ok so this is my first stoy so please टिप्पणी दे and tell me if आप want me to continue and if आप have any ideas it would help.plz.=D
(bellas pov)
I was studying for the dartmouth finals when edward walked in and through my book across the room.the अगला thing i knew he was on चोटी, शीर्ष of me.you study to much he whispered in my ear his lips traced along my jaw and back up to my lips.then there was a knock on the door.go away alice!edward कहा angry.i pushed edward off me and sliped into my defenive crouch. its ok bella its just alice.no its not i कहा through my teeth then the door slamed down.a girl walked in and edward started screaming so i put my sheild around him and he stoped. who are आप and what do आप want!?!i asked hard.my name is चमेली im from olimpia.then i relaxed my crouch because i knew of olimpia.jasmine smiled your from olimpia to right.i nodded im a telapath just like you,am i correct.yes i कहा guilty.edwards eyes were confused and in shock.
(bellas pov)
I was studying for the dartmouth finals when edward walked in and through my book across the room.the अगला thing i knew he was on चोटी, शीर्ष of me.you study to much he whispered in my ear his lips traced along my jaw and back up to my lips.then there was a knock on the door.go away alice!edward कहा angry.i pushed edward off me and sliped into my defenive crouch. its ok bella its just alice.no its not i कहा through my teeth then the door slamed down.a girl walked in and edward started screaming so i put my sheild around him and he stoped. who are आप and what do आप want!?!i asked hard.my name is चमेली im from olimpia.then i relaxed my crouch because i knew of olimpia.jasmine smiled your from olimpia to right.i nodded im a telapath just like you,am i correct.yes i कहा guilty.edwards eyes were confused and in shock.