लेखन Something I just wrote.... Just now.

MetallicarXD posted on Jun 11, 2010 at 12:01AM
Don't let go. Please. For a year, we barely talk; for a day, we're inseprable. How am I supposed to ignore you now? How am I supposed to forget? We never really fit, did we? But I love you... is that wrong? I'm not mad, not angry. My life is neither dark nor swirling. But if you let go, I don't know how long the light will last. I'm scared... so... don't let go.

I'm begging you.

((Urgh, I'm sorry... that was SO bad. Constructive criticsim, please.))
last edited on Jun 11, 2010 at 12:02AM

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एक साल  से अधिक पुराना melikhan said…
i like it,it's emotion and it was good
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना MetallicarXD said…
Thank you! XD
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना jblovesme4ever said…
u ,mmmmmmmmmmmm