This one is in Heavenly's POV, but the अगला chapter will be in Jake's POV. hope आप like it! :)
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chapter six
i was woken up द्वारा Jake's insanely loud horn. my eyes burst open to see Jake leaning on the हुड, डाकू of his Rabbit in the parking lot. i opened the window,
"Jake, i'm not even dressed yet!" i yelled out the window. my mom was at work द्वारा now so no worries.
"i got time." he कहा and smiled. i smiled back and went to get ready for my first दिन at school.
first i brushed my teeth, combed my long, wavy, brown hair out. i got dressed in a thermal...

chapter three


"Now heavenly i don't know how nessie is gonna react to seeing आप on my side." he warned me, i didn't care.
"is that what आप call her?.... nessie? well maybe we could be friends."
"i doubt it. anyways, this house is filled with vamps. there is: bella, you've seen her. her husband, edward. there is alice, edward's sister and Jasper who is edward's brother. alice and Jasper are married too."
"eww! didn't आप just say they were both edward's siblings?"
"uh.... no they are adopted."
"oh, ok sorry. keep goin'."
"ok umm.... Edward will be the prettiest of them all. Alice will be the...

chapter two
sorry, it took sooo long. i was buisy. hope आप like it :)!

i heard a knock at my door that afternoon. i ran to go open it,
"hey Jake!" i couldn't hide the fact that i was excited.
"hi heavenly!" he कहा almost as excited as me.
"we should go before my mom ca-"
"HEAVENLY! WHO'S YOUR FRIEND?" i was red with embarrasment.
"uh... ma, this is Jake, Jake, this is my ma." i introduced them.
"HEY SWEETY!" my mom कहा super loud even though he was standing right there.
"hi, mrs. Paulmero, it's a pleasure to meet you!" Jake was really polite.
"you know you're very handsome-"
"MOM! WE'RE LEAVING NOW."...

Thank आप for पढ़ना the 1st chapter...here's the second, I hope आप enjoy and PLEASE comment!!!


Rosalie's POV

After Edward left I darted deeper into the woods beyond the clearing. There were bears around, I गलाना, पिघलता them. I continued a little deeper into the woods until one of them came into view. I bent down into a crouch and struck at a cub that was in front of me. After I was done with the cub, I heard a scream of agony coming from straight ahead. I followed the sound until I came to a small clearing no bigger than a dorm room at college. In the clearing I saw another bear, probably the mother...

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Rosalie's POV

I was in my room sobbing over my old life and the the fact I will be cold and hard forever. A knock at my door broke my thoughts. I quickly pulled myself together and said, "come in." The door opened wide enough to revel Edward, my brother for all intensive purposes. Edward was tall and always looked to have a sadden, i'm going to hurt आप if आप say the wrong thing to melook on his face. His hair stuck up every which a way, people we...