so to add more to the community reviewing instead i shall review the most recent blade posted
@Takeshi_Tsurugi
Over all theme of the blade is pretty cool though it is yet another variation of wolf based blades. Nothing wrong with it just have saw quite a few of these so its a bland idea to me. Again not saying anything against the idea just pointing out my though on it.
As for abilities
Shikai
Ability 1) The two biggest things i am wondering about this ability are The speed the smoke appears and the behavior of the smoke its self. The speed of the smoke appearing makes a decent difference in this abilities effectiveness. If say it fills a 10 cubic foot room in 1 second then it is vastly more effective than if it takes 20 mins to fill the same space. Though its not directly stated i am assuming that the smoke is emitted directly from the knuckle blades which i would like to say adds for a cool looking effect if it were put in pic format. My other question for this ability is the behavior of the smoke. Is the smoke just a visual effect that is tagged to the ability or is the blindness caused by the smoke impeding the vision of the enemy. This may not seem like a difference but the first idea means that the smoke comes out but without it needing to fill any space or get thick enough to impede a vision it can still cause blindness because its not the smoke thats causing the blindness as much as the smoke comes out while your blade makes the opponent blind. And with the second idea for how the smoke works where it is just like a smoke bomb then the opponent could always run out side of the range of the smoke or maybe blow it away with wind or when getting close enough to an object can still see the object just not have as long of a range of vision. The specific way it works should be stated some how and either way it should not eliminate all seances. Though with the degree of sensing of the enemies energy the smoke could also eliminate the ability to seance energy limiting the opponents down to the remaining 4 seances and still not being over powered of an ability.
Ability Two) I think i get the idea of this ability but some clarity is needed. If you think about it any attack that cuts an opponent is doing internal damage equivalent to the external damage. One that does internal damage based on external damage would probably be better paired with blunt force injuries because a bruise isnt as easily preceded as damage to an organ under the skin as a cut is. If maybe you met that when the blades make contact with the opponent it leaves no external wounds and instead hits internal organs under the skin then it would make a little more sence to me but i think the biggest thing that i am wondering on this ability can be clarified with a little more description on what your thinking the attack may look like when it is used on somebody.
Bankai ability one: The key points that need to be defined here are The speed the wolves move at. the power they have (dont need to say they can lift a certain amount of weight or anything just give some form of reference on how much force is behind any form of attack they would use) and how they can be countered. If they are for example solid living wolves that can be killed like normal wolves then at least there is a defined way to counter them or if they are energy wolves that cant be destroyed then their power should be limited some what. Otherwise you have a tank that can be blown up or as i like to call it an I win Button.
Bankai Ability two)Because this mentions that it effects ears im assuming that the attack works on anybody in ear shot and the ones within 5 meters have worse effect. Having said that the maximum distance should be stated for this ability. Though most likly it would only ever be used when someone is within ear shot the possibility that someone is on the edge of its range exists and thus leaves chances that some ppl may not be effected by it if they are not close enough. As its been said the disorientation could be specified a little more but i am assuming that since it is effecting ears the ability causes loss of balance and probably nausea of some sort. Also bleeding from the ears is usually caused by damage to the ears such as busted ear drums so does that mean that anybody within 5 meters of the user has busted eardrums and suffers the side effects of that? Finally what happens if someone cannot hear the attack?
Bankai Ability three) I think this attack is a little unneeded though i get the idea behind it, It seems like something that is already part of the first ability. Really what stops the wolves from dragging weak opponents down and mauling them to death without using this ability? I think it could be replaced with something else that adds something new to the wolves like maybe make them grow stronger and faster or something for the 30 seconds. But if you wish to keep this in as an ability the biggest specification would be what makes it so the wolf can drag the opponent down and maul them. This needs to be stated because as it is its implying that anybody who happens to be caught by it like an uninjured fighter who may even have superior power to the user of this blade can be mauled by a wolf simply because he got garbed by it.
