हे guys, this is my first प्रशंसक fic, i don't think i'm a good writer but i just thought i would try. Also thank आप to Keppie who without her i wouldn't have made half of this story.
Bella's POV
I pulled into my driveway in my old, red Chevy truck, i had, had a very long दिन and i was tired and exhausted, all i wanted to do was go too sleep.
*Flashback*
Edward and his family were all on a hunting trip, leaving me behind with nothing to do all दिन except go to school. Atleast if they all went this was a short trip, so Edward would be घर tomorrow morning when i wake up. I still remember the last thing he said, it replay's in my mind over and over, "I'll only be gone for a day, आप don't need to worry, call me if there is any problems, या if you're worried. I प्यार you." Then he kissed me, it was only a shot kiss, but it was a passionate किस that still left me breathless.
Ahhh i sighed coming out of my दिन dream, i was still sitting in my truck, even though i was so tired, and Charlie would be घर soon i didn't want to go into the house, but i didn't know why. It felt like something was telling me to drive away now, to call Edward and tell him to come घर right away. "Don't be stupid Bella, आप just being paranoid like आप always are when Edward is gone."
I slowly got out of my truck, taking my bag with me in one hand, and in the other i had my mobile phone, i knew it was stupid but it just felt like i should have it near. As i entered my house it felt like someone was in the house, "Hello? Charlie? Are आप there?" I called out, no answer. *Thud, Thud, Thud* I heard slow foot steps coming down the hall towards me. I pressed 1 on speed dial, that was Edward's number. He answered on the first ring. "Bella, are आप okay? What's worng?" He कहा panicked now. "Edward someone is here, in the house!" I almost screamed at him. "Bella, get out of the house now! Go to Jacob's." I couldn't reply, i was so scared. "Bella are आप there?" Edward said. "Edward, I प्यार you" If this was the last time i was ever going to talk to him i wanted him to know.
Edward's POV
"Bella, are आप okay? What's wrong?" I knew Bella wouldn't call me unless it was an emergency. "Edward someone is here, in the house!" Bella sounded so scared, i wish i was there to protect her. Then it sunk in. "Bella, get out of the house now! Go to Jacob's." I knew Bella would be सुरक्षित there until I came back. There was no reply, "Bella are आप there?" I was starting to get really scared that this would be the last time i could talk to her. "Edward, I प्यार you" Just when i was about to say it back, I heard a loud screaming sound coming from Bella. "Bella!" was all i could get through the phone before it went dead, "Beep, Beep, Beep."
"Carlisle, Esme, Jasper, Alice, Emmett, Ros!" I shouted out, they were all here within seconds. "what's the matter Edward?" Carlisle asked me, i could see he was thinking the worst scenario's that could happen. "It's Bella, We have to get back!"
Bella's POV
I pulled into my driveway in my old, red Chevy truck, i had, had a very long दिन and i was tired and exhausted, all i wanted to do was go too sleep.
*Flashback*
Edward and his family were all on a hunting trip, leaving me behind with nothing to do all दिन except go to school. Atleast if they all went this was a short trip, so Edward would be घर tomorrow morning when i wake up. I still remember the last thing he said, it replay's in my mind over and over, "I'll only be gone for a day, आप don't need to worry, call me if there is any problems, या if you're worried. I प्यार you." Then he kissed me, it was only a shot kiss, but it was a passionate किस that still left me breathless.
Ahhh i sighed coming out of my दिन dream, i was still sitting in my truck, even though i was so tired, and Charlie would be घर soon i didn't want to go into the house, but i didn't know why. It felt like something was telling me to drive away now, to call Edward and tell him to come घर right away. "Don't be stupid Bella, आप just being paranoid like आप always are when Edward is gone."
I slowly got out of my truck, taking my bag with me in one hand, and in the other i had my mobile phone, i knew it was stupid but it just felt like i should have it near. As i entered my house it felt like someone was in the house, "Hello? Charlie? Are आप there?" I called out, no answer. *Thud, Thud, Thud* I heard slow foot steps coming down the hall towards me. I pressed 1 on speed dial, that was Edward's number. He answered on the first ring. "Bella, are आप okay? What's worng?" He कहा panicked now. "Edward someone is here, in the house!" I almost screamed at him. "Bella, get out of the house now! Go to Jacob's." I couldn't reply, i was so scared. "Bella are आप there?" Edward said. "Edward, I प्यार you" If this was the last time i was ever going to talk to him i wanted him to know.
Edward's POV
"Bella, are आप okay? What's wrong?" I knew Bella wouldn't call me unless it was an emergency. "Edward someone is here, in the house!" Bella sounded so scared, i wish i was there to protect her. Then it sunk in. "Bella, get out of the house now! Go to Jacob's." I knew Bella would be सुरक्षित there until I came back. There was no reply, "Bella are आप there?" I was starting to get really scared that this would be the last time i could talk to her. "Edward, I प्यार you" Just when i was about to say it back, I heard a loud screaming sound coming from Bella. "Bella!" was all i could get through the phone before it went dead, "Beep, Beep, Beep."
"Carlisle, Esme, Jasper, Alice, Emmett, Ros!" I shouted out, they were all here within seconds. "what's the matter Edward?" Carlisle asked me, i could see he was thinking the worst scenario's that could happen. "It's Bella, We have to get back!"
this is my opinion just to let आप know so I am going to speak out loud and tell आप what I think about Renesme and Jacob,i mean seriously Jacob marked Renesme as a baby so he can marry her I mean really he only did that cause he fell in प्यार with Bella and she married Edward so since he noticed Renesme was exactly like bella he fell in प्यार with her as a baby and that's why he marked her and that's why he married her that's what I think I watched the ending and all that with Jacob and Renesme and Belle and Edward on thye समुद्र तट with Renesme holding Jacobs hand cause they just married that was crazy that he married her anyways, that's my opinion thx for reading!!!!!!!