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हे do आप like this poem i did about alice and jasper's love?

these two were insepreable
the trust and प्यार in his eyes
made her feel सुरक्षित
when she smiled
it brightened his दिन
the thrill of the adventure
the adventure of प्यार
was making alice and jasper
fall ever so passionetly inlove
प्यार is like the wind
आप cant see it
but आप can feel it
प्यार folowed jasper and alice
because they were destined for eachother

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TEAM-EDWARDxxx said:
I Like it...

But is okay i guess.. maybe sum और stuff bout like वैंपायर haha that would be interesting..
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आप could just go to the request a peom सवाल and say that u kno! but thanx! for the tip
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Little_Cullen said:
प्यार it. Punctuation a bit funny, but the actual लेखन is really cool. I especially like the bit about he makes her feel सुरक्षित and her smile brightens his day. I प्यार it. Keep it up!
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thank-u so much
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twilightgirlNo1 said:
i think its great but some of the lines could be a little better.
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twilight0girl said:
it's a perfect poem about them.
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it's a perfect poem about them.
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Twilightpup said:
Its really good , आप should make one about Bella and Edward
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emilyemmett said:
That is really good!! आप should write another one!! Maybe about the meadow या Jacob and Renesmee या something!
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sessa123 said:
Its not bad, i always thought a poem used to jus have to rhyme but narr its really gud maybe fix up some little thing and maybe have a good thing to rhyme bout, like werewolves, वैंपायर anything लोल KEEP IT UP HUN XX
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zXwolfgirlXz said:
aww i like it

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Brysis said:
It´s cute ♥
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LovelyDragon said:
Ya, I like it. Some of the lines could be a little better, but it's really cool. :)
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