@Takeshi_Tsurugi
Over all theme of the blade is pretty cool though it is yet another variation of wolf based blades. Nothing wrong with it just have saw quite a few of these so its a bland idea to me. Again not saying anything against the idea just pointing out my though on it.
As for abilities
Shikai
Ability 1) The two biggest things i am wondering about this ability are The speed the smoke appears and the behavior of the smoke its self. The speed of the smoke appearing makes a decent difference in this abilities effectiveness. If say it fills a 10 cubic foot room in 1 second then it is vastly more effective than if it takes 20 mins to fill the same space. Though its not directly stated i am assuming that the smoke is emitted directly from the knuckle blades which i would like to say adds for a cool looking effect if it were put in pic format. My other question for this ability is the behavior of the smoke. Is the smoke just a visual effect that is tagged to the ability or is the blindness caused by the smoke impeding the vision of the enemy. This may not seem like a difference but the first idea means that the smoke comes out but without it needing to fill any space or get thick enough to impede a vision it can still cause blindness because its not the smoke thats causing the blindness as much as the smoke comes out while your blade makes the opponent blind. And with the second idea for how the smoke works where it is just like a smoke bomb then the opponent could always run out side of the range of the smoke or maybe blow it away with wind or when getting close enough to an object can still see the object just not have as long of a range of vision. The specific way it works should be stated some how and either way it should not eliminate all seances. Though with the degree of sensing of the enemies energy the smoke could also eliminate the ability to seance energy limiting the opponents down to the remaining 4 seances and still not being over powered of an ability.
Ability Two) I think i get the idea of this ability but some clarity is needed. If you think about it any attack that cuts an opponent is doing internal damage equivalent to the external damage. One that does internal damage based on external damage would probably be better paired with blunt force injuries because a bruise isnt as easily preceded as damage to an organ under the skin as a cut is. If maybe you met that when the blades make contact with the opponent it leaves no external wounds and instead hits internal organs under the skin then it would make a little more sence to me but i think the biggest thing that i am wondering on this ability can be clarified with a little more description on what your thinking the attack may look like when it is used on somebody.
Bankai ability one: The key points that need to be defined here are The speed the wolves move at. the power they have (dont need to say they can lift a certain amount of weight or anything just give some form of reference on how much force is behind any form of attack they would use) and how they can be countered. If they are for example solid living wolves that can be killed like normal wolves then at least there is a defined way to counter them or if they are energy wolves that cant be destroyed then their power should be limited some what. Otherwise you have a tank that can be blown up or as i like to call it an I win Button.
Bankai Ability two)Because this mentions that it effects ears im assuming that the attack works on anybody in ear shot and the ones within 5 meters have worse effect. Having said that the maximum distance should be stated for this ability. Though most likly it would only ever be used when someone is within ear shot the possibility that someone is on the edge of its range exists and thus leaves chances that some ppl may not be effected by it if they are not close enough. As its been said the disorientation could be specified a little more but i am assuming that since it is effecting ears the ability causes loss of balance and probably nausea of some sort. Also bleeding from the ears is usually caused by damage to the ears such as busted ear drums so does that mean that anybody within 5 meters of the user has busted eardrums and suffers the side effects of that? Finally what happens if someone cannot hear the attack?
Bankai Ability three) I think this attack is a little unneeded though i get the idea behind it, It seems like something that is already part of the first ability. Really what stops the wolves from dragging weak opponents down and mauling them to death without using this ability? I think it could be replaced with something else that adds something new to the wolves like maybe make them grow stronger and faster or something for the 30 seconds. But if you wish to keep this in as an ability the biggest specification would be what makes it so the wolf can drag the opponent down and maul them. This needs to be stated because as it is its implying that anybody who happens to be caught by it like an uninjured fighter who may even have superior power to the user of this blade can be mauled by a wolf simply because he got garbed by it.