original work someday! ^__^
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Ah ha, LadyCat style. I like that. :) Thank you. As I said, if आप got any ideas for character changes/flaws या ideas for the storyline, please contact me and discuss it with me. Any help I can get I will gladly take. :)
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mandapanda said:
Hmm. I'm actually very interested in पढ़ना your version. I know Stephenie Meyer has some *cough*many*cough* grammatical errors in the books, however, maybe it was because of her lack of लेखन experience? We can't really be sure. I've heard The Host is pretty well written. लोल sorry. I'm getting off topic :)

As आप know, I'm a huge Twilight fan, and I'm very curious as to how आप will write your Twilight story. Will आप be changing the main storyline? And will आप add और time and developement to characters आप feel had been cheated? And will आप be लेखन New Moon and the other पुस्तकें if your story does well? Mainly, I really want Breaking Dawn to be REDONE! लोल I've found some rewrites, but not the way I wanted it haha

I प्यार Twilight because it is personal. Dearheart had कहा above that making your character a blank is not something आप want as an author... however, I प्यार that. There are alot of stories that have characters who are relatable and have relatable traits, but being able to become the character and how the story is told through the vessel (Bella), it further engulfs आप and encaptures you. It's one thing to be captured and completely wrapped up in a book, but it's a whole different feeling when आप feel like आप are the character and आप are in the story... My apologies if I sounded really corny there. लोल

And, I will be honest. Some of the points that आप had कहा in your introduction irked me a little, just because I think Twilight has a good storyline and plot, but I KNOW that it wasn't your intentions :) Anyways, yes! I'm interested in पढ़ना what आप would have liked Twilight to be :) Hopefully आप don't get chopped for this question. I already see some opposing and defensive answers. But I प्यार आप and आप have my support :)
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X3 I प्यार आप too, mandapanda! Thank आप so much for your support. Ha, Breaking Dawn sounds like a great challenge. If I do well with Twilight, I would प्यार to rewrite Breaking Dawn. I'm sorry that what I कहा offended you, just my opinion as an English major. :) I definitely want to refine and develop the characters. The वाद-विवाद in my mind is what should stay and what should go as far as the story of whole goes. I want it to remain true to the original storyline, but there are some things I would like to alter as well. Anyways, thank आप so much again. If आप have any ideas at all about changes in the storyline या in the characters, please let me know. :)
LadyLilith posted एक साल  से अधिक पुराना
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Oh and about Stephenie Meyer, I think that she may be a good author. All I have read of hers is the Twilight series, and in my opinion she rushed through it and got it published without properly going back on it and editing it to improve her basic ideals. I believe that all writers should do that before presenting a finalized piece of work, and I just don't think she did.
LadyLilith posted एक साल  से अधिक पुराना
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No need to apologize! Opinions are great! लोल and yes. Breaking Dawn will be a hefty challenge! haha I will input on Breaking Dawn if आप decide to re-write it! haha I have been told a few times that I have a future as a writer (LOL, i don't think so), and I was thinking about लेखन Breaking Dawn the way I wanted it, but I think it'd be too much! And I would constantly संपादन करे my work. Haha I always do that! But good luck with your story! I look आगे to seeing how it differs from the original!
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this-is-my-name said:
Sounds like an interesting idea... I'd प्यार to read your version if आप decide to write it.

Just please, for the प्यार of god, fix Bella!
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Oh, that's DEFINITELY happening.
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violetbabe said:
Yes! आप should definitely do it. I know that if a capable लेखक rewrote Twilight, it would be excellent. :)
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Yes, I believe so too. :) Not saying I'm that author, but I'd like to see what I can do with it.
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snoznoodle said:
It is a great idea! I used to like the book and if it wasn't for this spot and the twi-hards I probably still would. If it was written द्वारा someone who knows what they're doing I think it would solve my issues with it :)

Get to work! :D
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XD Yes ma'am! *Salute* And I'm touched that आप have so much faith in me! I'll try not to let आप down!
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MadamOcta13 said:
I think that's an amazing idea! I would so read it if someone else redid it! I'd प्यार a good vampire प्यार story (not a bad Meyerpire lust story)! आप should make Bella have so much और depth and personality...I'm actually thinking about this now...I'm tempted to do the same (but I probably won't).
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Well any ideas आप got, आप can throw at me. :) I might make a मंच on here where people can give me ideas and we can all discuss it together. Bella is definitely something I plan on working on.
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hpfreak14 said:
आप rewriting it reminds me of something that happened today.

In english my teacher कहा "I have to read Twilight for my descriptive लेखन class. (yes teachers go to school to learn how to teach)The first few pages were descriptive. If it was written with less pages द्वारा a better लेखक i think i would enjoy it more"

basically every twilight प्रशंसक was really annoyed. Not many students in my class like him now but others adore and respect him.

The thought of आप rewriting it brought that up in my mind.

I would read it also if आप did
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Well I'm glad the whole world's not going to hell. No offense intended towards Twilight या Stephenie Meyer. XD Thank you!
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sleazy_weasley said:
@Twilight_Dream: आप were incredibly rude to Lady Lilith; she पोस्टेड a perfectly good question, and आप just accused her of being up herself, which she was not. She was merely stating her opinion on Twilight, and how she would like to recreate it.

In my own opinion, I think it is a brilliant idea! It would be interesting to read Twilight in a well-written form with developed characters - seeing as Meyer failed to do so.

Can't wait to read it on Fanfiction! :D Good luck! xox

P.S. When आप finish it, send us all a link!
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X3 Thank आप very much, sleazy_weasley. I will definitely let आप know when the first chapter's out.
LadyLilith posted एक साल  से अधिक पुराना
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see, this is what happens any time i try to post MY opinion. i get jumped on like a pack of dogs.
Twilight_Dream posted एक साल  से अधिक पुराना
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i didnt mean it literally. and आप know that.
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italiangirl976 said:
I think it is a bad idea. It was Stephenie Meyer's idea. Not yours.
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Understandable.
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bookworm12345 said:
Twilght hAs no potinetial I wouldn't bother trying make ur own I'd rather read ur orignial ideas
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Hmmm, I don't agree with the first part (even as anti Twilight as I am). But I'm pleased that you're interested in my other works. :) I have पोस्टेड a lot of कविता on my deviantart account in the link here if आप would like to read it: link
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rachaelwsz said:
I'm actually kinda curious how your version will turn out... so I say: Do it. =)



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Oh and I forgot to mention... Breaking Dawn! I think that's a challenge... So a rewrite should be interesting... =)
rachaelwsz posted एक साल  से अधिक पुराना
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Ohhh yeah. *Cracks knuckles* Breaking Dawn should be something. लोल
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MrazBell10 said:
Well....I think... it's a good idea...
I want to see how it turns out...
I'm a little offended because...you see...I'm a Twilight fanatic...and...I read the Twilight Saga over and over again...
but I want to see it with other's point of view...
As a bookworm...
PLEASE!!! IF आप FINISH THE WHOLE TWILIGHT SAGA PLS. E-MAIL IT AT MY ACCOUNT IN YAHOO: mraz_bell10@yahoo.com

Thanks...
♥ ya'...

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Hey, आप know what? It's perfectly understandable that you're a bit offended, and that's just fine. I think it's really, really great that you're a Twilight fanatic, but that you're civil to the people who don't like it. That's और than I can say for other Twi-fans I've run into. So keep it up! You're awesome! (Bookworms FTW!) =)
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katiecain said:
DO IT AND DON'T MURDER JACOB'S CHARACTER LIKE STEPHENIE DID, LADYCAT. KTHX? :) ♥
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XDDD That's one of the things that will change. As GrintCat कहा somewhere else...he won't be humping Renesmee's leg द्वारा the end of it. या something like that, it was funny. XD
LadyLilith posted एक साल  से अधिक पुराना
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ya atleast make him imprint on a human please.i am begging u
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'he won't be humping Renesmee's leg द्वारा the end of it' HA HA HA HA HA.
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Matsy23 said:
cool!!!!! thats a pretty good idea!!!!! ^^
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Book_freak said:
It could work, just try to do it better than the origonal. Not that it could be worse :P lol
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snusnu13 said:
OMG when are आप going to write it? it sounds fantastic. I was considering re-writing it for my enjoyment. I would like to see Bella with some convincing flaws and Edward with some flaws, any flaws!

I think it wouldn't be that difficult to re-write the bad book series, maybe do a alternate version where it is scientifically correct so Renesmee cant possibly exist, that would be cool.

I think it would be way awesome and please leave a टिप्पणी दे on my response when it's up on fanfiction.net.

And for all people who think S.Meyer is a great writer, please reconsider because personally, I think she should recieve some critism and not be so uptight about it.

JK Rowling and HP 4 Eva!
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 OMG when are आप going to write it? it sounds fantastic. I was considering re-writing it for my enjoyment. I would like to see Bella with some convincing flaws and Edward with some flaws, any flaws! I think it wouldn't be that difficult to re-write the bad book series, maybe do a alternate version where it is scientifically correct so Renesmee cant possibly exist, that would be cool. I think it would be way awesome and please leave a टिप्पणी दे on my response when it's up on fanfiction.net. And for all people who think S.Meyer is a great writer, please reconsider because personally, I think she should recieve some critism and not be so uptight about it. JK Rowling and HP 4 Eva!
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XDDDD Omg. I'm majoring in English, so 'unpossible' cracked me up. I feel like such a dork lol. But yes, I will certainly let आप know. ^-^
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thanks, i really hope आप do it
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